I Have Been Polluted by the Restricted Area for Seventy Years

It's a breath of fresh air, and my brain is very interesting. I really want to meet the author and become friends if he can write such an interesting story. This is an optimistic, funny, slightly neurotic and logical book. I sincerely believe that the protagonist is not crazy, but unfortunately after becoming friends with the protagonist, the moment I know his secret, I will be "transformed" into a madman and then commit suicide in order not to hurt him, or he will kill me out of self-preservation. It is a pity that I cannot be a friend of such a person. He is lonely in his heart, full of distrust of strangers, and firmly believes that only a madman who doesn't even have a body can keep secrets. At the same time, he has a strong interest in mysterious and novel things like me. Unfortunately, I don't have his rational mind. I am very much looking forward to his story.

Generally speaking, the plot of this novel is innovative, and the writing is basically stable and above the standard. It can be regarded as a good guarantee for good grass, and there is hope for future fairy grass. New readers have a vague feeling about the main text. Most of the protagonists and supporting characters have little emotional description, focusing on verbal actions and descriptions of thoughts. If you scan through the lines at a glance, it will be difficult to get their motivations. The description of the internal logic of the characters is extremely simplified, especially the author's personal writing characteristics: sentence breaks are very uncomfortable, making it difficult to immerse in reading. This divides the reader's attention to the information in the article, and it seems that they have missed a few chapters of the plot without paying attention. It's not that this description is not good. Judging from the setting of the protagonist pretending to be a normal person, you even very successfully highlighted his irrational logic - There is no emotional transition, fast forwarding directly to killing the enemy, and then pretending to be reasonable and coy to others afterwards, which greatly increases Li Ming's inhuman purity, causing empathy to fail to catch up with the sense of separation, and can only make the readers shout at the end of the chapter that he is indeed the man who has polluted the forbidden zone for seventy years (×). However, this is also the failure. The crazy atmosphere and the protagonist are well rendered, but this writing style is very awkward when applied to the supporting characters... The purpose of the supporting characters is not to be ruthless and sentimental. In addition to the external expression of emotional logic, which should be human nature that ordinary people can understand, the internal emotional motivation must also be written. After all, if the reader's empathy for the protagonist cannot be improved, the supporting characters can no longer stretch the hips. Well, this is just what one family says. I hope the author can write better and better. I really like Li Minghe's story. Qiuqiu, at least change your habit of magical sentence breaking. It's really uncomfortable to read ()

Full subscription support, come on, it looks good. There are just a few, I want to keep them but I'm afraid they will die

At the beginning, it felt like a wasteland style. Why is it so inconsistent to immediately become the chairman when you arrive in the city? Although a gathering place must have basic economic operations, your background in the world is destined to not be able to do this kind of daily life, okay?

When a monster polluted by reason walks out of the restricted area Unreasonable or reasonable Ticket No. 104, Funeral City and Tomb, Humanity and Madness Who is a human, who is more like a human Behind the answer is a more secret mystery Is the extreme of madness the reason? What does the restart ring restart Does the madness factor correspond to destruction or rebirth What do the chess players seek It's all there—— "I don't seem to understand"

I have read more than a hundred chapters. Let me give you a brief summary. Let me talk about the overall impression first: the basic creativity is good, but the writing is really not good... The biggest problems are three points: The first point is that there is a problem with the plot logic, especially the chapter plot. For example, in the previous chapter, I was still saying that this is not possible, and the next chapter will be fine. I also looked at the follow-up, and I am sure that the author has not It's not a foreshadowing, it's just that I forgot to connect the previous text when writing it. Insufficient writing leads to a sense of tearing in the chapters, and the feeling when reading is that the overall plot is incoherent... The second point is the most affecting the perception, that is the issue of self-creation. It is good for an author to have his own unique creativity, but self-creation requires a basic logical problem, that is, it must fit your plot! There is a big problem here. It is better for western fantasy themes to have English names in the majority for a better look and feel. The most serious thing is that the names of self-created skills should be in line with commonly used or popular ones. For example, what is the alien system? Borrowing foreign objects? Wouldn't it be more fluent with foreign objects? Including various energy levels and levels. To put it bluntly, the author borrowed the mysterious board, and later wanted to escape from the shadow of the mysterious. The skill names he created by himself were not good enough and were neither nice nor popular. In the end, they all looked different. To be honest, the main plot idea is yours. It's not a problem to learn from the basic settings of excellent works! Don't forget to create your own skills... For example, it's okay for Mortal-style works to learn from the basic skills of mortals cultivating immortals... Since you have borrowed them, it's better not to make some fancy ones yourself... The third point is still a plot issue, but it refers to the details derived from the plot outline. In the early stage, it was basically the same, but the more details were written later, the more details were required, including group portraits of characters, group portraits of monsters, etc., And the author has more than a hundred chapters of the outline. It has begun to fall apart. The details are too poor. The characters and protagonists are not standing up at all, let alone the villains and monsters. It is written completely casually... You can understand from the sharp decline in subscriptions after it was put on the shelf... To put it bluntly, the writing is still not enough. I suggest the author to read more writing-related books. The creativity is quite good, but the writing needs to be improved... This is a eunuch, I hope the author can have better results next time

