Starting as God Tom and Joining the Chat Group

It's time to take out my god Nobita

The protagonist's setting is too high. You should never write a mentally retarded chat group scene where girls are given away. It will ruin the character and make it easy to persuade them to leave.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is a bit awkward. .

It feels a bit poisonous. I'm already a Tom, so don't have sex! Just write about the world and put it in the cup!

It should be this

The protagonist setting is good, but the content is empty and the writing is let down.

The supporting characters are a bit imbecile and the support is too forceful.

There is a problem with the setting from the beginning. If Tom is said to be innately divine and powerful, then why does the pig's foot travel through time and become the god Tom? Especially the pig's feet have nothing on them, which is very strange.

I feel like the content of this novel is, I am awesome, my trumpet is awesome, my subordinates are awesome, my trumpet is awesome, I am even better, I can play my trumpet even when my trumpet is awesome, there are people out there who are awesome, but I am still awesome, this person thinks I am awesome, I have to make him awesome too.

Let me tell you my own point of view. Every time the protagonist appears, everyone will praise him. It's very embarrassing to watch. There are also female characters calling Madara and Baiyue brother, which feels awkward.