Secret: I Can See the Save Point

After reading it, after much thought, I decided to write a book review to complain about it. This book... How should I put it, the plot is quite interesting, but the character interaction is a bit too strange😳. Let's take the protagonist as an example. All the actions of the protagonist give people a perfunctory feeling, that is, "I will be surprised perfunctorily", "I will be frightened perfunctorily", "I will be excited perfunctorily", "I will just pretend perfunctorily". It feels like the officials and Mr. Fool are being deceived by fools. They talk about some secret knowledge casually without thinking carefully about the consequences. The point is that no one doubts it, which is very embarrassing. For example, when the protagonist encounters a supernatural incident at the beginning, he is not even surprised that the official comes to him, and then he completely accepts it. The official is not surprised and directly accepts the protagonist. When the protagonist sees Mr. Fool, he directly asks if there is anyone else, giving people the feeling that he already knows. The important point is that Mr. Fool does not doubt the protagonist at all. I remember that the Fool is quite cautious in the mystery. Encountering a woman who is suspected of being a witch, the protagonist directly talks to her about the history of angels. This should be beyond ordinary historical issues... There are many similar strange things. In short, it feels that the protagonist seems to have no fear of the mysterious world. He blurts out many things that should not be said, and then does not care about disguise. But so far, he has been smooth sailing, which is a bit strange. In addition, the supporting characters also have many strange feelings, which I won't mention for now. However, the author's big story still makes people look forward to it, especially in terms of the idea of ​​archiving. In short, there are a lot of strange bugs, I hope you can work hard.

First, let's talk about some minor shortcomings in the article. In some places, the sense of substitution is not enough, the wording is a bit unmysterious, and the plot design is a bit hasty! I think a lot of it should be a problem with the writing style, but this thing can be improved! But the advantages are also obvious. The plot is very imaginative in many places and feels very novel. Generally speaking, there are no serious logical problems at present. I feel that the guilt about occupying the original owner's body and the parents at the beginning was great. I feel that the protagonist is slowly integrating into the new world. I hope the details will be handled more delicately. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Don't rush the update speed, the most important thing is to write it slowly and slowly!

This book is actually okay, but it feels a bit confusing, such as the extra Sequence 1 Extraordinary Characteristics and so on. This is probably a foreshadowing. Overall, it is a good mystery fanfic. After all, mysterious fanfics are really difficult to write. There are not many books that can be read. Relatively speaking, at least the protagonist has a brain.

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I feel that the protagonist is the original real time traveler, the God of Destiny who was killed by Yuta. He is Sequence Zero. He controls the Key of Light to a certain extent because his status is high enough and the ingot cannot be contaminated. He advances quickly because he is already at the top of the Sequence. He changed his acting method back then and customized it for himself.

My idea of ​​"monsters", a way to rely on fate to make a living, is sequence nine - monsters, because they have super spirituality and can see many things that others cannot see, so they go crazy all day long, are not accepted, and are excluded, so they are monsters. The key to digesting the magic potion is to recognize your differences and accept yourself. Ordinary people who don't know about potions have a hard time digesting them (such as the person in the original work who was born a "monster"), but those who know it will be much simpler and have no trouble as long as they let nature take its course and accumulate experience every day (see more things that others can't see). As for "machine", it is a bit difficult, but it is only a matter of time. I think there are many concepts. It may be what the author said is a ruthless machine that controls the fate of others. But looking at Sequence 8, I think it is more likely that the machine is controlled by invisible fate. It is wound up and runs according to the prescribed trajectory. You must understand this cruel truth. Everyone is a machine controlled by fate. This is an important condition. The experience is to calculate diligently. Let me understand what is going on later. Generally speaking, this path is to let nature take its course, rely on destiny and father to enjoy the food, and think about life all the time, and live in reality and philosophy. This is also the reason why every high-sequencer of the "monster" path looks like a magician. After all, they are all philosophers. 🤭{"NickName":"The past and the past","UserId":220610806}

One chapter will be posted around 6 o'clock tomorrow morning, and another chapter will be posted around 6 o'clock in the afternoon. My typing speed is a flaw. Now I have time to practice Wubi every day. Once Wubi can be put into practice, it should be better.

Isn't it possible to watch The Fool in the Monster Path?

Can archives travel through time? Otherwise, I'm sorry for the name archive 🙂

Also, I'm thinking, write it down quickly, I don't even know why the protagonist is not contaminated now? Mr. Ke only dared to say something on the gray fog. You blatantly thought about it on the carriage, but you didn't die suddenly.

I suggest writing two books. There are too many descriptions of the supporting characters, and they have little to do with the protagonist. It would be better if I wrote two books.

There are so many time-travelers and there are a lot of scenes. Can the author really control them? →_→ It is a taboo in creation to dominate the scene.

When did Alger dare to be dissatisfied with The Fool 😥

Personally, I feel that there are too many scenes of Mobet recently, and it feels like he is taking over the main role. Is designing a time-traveling Mobet to interact with Leonard in the future or to bring out Amon? In addition, this book feels like there are a lot of time-travelers, which is a test of the author's ability to control the plot. I hope the plot will not collapse. Come on, author!

I haven't finished reading the original book, so I'd like to ask, since the two time-travelers know the book Mystery, are they not the "travelers" in the original book, but real time-travelers?

And what is the feedback from the monster? It feels like you have never played it before? Destiny Next Door's writing about monsters is quite good, the author can refer to it Readers should write the character of the pure white eye in advance, so that it is easier for us readers to understand. You don't say anything, and I can't figure it out. I can only think that it is the protagonist, and there is something very awesome. However, this very awesome thing does not seem to help the protagonist. It must have some effect.

It feels like a person is playing the mobile game of his best friend and suddenly wakes up and realizes that he had a dream and traveled to his best friend's place with the characteristics and sealed objects in the game. It's a multi-player online type 😁

I found another book without a heroine! I hope you won't be like the two books I just found!

There is no heroine, but I also collected it and supported it till death do us part (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑). Come on and let me be a little devil for a little fan. Update to 8000

Xiao Ke

If the protagonist is "lucky" enough, can he get the opportunity of destiny to accommodate uniqueness through the Key of Light? If Sequence Two is lucky enough, it may not necessarily lose control, not to mention the blessing of fate. No one stipulates that only sequence one can accommodate uniqueness. The uniqueness of An Banyu's ritual was accommodated by the demigod, and it got out of control.

I think the writing is okay. Why are there so few monthly tickets?

And I remember that the side effects of becoming a Sequence Nine monster are quite serious. Why does the protagonist feel like a normal person? At least you have to feel very crazy, otherwise why would you call it a monster?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I'm curious how many fellow villagers there are and will they have an impact on the plot?

Almost mistaking Claire and Reed for Jack and Reed...