Come on, author, this is the first book that I am willing to spend some 💰💰 to read and support 🥺🥺🥺

Beautiful, I like it very much! GKD updated!

Very nice, I really love this book

Isn't this plot very simple? The protagonist at the beginning may be dead, or he may be the guardian of this restricted area, or he may be assimilated with the city at the end of the world. It is similar to the setting of another book, The Fire Stealer. The protagonist may be the most special existence in this kind of city. The protagonist mentioned that he is an outsider as if to say it to the three intruders. I can't understand the plot. Oh my god, the novel is well written and the setting is not bad. I'm really confused. High school students can at least understand it. I can't understand how you went to high school and how did you take the college entrance examination?

Either I'm crazy or you're crazy

Come on, author, you must maintain your level. I have been reading online novels for thirteen years, and I hope I can continue to work hard. This book is not suitable for people with no reading ability, but it is very suitable for people like me. The confrontation between rationality and madness, the showdown between wisdom and luck, the power system is not fragile, and there is no absolute correlation between talent and strength. I hope the author can continue to improve it and let me see whether rationality covers up madness or madness tolerates everything.

I don't understand it, I don't know why

This book is very interesting, and it is the biggest treasure in the eyes of old bookworms. After reading novels for too long, I feel a little numb. It is so difficult to find a novel that makes people feel interesting. This allows me to ignore issues such as writing style, because interesting novels make me happy. Interesting does not only mean that the subject matter is interesting, but also that the author has carefully laid out the outline and filled in the holes. This book cannot be skipped. It is very comfortable to read if you can understand the author's intention. Of course, it will be very comfortable if the author's writing style is strengthened. The messenger is the part where the novel takes off, come on, it's your chance to become a god. Because I haven't read Hongyue very much, the protagonist setting of this book is really interesting to me. It's like watching the Time Stop series for the first time. Even if the headlights are small, I usually won't jump and watch them at normal speed because of the novelty. You all understand.

This book is very good, very appetizing, and the writing is very interesting. I very much support the author's way of writing, because for an old bookworm like me, this kind of book with interesting enough writing and long reading is worthy of appreciation. But it can be expected, because the fast-paced reading method at the current starting point is not very consistent, poor performance is expected, and even if it does not reach a certain number of words, it will be difficult to improve. To be honest, I hope the author can persist, because there are fewer and fewer books to read. But in things like life, it's hard for everyone to get everything they want. ——Come on. Monthly tickets for monthly subscriptions and rewards are provided. Encourage each other.

I've never met anyone more unlucky than his pen pal. It was not good to pick anyone, but he was chosen. It's really as bad as grandma's house. The probability of one in a million also made him pick it. 😆😆

For free, come to Qidian to support the author. It has been opened automatically. You can figure it out!

I wish you a speedy recovery. It's so beautiful. I'll follow it every day. Come on!

