In the Hokage, He Has Become a Rebellious Ninja

I advise you not to read it. Shennong died of poison. Although the Jinchuuriki is called the Jinchuuriki, the main character is mentally retarded and extremely narcissistic. The content of the original work is not good either. The characters in it were all set to be mentally retarded by the author. It is purely a self-motivated article by the author.

The tone of speaking was too strong.

The author probably has never seen the Hokage scribbling, and the relationship between the Ninja Village and the daimyo is completely cat and mouse: when Tsunade was unconscious and everyone proposed the new Hokage, the daimyo felt that Hiruzen Sarutobi did a good job, but Danzo glared at him, scaring the daimyo so much that he didn't dare to say anything! This shows that the daimyo is just a puppet in the hearts of ninjas. When will the brother of a puppet's wife be able to give orders to the Hokage?

Facts have proved that as long as the book is bad enough, there is nothing the navy can do

There are too many first person pronouns, which affects the reading experience.

The author is probably the kind of person who has never watched Naruto and only read a few fan stories, so he comes here to write about it to gain popularity. When did Naruto have ten thousand taels of banknotes? When exchanging money at the money exchange, the maximum face value is only 200 taels

Absolute junior high school students say goodbye!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I really feel like I'm addicted to it. The male protagonist is a typical villain. He keeps talking every time he fights, and other ninjas follow suit. The villain died because the male protagonist talked too much because of the author's protection. Otherwise, the grass on the grave would be two meters high.

Poisoned to death, I told Naruto the truth in the early stage and thought the tone was vicious. I didn't dare to kill anyone later. If I wanted to be wanted, why bother? Waiting to be cleared? He started killing grass ninjas, so why did Xiang Ling keep them? In the way? If there is really a shortage of women, why can't we just be mean and shameless?

Serious self-pleasure, too much nonsense, and poor language organization. It gives me a headache even if I watch it without thinking.

I've read three chapters, how can I put it, the environment is really good, there's no scolding at all, so the author, how many people did you hire? As for the plot, ugh, I'll never see you again.

I suspect it was written by a primary school student. The first three chapters were probably guided by the teacher, and the writing style started to show in the fourth chapter.

After reading Chapter 10, I died of poison.

Where do you get the banknotes in Naruto? Don't you think it's ridiculous to think that it's a bank note because it's measured in "liang"? The author doesn't know anything and just writes randomly!

Let me tell you something, the upper limit of eight gates is film level🙄🙄

Ah, here, this is a daily guide for me. It's really just a daily guide.

It's true that Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs, and it was a huge blockage.

As soon as he opened his mouth, he said "fuck" and "fuck". . . No sense of substitution

When I saw the upper limit of eight doors, I was not in the mood to watch it. When I open seven doors, it starts to exceed the shadow level.

Fragrant phosphorus

Brother, I will give you both the monthly pass and the recommendation vote. You must update faster. Is your writing okay? A bookworm of more than ten years.

This book looks quite funny, why are you so serious? Novels are meant to be fun to read, don't forget

There are quite a few Mizuki Naruto fanfics😄

I think the writing is pretty good. If there is nothing to write later, I can change it to Zhutianliu.

Next door is planning to massacre four high-ranking clan members. Come on, come on 🙂