Start a Tokyo Night Walk with Kappa

The book is very good, and it is an Onmyoji fanfic. It draws on information about shikigami in it, but does not use the plot of the Onmyoji game. The specific type can be said to be the comprehensive category of light novel, native fantasy, and game system. This is a well-written novel and very readable. I read the updated chapters in one breath and am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Great support for the author! !

It can be seen that the author is based on some of the monsters in Onmyoji, but in fact the monsters in Onmyoji are only Japanese monsters. If you want to expand the layout, I recommend the author to buy a book called Hyakki Yakō, which is an illustrated book describing Japanese monsters, similar to the Chinese Book of Mountains and Seas.

I personally think that the subject matter of this novel is quite good. From the introduction, you would think that this is a novel with transformation as the highlight. But after looking at more than 70 pictures, I found that I couldn't stand it anymore. I found that the characters in it were either made up or made up of various mistakes. Yes, you said it's enough to do it once in a while, but it's in almost every chapter. I and even most other readers were very irritated when I read it. I can see that the author wanted to make it a highlight, but too much was counterproductive. If I'm not wrong, I guess some people will be able to persevere. It's because of the highlight of your transformation. After all, there are relatively few books like this. But if you don't cherish it, no matter how good the subject matter is, it won't be able to retain most readers. It will only deceive those who are new to novels, and the author will not be able to realize his own shortcomings, because Meng Xin said that good-looking is good-looking. People who have read a little bit of books for a long time can see the "poisonous points" that many readers are talking about. Ruyi, I hope the author still realizes his own shortcomings. After all, it is such a good subject matter. It is a pity not to write well. I have not written such a long book review once or twice. I have visited various major novel websites and have been focusing on reviewing books for six years.

I have one thing to say, I read Chapter 44, the beginning is a good one, the whole chapter can be filled with imagination, filling in other people's dialogues, I am short of money to the point of reporting my classmates, and it is not clear why I take on tasks to make money. Is it because we have a generation gap that I can't understand the protagonist's confusing behavior? Almost all the psychological descriptions of the dialogues of the characters are all about guessing what others mean. No one can understand the literal meaning. How come everyone is so delicate and considerate? It's terrible, especially when everyone's "understanding" is wrong. They ask questions and answer questions. What is the source of human confusing behavior? Don't deliberately imitate Japanese dramas and exaggerate the plot. It's easy to get tired of aesthetics. If you take a closer look at the characters in the book, you will find that there is only one person in the whole book - a confused human being who is always guessing what others say but never guesses correctly, and thus causes various accidents. Is there something I can't say directly? I've gone round and round, so I won't write it down. The more I talk about it, the more uncomfortable I feel about this book (눈_눈)

There is a little question about Qiu Yuexing! First of all, the author, if you read the book review, change it if you can, but don't change it if you can't. Even if this one character affects the entire plot, there will always be people with different personal tastes, who may prefer this book after reading it. Therefore, it is better not to change the outline than to correct it for the sake of more readers. The Qiuyue I saw in the character list is not a heroine in her heart, just a supporting actress. So at most, there will be some criticism of this female supporting role. However, there are some problems with the connection of your plot, but the description of small aspects of comedy is still very interesting and very well written. About Qiuyue's psychology is mainly a matter of personality. Osaka Taiga was influenced by his family environment when he was young, and he has the most powerful family resources in Japan, so for his character. Others will not have any objections. When you set him up, for readers, they will spontaneously compare with their own environment. Therefore, compared to people in real life, even if they know that he is fake, compared to his background, it is completely understandable that he has such a character. But for Qiuyue Xingli in the play, first of all, this is a world of monsters. The weak and the strong will prevail. Although he has a lot of people under his command, he is at the bottom of the demon world anyway. For those who can't be beaten in battle, they have to burn their lives. If you think about it, he is actually not qualified to develop such a character. As mentioned before, there was a great demon in his family's ancestors, but what is the current situation? If his great demon is still there, then he will not be in this situation. If it is not there, what qualifications does he have to maintain such a character. You should want to imitate Fengban Dahe and set up such a cute tiger in the palm of your hand. Its prototype is set as a multi-tailed cat. It can be said that it is very suitable. But in order to fear that the plot will collapse, it should be made unacceptable to the protagonist. So you plan to set it up for a middle-income family. This is more suitable for the protagonist's initial approach. But you can't have both. From the above, he should belong to the lower level of the demon world, close to the middle level. But it still belongs to the lower class. Probably more powerful than those little demons who live alone. Because of his background, he naturally has a higher level of vision, and is completely dismissive of the middle-level monster forces that come to snatch his family's land. This is understandable, but at this time, he met the forces in Zengcheng that he had originally dismissed, and happened to meet a powerful protagonist, just like the troubled Bai Fumei in reality, and then met a powerful protagonist. The protagonist rescued her... During this period, there were still some positive images about her, such as heroic sacrifice and so on. But the merit is not worth the effort! The impression you have left on your readers is truly terrible. For readers who read books, the sense of involvement of the protagonist is very important. If the protagonist is weak, then the heroine has a bad character, but if she has strong power, it is still acceptable. If the protagonist has strong strength, the heroine thinks that being submissive is not enough. At this time, she can resist, but she can have a bad character, but not too bad. It needs to be just right. And now you are writing about a situation where the protagonist is very powerful. The character of the heroine is too bad. The most important thing is that the protagonist is treated like an ant, which gives readers a bad sense of empathy. Maybe you can modify it a little bit. A little more comprehensive and three-dimensional. It's like saying something with your mouth but being honest with your body. Last point: If you, the author, have the ability to change it, then make it. If you can't, then don't change it. Although the current situation is mixed, the good situation is still in the majority. Come on!

