I Inherited an Immortal Sect from the Start, and Every Junior Sister Is an Empress

This is a novel that uses the guise of cultivation, romance, and lots of PDA to actually write a business story. I'm outta here.

Shouldn't the author, Xiao Ximo, and the protagonist be uncle and niece? Shouldn't she call him uncle? How could she call him maternal uncle?

I've subscribed and read about 50 or 60 chapters, and to summarize: I personally feel the author is engaging in self-indulgent writing, which is why the comments say it's chaotic. A story of a hero fighting a dragon is cramped with excessive narration, making it feel padded.

The premise is okay, but the writing is a bit messy. And the writing style isn't great. (This is just my personal opinion, please don't be offended.) Maybe it's because I've read too many books by great authors lately. But I still want to thank every author who dares to write. After all, writing skills always improve.

The premise is good, but the writing is terrible.

I'll help you create an outline: The novel is called "My Wives Are All Empresses". The male protagonist's current wife is an empress, and her master was his previous wife, also an empress. Then, after many trials, the male protagonist meets his next wife, who is also an empress who has crossed the void to reach him.

I can't stand it anymore, the main character is disgusting, an idiot.

Luckily I read the comments; I almost got poisoned by it. (Business war novel)

It's all over the place... So many parts require a lot of mental interpretation, it's tiring to watch and completely incomprehensible.

Honestly, you've talked far too much about making money, haven't you? Over a hundred chapters are dedicated to how you make money. You should change the name; don't use this name anymore. Use it for your next book. 😅😅😅