The Immortal Wizard Is Watching

A lord story disguised as a wizard. It's neither fantasy nor wizarding.

Chapter Ten introduces a girl who has arguably offended the protagonist. Based on the protagonist's previous psychological descriptions, while not exactly cold-blooded, he certainly wouldn't be a pushover before establishing himself. However, upon encountering this girl who offended him, he immediately transforms into a pushover, which I find utterly disgusting.

Let me state upfront that I came here because of the book title. I initially thought this was about immortal wizards. Immortality and wizards—what I wanted to see was the composure and serenity of immortality, the wisdom and rationality of wizards, and the protagonist's role in shaping the world as a spectator in his pursuit of knowledge. But what about this book?

The more I read, the stranger it seems. Immortality, wizardry, and observation—none of these are present. 😅You've chosen the wrong name. It lacks the composure of immortality, the mystery of a wizard, and the secrecy of observation. The protagonist's timeline seems rather rushed, from the capital to the territory to development—it feels too hurried.

The circled area indicates the location of the main character, Hanfengling.

Don't be a saint, and don't be a eunuch; push when you should.

When describing prices, the author almost used medieval European standards, forgetting that he was writing about a giant, extraordinary empire with hundreds of millions of people. A weapon for an ordinary guard costs fifty gold coins, and buying a territory only costs two hundred gold coins. The price collapse is unbearable to watch. If the productivity of the extraordinary empire in your book is the same as that of medieval Europe, then what is the point of the extraordinary?

Incestuous tendencies, a youthful aesthetic—I, Shennong, have tasted hundreds of herbs for so many years, and yet I ultimately died because of you. Don't try to explain to me; if you do, you're right! The idea of ​​a youthful appearance is already problematic, but then there's the issue of orthopedics...

The plot is truly far-fetched. A viscount's family from a major trading city is easily lured into turning against each other by vampires. I could barely accept being lured into a fight between one or two? Are the rest of the family members brainless and blind? How could a powerful noble family occupy such a vast territory if they had no ability to counter such a supernatural being?

You're a complete newbie; you've stepped on every landmine and pitfall of Western fantasy readers.