"Messenger, the hearse (Bus No. 104) Is ready." "Okay, goodbye then." "Well, pay attention to safety on the road." "It feels so quiet. There are no federal people on the streets of Mianyue City, which is really different from the manor." "Yeah, probably all the main combat forces are there. Just transfer it away." "But that's not important anymore." "You are in a good mood." "Of course, everyone can be saved. The manor is also working hard." "Yes, that's true. Everything we have accumulated. The tree is big, and it will be in the future, as long as we don't stop, the road will continue to expand." (Trying to escape from the restricted area) (Start 5 soul hunts at the cost of soul and personality) "Ah——" (The first hunt failed) "Ah——" (The second hunt failed) "Bang bang bang——" (The third hunting begins) "Messenger, what are you doing, messenger." "Humph, uh-ah——Bang-bang bang——" (The third hunting is followed by the fourth hunting in a row. The reincarnation of hunting) "Uh-bang-ah——" (What, my reincarnation is quite accurate) "Zizizizi————" (I was frightened and started the fifth round of hunting) "Humph——humph———— What?" "Messenger." "■■■, why did you make that sound?" "Because--" "I am Midnight Village. Seat No. 14, A great messenger, it doesn't matter." "It's your duty to protect me." > "But——" "That's enough, hurry up and use it as bait for me, ■■■■■■... Waiting for you to attract firepower, and...■■■, I finally understand, we don't need a final place to stay at all, just Just keep moving forward, as long as you don't stop, the road will keep extending." "■■■■■■,■■■■■■■■■■■" "Yes, I understand" (Memory) " Because I won't stop. As long as you don't stop, there will definitely be me in front of you." ⺰ʷʷｨ █◣▄██◣ ◥██████▋ ◥████ █▎ ███▉ █▎ ◢████◣⌠ₘ℩ ██◥█◣\≫ ██◥█◣ █▉█▊ █▊█▊ █▊ █▋ █▏ █▙ █ stop it! "So, don't stop!"

This book is recommended for old bookworms. This book really touched my g-spot. The difference between Red Moon and Red Moon is that the protagonist of Red Moon is a monster lurking in the heart of a human being, while the protagonist of this book is a monster imitating a human being. The writing and plot are not held back.

Although I have not continued reading at Qidian, 1, I am one of the users who will pay. 2. I like the author's book very much. I won't necessarily read it at Qidian but I will subscribe to Qidian (why do I have fan points before it is on the shelves?) 3. I believe that there are still some users like me, and all authors can have some confidence 😁 4. I learned about this book on a certain WeChat official account, which is quite popular. The author can trust himself. As long as he writes well, he will still receive feedback 😁. In addition, let me talk about the shortcomings that I feel now. The most obvious shortcoming is the level. The classification of levels is a bit confusing. It includes both personality, energy levels and abilities. The author may think about it again. Then there is the issue of the fog of war. I am quite fascinated by the whole world view. I personally feel that the overall tone is not as straightforward as Hongyue's sentence "Everyone is crazy". In general, I personally feel that it is quite good, above the overall level (although it is still far from the top). This statement may be a bit confusing, because I am playing the online class in the background 😢 Come on, author

"Do you believe in nightmares" "I admire the first person to ride in the hearse (Bus No. 104)". Because I might be sent to the forbidden area The manor, when I get the hang of it I will definitely scatter letters (from the forbidden area) all over the world The world will eventually be It will be full of love and peace (referring to the crazy factor)" "People will eventually reach the level of mythology" "One last time" "The nightmare is about to accelerate" "Route 104 Handover Messenger Pen Pal Reincarnation Town Incarnation Forest Laboratory No. 13 Xiao Ling Prisoner Project Dream Island Mysterious Forest Midnight Manor The words stop here Made In Heaven In the name of the great messenger, I command you to retreat

I like it so much! The crazier the protagonist is, the more he likes it! Looks so comfortable! So excited, come on author⊙▽⊙

The writing is very good, and to reiterate, this book, including Red Moon, is not a lunatic. They are all very good invincible flows. The psychosis flow has no strength in setting and relies entirely on the author's ingenuity.

Fully booked and also pursuing Red Moon, please share your thoughts, not suggestions. The writing style and imagination are quite attractive, but I feel that the constant changing of the map will make readers lose a sense of involvement, especially when the surrounding supporting characters keep changing. I originally thought that Thor and Black Dog would be permanent characters, but now it seems that this is not the case. The plot of the manor is a little rushed, because when you enter this plot, you suddenly need to change the map, and the supporting characters are also changed. The protagonist plays a different personality. It feels like reading a different book. If the subscription rate really increases, it may be because of theft prevention. In fact, after the courier dies, it would be much better to go back to Lingcheng for a period of daily life before opening a new dungeon. Hongyue's side is not always playing dungeon after dungeon outside.

I've voted for you with all my monthly recommendation votes, and I've been pursuing subscriptions. Please update! The setting of this book is novel, the writing is fluent, and the refreshing points are endless. It is non-toxic for old bookworms to read it. The only shortcoming is the update. The quality of the book is very good. The problem is that it is too short. The standard two chapters are updated every day, which is heart-wrenching! The author writes boldly, and as long as it is updated, it is easy to make it a high-quality article. Please update!

It will be on the shelves tomorrow. Come on💪

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Can I add some essence?

Updated two years ago, huh? Is there really no update? After watching the beginning, I thought it was quite interesting.