Hogwarts: Both Science and Magic

I suddenly had a wild idea: what if Ginny died in the second year after Voldemort drained her life force? It would be a huge blow to the Weasley family. The Weasleys had shown their loyalty to Dumbledore, but in return, they received their daughter's tragic death (being drained of her life force). They would inevitably start to doubt whether Dumbledore was really right.

Holy crap, they took down Dumbledore in just 60 chapters! Awesome!

Dumbledore may be the most powerful white wizard, but he was by no means a competent headmaster. Schools are places for nurturing students, not battlefields for him to use to eliminate Voldemort. First, Tom's transformation into Voldemort was somewhat related to Dumbledore's upbringing.

He called me Mudblood. It means dirty blood. Mud always despises Muggle-born children. Neither parents can do magic. Like me. Hermione Granger Reporter: Do you love Daniel? Little Tom: Yes, I love her, but I don't know what she thinks. Reporter: Tom says he loves you. What do you think? Little Danielle: I think love is two-way, just as I love him too. ---- Reporter interview

Good job! Clear and concise writing. Most importantly, don't be a simp... Keep it up! 😊

I've only read the first fifteen chapters, and the author's writing feels very disorganized. One chapter starts with a floating city, the next focuses on Harry Potter, the next explores Transfiguration, and then the Patronus—each chapter is completely different. It's like the author is just writing whatever comes to mind.

... Is the female lead Hermione? But given Hermione's age, she wouldn't be of much help to the protagonist... With the protagonist's current rate of development, he could easily defeat Voldemort single-handedly during the Goblet of Fire. Hermione, on the other hand, hasn't matured yet. It would be best to create an original adult witch or a senior witch, or just not have a female lead at all. 🙂🙂🙂

The beginning was great, but then it got so toxic I just stopped reading and left.

The author has written too much about Snape, constantly emphasizing his pitiful state. For a reader like me who hasn't read Harry Potter and doesn't know much about Snape, this is a bit excessive. My initial sympathy has turned into some aversion, since I haven't seen the movies and don't know what happened to him. There's no sense of identification; it's a bit jarring.

I've been thinking that if I could constantly unleash the "All Curses End" spell with my left hand and wield a submachine gun with my right, wouldn't I be invincible in the magical world?