When I Made the Spear of Adon

Poor communication is the root cause of misunderstanding. I also hope that the author can put himself in someone else's shoes and stop making the protagonist look so dull and selfish. The emotional scene between the male and female protagonists you wrote is indeed a bit awkward. The male protagonist lives a new life. Can't you tell that Qingmei likes you? Even if you can't tell, there was a misunderstanding between the two, but after that, they just stopped communicating with each other. Don't you think it's too heartless? The protagonist knew about Tanji nb, but no one else knew about it. The heroine thought so much about the hero without knowing it. Any fool would know why. Moreover, the heroine was hurt by the hero in public. She was very angry and aggrieved. She compromised first and went to the hero to change his life-long fw situation. However, the hero simply refused to accept such a solution. Don't you know how to use your brain to be more tactful? Elder brother! Think about it for a moment, if the identities of the male and female protagonists were swapped, would the male protagonist be able to achieve the same level as the female protagonist? I'm afraid that for the sake of my own face, I can't take the initiative to go to the hotel to find the heroine to give in and tell her a solution. Then I didn't contact the heroine in the end, nb. Summary: Don't read literary books like Fireworks, you're a literary boy! Anyway, I was very interested in your novel at the beginning, but the subsequent plot feels like you are just trying to feed me daddy. It is unnecessary. Life is so bitter, so why torture it when you can make it sweeter?

In fact, I think the author's writing is pretty good, come on

I thought it was the violent technology summon flow. I watched it for a long time. . Dress up as a pig and become a pig academy upgrade stream. . For more than sixty chapters, I am still playing house with my senior classmates. . . I directly took the subway to the old man's mobile phone. This feeling is beyond imagination 😐😐

Give up your childhood sweetheart, a person who denies everything about you without even asking why. This woman just thinks of pig's feet as... Accessories are optional. Don't tell me to wait until I become stronger. Here to help you. People are the most fickle. Unless you are a very stubborn person. Most people are fickle. The way that woman and pig's feet get along has been formed. Pig's feet are not as good as my thoughts. No matter how successful the pig's feet are. It was also denied in her heart. Pig's feet and the heroine have different starting points. The circles are also different. There is basically no intersection. Pig's feet use an unknown summoned beast. It is not favored. 'If pig's feet rise strongly. It will definitely be coveted. Kill genius, that world doesn't have it. Even without her woman, the trouble caused to her is not small. Pig script himself lives a low profile in school and is hated by so many people. You can say that you don't show your hands behind your back, but who will believe you? Pig's feet has always been an apprentice and it's okay. Once you rise, your back will come. So that woman is a disaster. The pig's feet are being tortured from beginning to end. I suggest the author find a backstage or a thigh for the pig's feet. If you don't have thighs, I think you'll collapse.

Emotional dramas make me feel sick to my stomach. They are arrogant and so on. In reality, not many people like this kind of personality. The most popular ones are passionate, gentle and dignified girls.

If you want to see something like the explosive invincible golden fleet, you can just leave. There is no such thing. You can only watch how a probe slowly upgrades to Chacha, then to Dragon Knight, and then to Immortality. I guess this will be Chapter 4.500.

If you write this book like this, it will be a shame. The title of your book is "The Spear of Adun". People who come to read it are expecting the protagonist to create the "Spear of Adun" instead of the stinky and long process of accumulating resources. Otherwise, don't start with such a title. People who come in after seeing the introduction of your book feel that something is wrong after two chapters and will definitely leave. People who want to see this kind of slow farming will definitely not click in after reading your book title.

The setting is interesting, but I couldn't accept the plot, so I slipped away.

The protagonist treats the heroine like this? Don't even care? Are you afraid that once the male protagonist grows up, the heroine's children will be spoiled?

Tsundere usually only has arrogance but not coquettishness. In fact, tsundere just says something nice, and if it doesn't sound nice, it just means being arrogant and domineering.

