Dreaming Back to the Millennium

After seeing your introduction, I am not interested in your book. However, I am not an ordinary person. It looks like shit, but I still have to try it to see if it is really shit. After reading it, the writing is not bad, but the author's introduction really should be changed. This introduction reveals a message. There are pitfalls everywhere. The introduction is to show the cool points and advantages of your book. The introduction you write will only make others less interested. But I saw that the protagonist wanted his wife from his previous life to go to film school and didn't want to watch it. This is a poisonous point. The entertainment industry is so complicated. Don't say that your rebirth can protect her. What you wrote is a trap. The things you wrote about protecting her later are what we don't want to see. Does filming require close contact? Kissing sex scene? Even if you don't shoot these, does the entertainment industry require you to accompany her with drinks? Even if you don't accompany her with drinks, the filming lasts for several months to a year. Do you masturbate by yourself? If you are a single heroine, what will you watch? Do you want to start a business by yourself, or should you accompany her to film and be a pretty girl? If you are a multi-heroine, then if you write such a good wife and still act like a scumbag, you will see if people will scold you.

Recommended, but before I even read it, I realized that there have been no updates in three days.

Keep writing and I will keep reading. I don't know what full subscription is, but I keep reading.

Whether it is public or private, I hope you will continue to write. I have followed several books at the same time, but every time I see your update, I will read it first. If it can maintain this level and wait for you to put it on the shelf, I will definitely order all of it. If the story is well told, there will always be readers who like this type of book. The characters can be portrayed more vividly, and people with ordinary lives are not ordinary people.

So far, so good. Looking at the follow-up, I don't say I understand everything about the entertainment industry. Let me tell you my opinion. Girlfriends can engage in professional drama and other aspects, so that they can be familiar with each other but not deeply. Or as a hobby.

After looking at it it was pretty good. Come on. Just too little

First, first, come on, the author, the description is okay, the pace can be slower, don't be so hasty, follow your own pace and wait for it to be published.