Konoha: Starting from the Roots

Can you stop thinking about going home every day? Go home, go home, go home? After more than ten years of experience, it's time for your heart to grow cold, and it's time to learn to mature, right? If you encounter this dark world just a few days after arriving, forget it and want to go home to find your mother This ruthless world is unbearable for you. Now that you have enough strength, you can do it in any world? Why do you have to go back? As a reader, I can accept that the protagonist travels to other worlds in pursuit of higher power. But it is impossible to accept a weak soul.

The author finds it interesting for any clone to gain self-awareness, but readers have already seen it. This is a poisonous point.

What kind of strength does the protagonist have? The data panel looks very strong, but in the end he can't beat a shadow-level powerhouse. What is a shadow-level powerhouse?

There are dust escape, ice escape, flying thunder god, illusion, and mental control. There are so many things that it turns out that it is difficult to beat anyone. He is already an elite Jonin with Ice Release. If he adds Dust Release, wouldn't it make him super Kage level? You also have the Flying Thunder God and illusion skills, which are all kinds of unpleasant.

I really like dark and cold novels like Anbu. The writing is also good. It has the feel of modern special forces. It would be better if the protagonist is more cold-blooded, not the Virgin.

Good guy, the protagonist was considered to have "white teeth" on his first mission. Author, what do you think White Teeth is, a Chinese cabbage? To be honest, the protagonist's first mission is completely ordinary in the root organization! It's just the most basic qualities a Root Organization ninja should have, no big deal. If you want to write a novel about Jiang Zhi Long Aotian, just say so. Don't write a novel about Long Aotian on one side and realistic style on the other. It will make you feel awkward and angry.

Rubbish, the protagonist is nothing. His strength came too easily. Before he did anything, he went to the sand ninja to steal the forbidden book alone. If you have this ability, you can tell anyone in Konoha. The sand ninja knows nothing about the sand ninja. It is very difficult to go in the desert. To steal the forbidden book that has not been invented yet, Brother Yu injured Chiyo. Haha, facing the sand ninja in the desert, the protagonist cannot fly, and there is no chance of death.

The main plot of this book stagnated after more than 80 chapters, and then the author rambled on and wrote some nonsense plots aimlessly.

Do you feel more than self-pleasure or self-pleasure? ? ? ?

The author's plot fails to grasp the key points, and he doesn't know what readers want to see. Sooner or later, he will be disappointed.

It took so long to fight Zabuza and Haku? ? I've been injured several times, but the injuries haven't had any effect yet. Is this just writing nonsense? The battle in Iwagakure Village was Shiroye's normal level.

How many people skipped chapters like me? I saw chapter 112 and skipped a few chapters. Now I skip chapters 10. . . The protagonist keeps researching and researching. After studying the whole book, I found that the chapters that are not in VIP are more interesting than the VIP chapters. . . .

Playing the piano randomly, Chiyo Ebizo is a puppet master, how can you kill ten people with you? The one who was ridiculously able to resist the Ten-Tails was solved by a genjutsu of yours. Do you dare to pull any further.

It's disgusting to see a clone becoming self-aware

Don't you think what you wrote is like a running account? It just keeps going through the plot without mentioning it.

Found a book with a similar theme but much better plot and characters

Haha, indeed, there is no problem with the idea that the protagonist is a hollow C. Hexagon Warrior has a lot of S skills in his hand, and he will be 50-50 against anyone If the author really doesn't want to fill in the water, I suggest speeding up the boring battle description. After all, I don't even want to read the three chapters of the battle I don't care how the two sides fight, I only know that the protagonist will definitely win Only write down the battles that are risky or uncertain.

The protagonist is Bai Ye. It's a 50-50 game. No matter who he fights, it's a 50-50 game. He won't win even once.

I gave up after controlling Danzo. Even Ao can discover other gods, but Konoha can't? 🤔

I feel that this book is obviously more reasonable and better-looking than other Naruto fan fiction. Why has no one noticed it?

I feel sick when I see the supporting role of Xiang Phosphorus

Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's obviously okay, but why does the author always make the protagonist so useless? Even if he doesn't wear a vest when he goes out, he doesn't even have his own base. He was discovered by Kakashi and Orochimaru. Just watching it makes me feel angry.

I was wondering who would be stronger in a fight between Minato and Fugaku. I saw in that fanfic that Fugaku was on the same level as Minato. Minato's positioning is actually rather awkward, whether he's strong or not, and whether he's weak or not. The Flying Thunder God gives him unparalleled movement speed. But in terms of attack, it's just a Rasengan. Without half a Kyuubi, Minato was honestly not qualified to participate in the Fourth Battle. Fight Fugaku without Kyuubi. As for Fugaku's Schrödinger's Kaleidoscope, if Susanoo and the dynamic vision brought to him by the Sharingan are enough for him to defend, I don't think it's hard to say if there will be a winner in a real fight.

The author doesn't want to write about eunuchs. Too slow

After taking control of Danzo, the plot became more and more boring. It became boring after watching half of it. He worked hard and developed in various ways. He occasionally came out to fight and crushed some miscellaneous fish. Some of them were on the table and could not be killed. There was no shock or slap in the face. It felt like what the hell was the pig's feet doing for so long. The main plot is not clear, and in order to avoid understanding the nature of the hanging tree... I exited the book and took a look, and it turned out to be a eunuch.

He was speechless, getting weaker and weaker. He could beat Chiyo before, but now he was struggling to beat Zabuza and Haku for a long time, and the puppet master was still panting for breath! Even Sakura can defeat Scorpion's defense! Your ice escape has been useless for a long time, so why don't you add some air conditioning? It's really too weakened.

This book is a eunuch! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Are they all gone? The author has not entered the palace for five days.

Starting root seed? How to solve the tongue problem?