The first point is that the background and psychic abilities don't match. The academy is poisoning me. Is this how Tan Ji is used? Only by going out to find mines and exploiting violent soldiers can we have the resources to develop a fleet. Is it a waste of time in the academy? There is no personality data of the protoss hero in the Detective Database. Do you have to use the fork yourself? A civilization that cannot even enter the outer world on a large scale, even if it is extraordinary, is not enough to stay. Quickly complete the initial startup in the academy, and quickly complete the mineral exploration in the safe zone under the protection of the academy. You need more forks to maintain the mining area, and you need more resources to advance the starry sky, instead of showing off the power of psychic energy in front of your classmates. The original transcendence can only tremble under the golden fleet, and their weak warriors can only wail under the light blade of the protoss. Light up the Light Blade Warriors!

The selling point of this book is first of all the Protoss. Anyone who has played StarCraft knows that Protoss can burn glass. I believe most people here come here to read it for this reason. Moreover, the development is too slow. When the Spear of Adon comes out, it will be over in about 400 chapters. Also, this is a book about StarCraft. Many people want to see the results of the explosive soldiers. You have reached chapter 60 or 70 and you are fighting alone. I don't want to say more. I hope the author can work hard.

Please cut out the middle process. What we want to see is what happens after the Spear of Adon is made, not the middle process. We wanted to see the Arden Armada instead of the outcome of Arden, which would have ended the title of the book. If you upgrade like this, the world probably won't be able to upgrade.

I want to know how the author came up with such a good setting and such an uncomfortable plot 😰

Chapter three persuades him to quit. . The old bookworm can't read it. . Dude, what kind of mythical beast is this? Is a little girl from a small village so willful? I thought he was the rich second generation of some aristocratic family.

Even if the supernatural beings in this world can destroy stars, they are nothing under the iron hooves of the Star Spirits. The Star Spirits have burned too few glass balls. This is the crushing of civilization levels and it can develop into this. You can only say that the protagonist (author) is too much in love and is delirious. You said that he has explosive combat power but he cannot descend to the earth. Is it possible that this kind of extraordinary academy can have extraordinary summoners all over the world staring at the land to prevent mining? It's funny, productivity has not been liberated, so what are these natives using to mine, noble summoners? Find a corner to directly mine your own body and hang out in the academy. As long as you can contact Tan Ji, don't worry about it. During the day, you can go back to the dormitory to study in school and coordinate technology or development policies. In this way, you can continue to show off in school. When your strength is not enough, you can also jump from Tan Ji's base to a powerful unit, mechanical magic, you know.

I wanted to see Protoss Technology's dimensionality reduction strike, but unfortunately it wasn't available. Be patient and watch it develop slowly, but it's a pity that it's all bullshit. Finally, the character design of the pig's feet is too unlikable and fake. There should be no explanation, there should be no hard-nosedness, there should be no compromise, there should be no compromise, there should be no black-heartedness. . . The result is this completely unlikable character and plot. The difficult beginning of the pig's feet in this book was entirely his own doing.

Good-looking equals arrogance, ugly equals arrogant and rude, damn the world, has Qingmei been taken away from her? Or fused with the villain empress? What makes a child change from gentle to arrogant? You, the author, don't explain clearly, I have a headache, 🙂

Low EQ: Author, don't you know how to write emotional dramas and heroines?

I've read more than fifty chapters. The story of the academy is quite good, but I don't know if the author has any preference for female characters. I especially like the tsundere character (not exactly, that's probably what it means). Tsundere character is actually a bit disgusting in reality. What's even worse is the kind that curses people or speaks impolitely. Even if there is an explanation that she actually cares about people, I feel that her behavior is a bit excessive, not to mention the kind that can hit people. It is really a bit poisonous when described in novels. I am not completely denying the role of tsundere. This kind of setting is very common in anime, but this kind of degree is particularly difficult to grasp. Many times when the protagonist meets a girl with this kind of setting, I will probably just think that she is a licking dog who deserves to be scolded (this is my personal understanding of some small poisonous points in the early stage. If what I understand is not different from what the author wants to express, I hope the author will forgive me)

If the Star Spirits can't do it, come to our Human Empire. There is a golden toilet with psychic power for you to sit on