Start Picking up Attributes from Konoha

I just want to see how the protagonist picks up attributes along the way. I don't know why it turned into a diaosi harem story 🤔 and it's still a wooden diaosi 😤

Is the main character a backdrop? Nothing has been done, these plots are just water.

Author, be serious and don't use too frivolous words. It's not good to complain too much.

Touyu has evolved into Obito's Kamui Dimension, and his life-saving ability is considered invincible.

I saw a strange book that helped Itachi cleanse his clan from annihilation 😃

Sorry, I didn't want to watch it when I saw Minato and Izumi being paired together~

Chapter 44 says that physical healing has no effect on oneself? When Xiang Ling sensed that Sasuke was about to die, didn't he bite himself when he was hit by Bai Zemu?

The pig's feet just follow the plot and have no special features. The so-called attributes are basically mentioned in one stroke, and there is no sense of involvement, just like chewing wax. Since you are writing about picking up attributes, you should pay attention to writing about picking up attributes and the development of attributes. When hanging on the wall, you must be strong enough to hang on the wall. After reading more than 20 chapters, the pig's feet are basically the background wall. There is no special property at all! ! !

The author always wants to explain some of Naruto's settings himself, but. . . . The explanation is very incorrect.

I feel like it's a little awkward to watch after it's put on the shelves, and it doesn't maintain the same level as before.

The writing is so bad, the author should practice more.

I accidentally caught up with the progress, so I came over to say a few words. There were a lot of people who criticized this book in the book review section. At first, I gave up after reading the reviews. Later, I was short of books, so I took it out to pass the time. To be fair, it's okay! It's just a fanfic, don't be too harsh, it's already good, and some parts are still very exciting, such as the thousand-year killing of Tsunade. Of course, there are also strange things. For example, after accepting so many women, why can't we accept Quan? Rejection is a bit far-fetched. All in all, as far as a fanfic is concerned, it's still a good novel, so good cheers, author!

There are a lot of minor issues. Others are fine

Once the investment is stable, you can sign the contract after two updates

I just watched Moonlight: Cold Wind, and here comes Moonlight: Wind 🤓. I don't know if it's good or not.

This writing is concise enough, you just skimmed it, and I will provide the service below.

Tsunade's dog licking! What I said is right! It's so fucking annoying to lick the dog

The writing is not bad. Do you want to have a willing exchange with Tsunade?

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It feels like the author is always talking...

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's writing style is a bit lacking.

Did you remember it wrong? Why do I remember that Hayate is the fourth generation shadow guard?

Chapter 1, see Naruto Episode 1

The settings are all guesswork, and there are a lot of poison points.

I read some of the free chapters, but before they were released, I lost interest.

The main reason is that it's so boring that there are more than 30 main characters in it. In fact, I think it's pretty cool when He Tsunade is knocked unconscious during the fight and uses virtual reality to play gangster tactics. But he just got kicked and was crippled. The protagonist didn't have much growth and wasn't very happy. He couldn't win against anyone. He couldn't beat a dog, even the real estate guy. I don't want to watch it. It's a waste of life.

This book may have been written by the main character, but it doesn't feel immersive. I can't imagine it. I think many people can't even finish the first chapter.