Top Luck: Leading the Family to Cultivate Immortality

Pros: The content and plot are good. Disadvantages: Many details and dialogue descriptions are very poor. It is more serious at the beginning and gets better later. The content is inconsistent, and I don't know if it's a problem of not listing the data. The pacing is long and draggy, which is very serious. You only need to read the title of many chapters to understand the content.

Come on, author, this book is so good that I can read it even if I don't sleep at night. I'll give it to you if you have a monthly recommendation ticket. I just sent a red envelope for recommendation votes. 🤭🤭{"TopicId":"575911170507276288","TopicName":"New book recommendation"}{"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}

If there are fewer updates, I'll pay you back. After you finish the game, I'll grab some resources and I'll see how many days it lasts. If there are more updates, you'll just feed me some water. If you give me one page a day, I won't be able to finish a plot in a few months.

A 16-year-old with double spiritual roots can only reach the 4th level. What about cultivators with other spiritual roots? How old do they need to be to reach the 9th level of Qi Refining?

A genius born in the year 800 was allowed to earn his own money to practice. When he went out to do tasks, he was not sent to protect him even in the later stage of Qi training. He only collected two copies of Xuanpin Kung Fu in the year 800 and the protagonist picked up one right after he left home. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, author, you want to laugh me to death.

This is the most nonsense book I have ever read. I actually made myself sick after reading it. It has been more than half a year now and I can no longer pursue it. A lot of nonsense every day. After reading so many novels, this is the only disgusting one I have read. 😓

The book is the same as the Immortal Road of the Master💩, worse than the Peak of Qinglian. The title of the book can be changed to "The First Person of the Golden Core". The protagonist can die in the Golden Core Phase. It is a 4 million-word book. Half of the words are written about the Golden Core Phase. You are also the first person at the starting point. You can compete with the second generation of fishmen to see who has the longest life. I hope you can write 10 million words and still be in the Golden Core Phase.

You beast, you don't even let go of your little sister who is twelve or thirteen years old, but your heart is pounding like a deer, and the blood in your whole body is boiling? ?

The protagonist is having a meal, and his mother looks distressed. I ask you what makes you feel distressed? His mother gave him a storage bag, and he blushed, Why are you blushing? Why does the protagonist have a love story? Every article is full of inner thoughts, why does the protagonist not have a mouth? You still can't write narration

From the beginning of this book to the present, the protagonist has brought benefits to the family. At the beginning, he was awarded three Small Foundation Establishment Pills unilaterally because of the Small Foundation Establishment Pill. He was also rewarded by the protagonist to casual cultivators because of the beast tide. Three Small Foundation Establishment Pills were used for the family. From the Blood Red Alliance to the Tianfeng Secret Realm, a lot of benefits were harvested for the family. Millions of spiritual stones and materials, one person supports a family! ! !

. Make an advertisement, make an advertisement, the family's fairy way seeks truth, and there is a fairy seedling. The author is sorry, but I will give you the monthly pass for next month.

One blow at the seventh level of Qi training can destroy a thousand feet in radius (a land with a radius of seven miles). A distance of 400 miles requires two days of flying with a sword. The Foundation Establishment Pill is worth thirty to fifty thousand spiritual stones. A set of first-level spiritual weapons used by Qi-training monks is worth twenty thousand spiritual stones (the second level is used by Foundation-Establishment monks).

The power of the world of cultivating immortals belongs to oneself, and strength determines everything. The protagonist is gifted with two spiritual roots, and the family encounters it only once in 800 years. As a result, the resources are given by parents and grandfathers. Without the family's policy support and resources, wouldn't it be heavily tilted? There is also the setting of going down the mountain from the fifth level of Qi training. The stronger the talent, the shorter the time it takes to reach the fifth level of Qi training. The mission will be done earlier than the tribesmen with less talent, and the time to enjoy the spirit gathering array will be shorter than the tribesmen with less talent? This should be? The protagonist's family has a dual spiritual root talent that only happens once in eight hundred years. It can be said that there is a high probability of building a foundation. However, he was treated equally and went down to the mountain to garrison at the fifth level of Qi training. Aren't you afraid of being assassinated by other families? Logically speaking, this kind of foundation-building seed has a high talent for alchemy, so shouldn't it be protected and given preferential treatment by the family? Is it unrealistic in the world of cultivating immortals to make a big pot of rice?

Alas, the book is good, but what makes me regret is that this book has more than one million words, and nonsense and typos account for 400,000 of them. Can the author think carefully before writing, and don't just add in unnecessary words?

Can you stop taking medicine all the time? As soon as you start practicing, you take medicine. The main character Shuanglinggen has such good qualifications. Why does he always take medicine?

The author promises that this book will not enter the palace. No matter what the results are, no matter whether the writing is good or not, as long as there are people chasing it, it will not enter the palace. What I said...

1. Regardless of the level of cultivation of human monks, do they always fight monsters one against two or one against three? It can even kill... 2. When the beast tide ended, the battle damage ratio was even exaggerated to 1:5... 3. Human monks' golden elixirs can self-destruct, why don't the demonic beasts' demon elixirs self-destruct? 4. During the entire beast tide, humans suppressed the monster beasts and fought. Human losses were very small. What about the scary and cruel beast tide that was promised? Not reflected at all. 🙄🙄🙄

A first-level high-grade attack spell killed a ninth-level Qi refining person. After death, I will give you a lot of good things plus first-level high-quality defensive charms. A very serious, first-class, high-grade defensive spell. What. Are you reluctant to use it or is your response at level 6 faster than that at level 9? By the way, there are also notes on third-level alchemy. Xuanjie Kung Fu. And your family has only had three families for eight hundred years.

To be honest, the expression is a bit verbose. And I always feel that the characters in it are a bit hypocritical.

It is not recommended to subscribe, it is too watery, not ordinary water, even a fart can produce tens of thousands of words

Is there no way to develop a family other than fighting? I keep fighting, and I have no points for my strength. How many chapters have it been? If I don't collect resources to advance to the Nascent Soul, I just keep wandering around outside, and I know the water. Can't I go to fight for territory after I reach the Nascent Soul? I really can't stand it at all. Just live in your own world and indulge in obscenity.

The author would like to remind you, in the future, when writing novels about cultivating immortals, don't write novels written in a few months, but in a year or two. This is about cultivating immortality. You can't write novels written in ten or eight years? There is also a timeline that you really need to remember clearly, how old the protagonist is, how many years have passed, remember clearly, there is still time, time, time, don't let months pass by, it is such a short time, at least ten or eight years or something like that.

Well written, very mature, I am no longer a novice author, I wish I could have done it faster.

Occasionally I found a little bird 🐤. After reading it in one go, I felt that it was generally good, not too poisonous, and a new author can understand it 😊, come on! I wish you better and better as you write!

Eunuch 🙂🙂

The first time I read it, I remember it had only updated a few hundred chapters. I stopped for a long time when I saw the update. Now I'm re-watching it, and I don't know what to do next. Anyway, I feel that the main character is too emotional for the family and elders. It's not impossible to write, but after reading too much, my nose is sore and I want to cry. It feels a bit pretentious, and even the meetings are too polite and formal.

Suddenly I got hard 😃

The writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work💪

Hmph hahaha, first place

Write faster😆