Mystery Revival: Paper Money

Originally, no one knew the protagonist's name, but you stupidly told headquarters. Wouldn't it have been better to use a code name? Does a mysteriously resurrected world need identification? This world is truly chaotic, a riot of demons; be careful, someone like Fang Shiming might just wipe you out with a single snip. And to make matters worse, you foolishly joined headquarters.

I've read several fanfics about horror resurgence, and all the authors are praising Yang Jian, as if they can't write a book without him. If you're going to praise Yang Jian, then fine, but why do you have to arrange some idiotic plots to create conflict with him, and then not deal with the conflict? It's like you have to keep Yang Jian as the final boss.

So far, it looks pretty good, but let's not get too sentimental. Mysterious Resurrection is, after all, all about the bizarre. If you're constantly trying to save this person and that person without considering your own interests, nobody will read it. Mysterious Resurrection fanfiction is a niche genre, and people searching for it generally don't want anything too sentimental or focused on their own interests.

It's really a bit of a mismatch; the headquarters is begging people to join everywhere, but those who come willingly are being pretentious; on one hand, writing about ghosts is affecting relationships, and on the other hand, it's about serving the country and the people; writing an invincible story while imposing this and that restriction... It would be better to just write a long novel.

They blatantly weakened Chapter 4 and even changed the Buddha's character settings. I suggest they change it; it's extremely toxic. Have you ever heard of a Ghost Eye's Ghost Domain only being five meters wide after a crash? It's not even as good as a single-layer Ghost Eye. It's incredibly toxic.

Did you consider the threat of the "ghost scissors" when you revealed your real name?

It's pointless. The restrictions are too great. If you don't know how to use it, forget it. Even the backup senses have been cut off. The author probably never intended for the protagonist's eyes to develop before Yang Jian's. As for that cheat ability, you could just copy a Deceitful Ghost and play around with it.

The writing of "Master of Demon Eyes" is really terrible.

Actually, author, you didn't need to suppress the protagonist so much. Yang Jian himself is a ghost in the later stages, and even then he could only forcefully open eight levels, and he had to be very careful... Author, you could have limited the protagonist's physical abilities... For example, right now he can only open it four or five times, and his body can't handle going any higher... The remaining levels depend on how powerful the ghost the protagonist can replicate...

There's an error here. The reason a ghost tamer loses emotion is because the vengeful ghost can revive, but a completely deactivated ghost won't be affected. For example, Ye Zhen's ghost is essentially completely deactivated.