Yin Mountain Register

It's amazing. I thought that the transformation of the Invincible Heavenly Man in the East was the ultimate state. I didn't expect there was anyone stronger than him. Dare I ask what kind of hero he is?

Damn it, it's very well written and reads very smoothly. Whose vest is this?

When I saw that the update was discontinued at the end of January and picked up in August, it was absolutely amazing, the update was discontinued in July!

Read the first ten chapters. It is full of bad points and poisonous points, the plot is confusing, and the logic is not smooth. First of all, when you go to work in a land where demons are rampant, you are still just a first-level useless person, and your family doesn't send any experts to protect you? The key is that the protagonist is favored and the family spends a huge price to save their lives. . . Secondly, that book boy is really poisonous. . . Thirdly, a Shangxian County has not had a county magistrate for many years Fourthly, a Shangxian County, the essence of the county, the city god was killed by a demon (how scary are the demons here?), But the court did not react at all. Fifthly, in such a terrifying place, the protagonist was actually sent to serve here? This. . . How much does the family hate the protagonist? Only ten chapters, full of loopholes

The system is poorly written and nondescript, the plot is even more confusing, the protagonist has no opinion and just goes with the flow, and the writing is even more stinky when he sees the rebellion. . . The protagonist also had a double break with that prince, and even vomited out the food he had eaten the night before. It was so disgusting.

The author has obviously been writing towards the climax in the last few chapters. I enjoyed reading it quite a lot, but I have some inner thoughts that I want to share. But there is a problem. I don't know if it's because there are too many criticisms from those who don't know the so-called comments. The things written after the update have laid a lot of foreshadowing to be honest, and the traces of fixed routines such as pretending to slap people in the face and opening the mini map are also getting worse. Personally, I think that if you really want to write a popular book, writing a new book early is one way to do it. This book can become a masterpiece in your life if you just revise it. There is no need to change your original intention of writing a book just because of unsatisfactory commercial results.         ，，， You see, the author of Lord of the Stars also changed his vest to reach the top ten. There is really no need to care about the opinions of the novices in the comment area and write in a commercial template. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Just letting the author see your work can still trigger some desire for communication among readers like me who think they are sensible.

Sunflower Road, dignified transformation 😁

This book boy almost got me drunk at the beginning. I'm really sorry you guys can't keep reading.

To be honest, it's all booked now. I have a few questions. What's going on with the classical fairy tales nowadays? Why does cultivating an immortal always have to be entangled with the power changes of secular dynasties? Then, since you have worshiped the leader of the Taoist Sect, entered the high wall, and are still wading in the muddy waters of this world, why don't you go to the mountain gate to see what the Taoist Immortal is? And then there is the Qingdi Baoyuan, a treasure that has no fight at all, and is trying to seize the opportunity. It can be accepted by the genius of the fifth-grade sect if it is not even the sixth grade, so how about practicing? Isn't it good to go back to the mountain gate early to seek immortality? Let's go back to what makes me most irritated. Your goal in cultivating immortality is to achieve great immortality or great freedom. If you don't agree with me, you will become a vixen princess. Dragon Girl, what are you going to do? Without a woman, this immortal cannot cultivate. Is it just like the current trend of TV dramas? No matter what the background is, it's love. It's true that I vomited a little bit. Nearly 200 chapters have started. The male protagonist seems to be a supporting character. The master proves immortality, the devil from outside the territory attacks, and the Yin and Yang world copy seems to be incompatible with the protagonist. The outsider The male protagonist does not have any hatred of the country and the family. He only has a heart for Taoism and the pursuit of immortality. It is a fairy-like article, and the writing is also good. Don't be unable to continue writing because you can't find the direction of the plot.

The front is very good, but after we leave Shanyin, things start to get worse and then continue, with a hammer and a stick, and one thing is not finished yet, and I don't know where to go, it's not clear. It belongs to the type that is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Based on the gap between the level of the front and the back, we can conclude that this book is a game written on a whim. Whether or not it is written according to the author's mood, there may be a risk of discontinuing the eunuch, and the risk is extremely high. The chapter on Shanyin County is worth reading, and I hope future readers will read it with caution.