Coiling Dragon: Lord of Time

The author does not have to think so much. There are only two parts of the audience for fan fiction. One is the original party who follows the original work. If it is changed, it will not respect the original work. The second is the adaptation party who hopes to make changes, otherwise they might as well go back and read the original work. So it's impossible to have both sides of the story. If you don't change the plot, the adaptation party will scold you, but the original work party won't praise you. If you change it, the original work party will scold you, but the adaptation party will not praise you. So all you see are curses. But in fact, many people read books silently and rarely comment. There are still many people who support you, such as me😁

I haven't read the novel yet, so I won't talk about the content of the novel, but only the name. To be honest, I like the novel Panlong very much. I have probably read it no less than eight times from beginning to end. In Coiling Dragon, there is no law of time that can be mastered in Linmeng's universe, because Linmeng's universe is too small. Of course, if you say that the protagonist comes from the main universe, it is indeed possible to master the law of time. Although he is not the master of Hongmeng and cannot transcend the universe, I remember the main universe (probably ), there is a cosmic wonder (not sure if it is called this, because I haven't read the sequel), and the soul of Lin Lei's master in Lin Meng's universe has been gathered into it. (But I'm not sure if the sequel is official, because I haven't read the sequel yet.) You How about creating something similar and explaining it clearly in the introduction? To be honest, this name is quite discouraging to me, because I really like the original Panlong (I only speak for myself, please don't go online, )

Give Olivia a good beating, otherwise the two brothers will keep pretending, and the most important thing is that they can't pretend well.

The latest chapters made me confused. That Vivian came to ask for a mission, and he only said a few words in total. When he returned home, the protagonist kissed her. Not to mention that Vivian is still a master god with so many years of experience, yet she kisses a stranger out of nowhere. I have nothing to say about your emotional drama.

The twin brothers who were reborn as Linley were really vicious and didn't want to find a way to save their mother. Even if the mother's death must be used to promote the plot, it can be said that they tried, but in the end due to some inertia of fate, they still died. This does nothing, and it is really impossible to understand the author's thinking, or you can just set the protagonist to be the twins who are with Wharton.

I gave up after reading Chapter 7. The protagonist is 8 years old, and after transforming to level 8, he still has to go to school? I don't know if Hogg will seek revenge without telling his sons, and then be seriously injured and die. If this is true, then this book is complete garbage. The protagonist is already at level 8 when he is only 8 years old. After two years, the protagonist will reach level 7 and have level 9 strength. After a few more years, the protagonist will be able to successfully become a saint. According to Hogg's early investigation results, the culprit is the younger brother of the King of Finland. There is no sanctuary in the entire Kingdom of Finland. It is completely possible to wait for the protagonist's sanctuary to investigate and take revenge. Hogg does not need to take risks. If the author still kills with plot, then he is simply plagiarizing the original work again.

You can ignore the Four Divine Beasts family. To be honest, I really don't like those people. But Lord Bauhinia, you can consider it. When the time comes, tell Lei Jing that you call me dad and I call you brother, and everyone can do their own thing.

This book is definitely about eunuchs, as evidenced by the post. The protagonist can remember the battle between the armored dragon and the purple-striped black bear in the Misty Valley. Lin Lei watched, but did not remember that his mother was taken away by the Guangming Cult. This shows that the author copied and pasted the original plot with a perfunctory attitude, exhausted his inspiration, and lost patience. He can no longer find the passion when he opened the book. Therefore, it can be guessed that this book is not far away from eunuchs.

I think the setting of Panlong instead of Hongmeng is actually better. The Supreme God is the top. The Supreme God is the incarnation of rules and represents the 4 highest energies. The setting of Hongmeng feels nondescript and all the efforts have turned into a joke.

So becoming a god inside the body is simply Tomato's stupidest setting. He wrote down the potential of becoming a god inside the body as worthless. It's so stupid. The rules of heaven and earth specifically ask you when you become a god, do you want to become a god inside the body or outside the body? Why do so many things? Wouldn't it be nice to just set it to become a god outside the body? Therefore, fan fiction should make a big fuss about becoming a god within the body, breaking through the limitations of Tomato, and slapping Tomato in the face. This is what a good fan writer should do. Speaking of which, let me just come up with a wild idea! For example, the physical body of a god who becomes a god in the body is particularly powerful, or the probability of achieving Dzogchen is higher (the author is thinking about how high it is specifically), and then a setting is added that after completing Dzogchen in one system, you can then cultivate other systems, which is equivalent to having multiple godheads in the body and strengthening the body multiple times. Don't the main themes of Coiling Dragon like infinite lifespan? Then follow this main theme and give some benefits to those with less talent (Didn't Panlong always emphasize the flow of genius? Then most of us who read novels are ordinary people, don't we miss it? I'm going to counterattack, okay!). As long as you have great perseverance, becoming a god inside the body will eventually be very strong. At least it can compete with the multi-system Dzogchen of becoming a god outside the body. This is the final correct solution! Since ancient times, Taoism has focused on cultivating itself. It makes no sense that the clone flow is stronger. Xiao Huangshu's clone flow is still poisonous, right? Actually, I am not optimistic about the clone flow at all. The main body is the best and the human race is the master of the world! ! ! ! ! ! Otherwise, wouldn't the Rules of Heaven and Earth ask you specifically for the behavior of an idiot? Oh, just to tease you and give you a trap? Is it necessary? It has no emotions. Isn't this setting stupid? We can think of it this way, that is, the plot of the multiple clones was already figured out in a flash of tomato brain (easy to write), and the god in the body did not waste any effort to set it up (the pit was not filled in)! So what the fan author has to do is to help Tomato go further, and at the same time make himself famous for once. As long as your writing skills are good and the plot design is strong enough, this will be another masterpiece! It's a pity that many people are afraid of trolling (are they afraid of trolling because of the original work's party setting? Haha, readers are just following the crowd and have no brains. Do you understand? As long as the author writes well, some people will praise you and be afraid of it). I want to say that you will never become a great author if you are afraid of trolling!