My Talent Is Time Stop

This is completely self-indulgent writing. I don't understand why Chapter Seven required cultivating to the brink of death. It didn't improve the efficiency of obtaining talent fragments, and it even activated the Burning Lamp. Leaving aside whether trading 23 years of lifespan for an F-rank talent is worthwhile, just consider how you can be sure you'll survive after activating the Burning Lamp.

What kind of nonsense is this? It's like they just write whatever they want. Their body is so weak, yet they still complain about the weakest F-level talent. They'll do anything as long as it's useful. Most importantly, the timing is truly arbitrary. His body is so weak, yet a single training session lasts several days? And he still didn't die?

Pshaw, this isn't the kind of time stop I want. 😤

The protagonist's memory is ridiculously exaggerated. He forgot everything in just a few decades? Did Robinson Crusoe forget his own name after drifting for decades? The protagonist is constantly cultivating. How much time could memories possibly take up?

Coming from Tieba, all I can say is how tough it is 😄

Based on the ridicule from those around me after the first few chapters of this light novel, it's destined to flop.

Write the introduction well first, to avoid someone being able to go back 3 days without suffering any harm for 3 seconds...

Damn, this author is phenomenal! He's finished two books, totaling at least 4 million words, and he's still only a level-one author. I can only say he's really not cut out for this job.

The feeling of waking from a dream after countless hours of cultivation, that sudden realization of reality, was quite nice; it was original and well-written. However, to be honest, the rest of the plot was rather ordinary, even melodramatic. Combined with the author's mediocre writing style, it was passable.

I really hate this garrison; let it be destroyed.