Comment simply and see the latest places. The book is good, the writing is also good, the setting is also good, it is a very interesting book. . . The big problem is none of my business, but I will complain about three minor issues. Firstly, can there be less confusing skill names in battles, especially giving the villains a bunch of skill names? This book is an invincible book, and it does not need to be fancy to that level and then the male protagonist has to toss for a long time before killing the opponent. Of course, if the author is just for the sake of word count, I didn't say that. Secondly, tragic memories themselves are something that conflicts with Invincible's writing. Short stories are better, and long and continuous chapters are written about the tragic memories of a certain character. This conflict is not small with the setting of Invincible, the male protagonist. For example, the nose can make him The story is divided into five, six, seven or eight plots, instead of a series of tragic plots that are indirect in Invincible. It is as if all the previous stories are just a passerby, and then after a few chapters, it goes through ups and downs and ends with a passerby. This is really strange. Thirdly, Onmyoji is an old and semi-popular game. Is it okay to spend some time inserting the original set skill cards (or at least write down the second set skills clearly)? When I see the abilities in the book, do I still need to go to the next Onmyoji to see what the specific corresponding abilities are? Everyone must not care about details or must be an extremely experienced player of Onmyoji, otherwise they are not worthy of reading this book? The above comments are based on the background of a good book. They are only my personal subjective complaints, so they are not of any reference. Above.

Write some thoughts about this book (I originally just wanted to talk about Xingli in a post, but I wrote too much, so I can only post it in the comment area and briefly talk about other issues) I don't know the reasons why others are annoyed by Xingli, but there are several reasons why I don't like her. One is the rhythm of the plot, one is about the relationship between Xingli and the protagonist, and the other is the tsundere section that the author made me feel very embarrassed. Let's talk about the rhythm of the plot first. The protagonist is obviously very strong. The association and the monsters do not treat the protagonist as a force or anything, but more like a natural disaster that cannot be resisted. I feel really happy writing it like this (after all, we are novices, just read a book and have fun), but you don't directly let Xingli say that the big monster is very strong and the protagonist can't afford it, and even advise him to hide and so on. In fact, she is right to say this, and it can also show her good side, but the problem lies in her saying this. Writing like this makes me feel that the rhythm is wrong and makes me feel uncomfortable. For example, you just said that the protagonist has a Ph. D. From Tsinghua University, Peking University or Niubanjin, and has developed very powerful things. Then the supporting character next to him who doesn't know anything and has been heavily shaped by the author told the protagonist that xxx is among the top few (not the first) in the college entrance examination in xx province and has a promising future, so the protagonist should not mess with him. There is no problem with logical thinking or the author's character creation, but it makes people dislike this character very much. This can only be said to be a problem with the author's plot rhythm. Secondly, I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and Xingli is a bit far-fetched. Although it is well-intentioned, it is annoying, just like a mother repeatedly telling you and a stranger telling you repeatedly. The former is annoying but I understand the mother's worry, while the latter starts to be regarded as well-intentioned but feels like it is nosy. Personally, I suggest you try to deepen the relationship between the two of them. It should no longer be such an unclear relationship. It is too shallow to say that it is a classmate, and it is too deep to be a benefactor. It is embarrassing to be neither good nor bad. Then the description of the tsundere made me feel very embarrassed. To be honest, I really couldn't stand what the author wrote. If other aspects were not good, I would have given up on this book. If you really don't know how to write a tsundere, then practice more, but don't practice with a supporting character like Xingli who requires a lot of effort to create. This will not only be uncomfortable for us to watch, but also uncomfortable for you to write. Can you practice with a small character who only appears in some chapters, instead of using a character like Xingli? After writing the big deal, make a side story or directly add it to the supporting role. If the writing is not good, just leave the scene and change characters to continue practicing. This way you can also see readers' feedback on your improvement in writing. Then there are other issues I want to talk about. Too many misunderstandings, too many misunderstandings, too many misunderstandings. First of all, I want to say that there are not too many misunderstandings in words, but there are too many misunderstandings about the protagonist's weak abilities. I feel that we need to appropriately improve the ability of others to misunderstand the protagonist. We should not misunderstand the protagonist's parents to the same extent. A little is fine, but more is really annoying. But don't be too high. After all, it's boring to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger if you are too strong. And don't be afraid of the routine being too old. The routine is not afraid of being old, but it is too repetitive and too routine. This mainly depends on the individual's writing style. As long as the writing is good, you are not afraid of the routine being too old. To be specific, it is like the hero saving the beauty in the movie. This routine has been used for many years, but some people still like it. The above are some of my personal feelings. I don't know whether they care or not. I hope they can be of some help to the author. If not, just take it as my personal complaint. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was quite attractive, so I came in, but I felt it was a bit deceptive. At the beginning, it was mainly about Onmyoji, and the transformation into monsters didn't make much sense. I initially thought that the protagonist, as a human, didn't have much ability to use the power of monsters to play his role and then advance the plot. It was very different from what I imagined.

