Disposable Sword God

You've been writing blindly since you returned to Earth!

How should I put it? I think it was too fast. It was just a sect at the beginning, and we arrived at the Holy Land in a few chapters, and then we immediately went to the immortal world. I felt like reading the synopsis of the story... Many things can be focused on, such as the background of the sect, the description and portrayal of the characters, and the shaping of the world view. If it is longer, this book can be read. Actually, the first few chapters are quite good, but it feels too fast and the pace just takes off. I always feel like I'm about to finish after writing more than a hundred chapters... Sometimes the behavior of one or two people that pop up is very confusing, and it feels like they are not on point and have nothing to do with the main plot. Too fast! It felt very rushed, and if I went any faster it would be a waste of time. Of course, what keeps me reading this book is this one-time skill, which can be said to be innovative, but if a large-scale skill accidentally kills some monsters, will the protagonist get additional rewards? I'm curious about this. Write slower and keep the rhythm steady. Sometimes the writing is interesting and sometimes the writing is confusing. Come on! ! ! Give me a recommendation to support.

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What kind of garbage book is this? The author has no brains when writing it. I won't talk about the simple and crude storyline of provoking generals. If you read Chapter 29, it won't be so bad. It's so bad that the protagonist is just like a normal person. It's outrageous.

The subject matter is creative, but the author seems to be writing a book for the first time + there is no outline, the plot and strength of the plot are messy, and the parts that should be detailed are not written in detail. It suddenly becomes sad in the middle of the fun, and then starts to want to be happy in the middle of the fun. The ups and downs of the plot are not grasped well, and it is uncomfortable to watch. I can only say that I have practiced more and studied more. If I don't go back and remake this book, I will probably write it down. The writing is a big flaw.

If nothing else, the author has a very good attitude.

The main character is too stupid to make him feel cool and funny, so he must not be brainless. He should mention the reader's IQ and don't treat him like a child.

😒 After reading a few pictures, I felt that the supporting characters were mentally retarded. I originally wanted to criticize the author, but in the comment section, I saw an author with such a correct attitude and was a bit speechless. It was outrageous. Forget it, go ahead and scold other authors to calm down.

Write Qin Meng to death, the disgusting holy bitch, write him to death on the person who put down the butcher knife and became a Buddha immediately.

Please correct me if you see any bad points, feel free to scold me.

How can I put it, it's too messy, there are many conflicts in this part, that part, the setting sentences, and the characterization is a bit confusing.

The more the author writes, the more crooked he becomes

Author, the plot of your story is a bit messy. It feels like you just write whatever comes to mind. Also, the constant presence of mythological characters from another world feels too confusing, and it loses its freshness.

You must be happy, author.

You already have children, so don't be so vicious, okay? You know what readers hate seeing the most is this kind of thing

The subject matter is pretty good, but the author's writing is a bit messy.

Nowadays, it is no longer fashionable to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. We want to have fun. We have to show off.

Is the protagonist a noob? ? ? Brainless trash?

The part when I first got the Moonlight Box confused me. If you want to express that the protagonist is a person who does not exist in destiny, that is true, but there is no need to deal with all the people close to you. Yes, it will all happen in the future, and the protagonist will definitely change, but since the author has written it, and written it too much, he is trying to confuse people. Nothing big happened in the first hundred years or so. As soon as I got the Moonlight Treasure Box, my dear, I saw that all the people involved in the next year would be pissed off. What's even more outrageous is that the senior sister actually worked as a slave for the prince of the enemy country in order to save her father. It was said earlier that the second senior sister was more assertive, and then this? No one can stand up. According to the principle that there is no protagonist, this book just needs to add (unabridged) after the title.

I find it very interesting and interesting!

This book describes the supporting characters in a way that is difficult to describe, and is ridiculed and satirized at every turn, which makes the book very unpleasant to read. Let's finish this book and start a new one soon.