It's not good here, it's not good there, it's not honest to read every chapter 🤫

The subject matter of this book is great, thank you to the author.

Come on, author. I've only read a few chapters so far, and from the characters and writing style, I can tell it's a cute new author. It's too slow to get to the point and the beginning is too cumbersome. In some places, explanations can be made simpler. There is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on

How many chapters does the author update in a day and when?

I just came to the client and tried the waters, and then I was perfectly paced by the paragraph comments in the novel. The more I read, the more I felt that it was a stick. It is recommended to turn off paragraph comments when watching.

In fact, I also think that this kind of novel should not be too overly emotional. Both the fiancée and Catwoman are too dependent on each other, and the drawing of cards is a bit exaggerated. Also, as the author, do you come from romance novels?

I hope the author can be more mature in his writing style, emotional processing and thinking. He should refuse what should be rejected, and don't procrastinate, which will make people very irritated. The plot should also be handled more harmoniously, come on.

Come on, author, I rarely see such good grass.

The book is good, but it's not suitable for me...

It looks great, come on! 👍

Haha, the author's first one is interesting. At the beginning, the ghost girl Hongye is a real cross-dressing boss 😜😜. She is also very calm when encountering Goldfinger. It is not like other novels where she is like a country bumpkin, who is so shocked that she is not willing to give up. I have collected this book, hahahaha, fatten it up and kill it

It's pretty, although it's very niche, but it's very well written. I still hope the author can update it faster.

See for yourself

As for me, I don't have any big requests, I just hope you don't write too badly

I'm so excited, I rushed in to read all 3 chapters.

I started with about 2 I started chasing Chapter 30. Every day after get off work, I turn on my computer to see if this book has been updated. Reading this book makes me feel like I am looking at reality. Is there anyone whose life is "smooth sailing"? I often shed tears involuntarily while reading, reading the characters in the book. You can be happy or angry about some things. I really feel that the characters in this book are flesh and blood. This book really needs to be savored slowly and carefully. Once you savor it carefully, you will really shed tears without realizing it.

I feel that this protagonist should just be an invincible novel... I know that I am very strong, so many meteorites can defeat Tokyo Lu Shen, but I am still worried about this and that... I feel that I am not a cautious and brave type, but a pretending to be confused because I understand, which is too deliberate... Well, there is also the heroine Qiuyue, who is too tsundere, and tsundere is not brainless. You can watch the previous anime "Dragon and Tiger" Aisaka Taiga is used to compare and shape... Moreover, there is no main plot. The protagonist can become stronger by playing games, so why does he transform into a monster? He is not the type to be the mastermind behind the scenes. He thinks about making some money all day long, and actively gets involved in the turmoil. The logic is a bit unreasonable. If there are great benefits to transforming into a monster to cause trouble, then it is okay to say, but with that little experience, it is not as good as a monster in the game.

Ssr: Earth Spider, Slippery Ghost, Nue, Nine Tails, Feathered Fox. sr: Jijizo, Kidomaru, Night Sparrow, Kurokawabo, Qingtianbo, Sumo, Mad Bones, Wild Skeleton, Zashiki, Ushiki.

Emmm I just remembered the abilities used by the monsters in the article Especially in the battle part of the Kappa Except for the water bomb and the song of the river I can think of so many water skills I am deeply impressed I wonder if the author would worry about the effect of the skills I couldn't help writing it Suggestions: 1. You can find the skills corresponding to shikigami from "Jukyo" (please forgive the description here as shikigami instead of monsters) and use this as inspiration to come up with more skill effects 2. You can find the corresponding shikigami skills from "Baiwen Pai" and use this as inspiration to come up with more skill effects.

Inspired by this book, I finally started to write my own novel. I stumbled and developed a new writing style. I hope I can finish it. See you again.

Why are there so many cautious and courageous novels these days? The problem is that many of them are no longer cautious, but nonsense. They don't understand the situation at all. They don't ask questions clearly and just rely on their imagination (*￣m￣). I'm really speechless.

I accidentally opened it in the browser and thought it was finished. After reading a few chapters, I thought it was quite interesting. So I looked at the update section and found that it was still being serialized. It was very uncomfortable 😭. I hope the author will post more updates. Come on ＾0＾~