Red Dead Redemption: Dawn

The prices are ruined to me. You can either follow the game exactly or watch it as a fan. Or use your brain a little to balance the unreasonable things. It costs you $30 to take a shower, $70 to kill five people, and $150 to get information. Do you think it is reasonable? Don't you feel uncomfortable yourself?

Why do so many people think that the protagonist sucks and is a good person? This was the case when I played Big Cousin 2. The honor value is always full. In reality, I have no choice. In the game, I want to be a good person.

Well... This book can only be said to be not ugly. The most poisonous point in persuading him to quit was in Chapter 54, where he cut off the protagonist's combat power without any explanation, and made it clear that he would not be promoted back. The general situation is that after a demon pops up and forcibly weakens a wave of protagonists, the author jumps out and says that this book will not involve the mysterious side. It can be seen from here that if the protagonist encounters this kind of thing again, he will probably be helpless. To be honest, when I saw the Indians, I thought I was going to get into something mysterious from here. . . I think the problem of typos is not bad. Some places have obviously been corrected later. This attitude is relatively good. In general, this book lacks a big advantage for online books, that is, there is almost no improvement in the protagonist's strength, and the system's presence is also quite thin. It can even be said that the system just gives a castrated version of Death Eye (you can't shoot a headshot after opening Dead Eye), plus it prevents the protagonist from losing combat effectiveness due to being shot like a real character. Other than that, it is really useless at all, and it doesn't even provide a backpack function! Throughout the book, I saw that the main character's biggest hang-up now is the protagonist himself, and then the author cut off a third of his character with a knife when he couldn't act unparalleled and act recklessly against a group of people even if he had a hang-up. In ancient Greek dramas, deus ex machinas were usually used to save the protagonist. As a result, the author used a deus ex machina to do the protagonist's job. I really can't understand it. To be honest, if the strength is improved and the combat power does not collapse in the later stage, then the potential of this book is definitely very high. Over time, if you accumulate experience, you may be able to write a god-like work. As for this book, I can only say that the author's background is still a bit poor.

Let me tell you, this is the most comfortable Red Dead Redemption fanfic I have seen so far.

Originally, there were a lot of typos that were forced to be read, but then there was a wave of forcible weakening in Chapter 54, which was temporary, but it turned out to be permanent, just for an uncertain future. Are you screening readers? I can see that the people who subscribe to your book are really die-hard fans. I guess even the die-hard fans will be force-fed in the future.

I posted about the economic system and saw so many book friends complaining about it. This is indeed a major poisonous point in this book.

After reading Chapter 108, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The previous chapter gave me a bright feeling. I thought I had found a good book. The economic system collapsed, no problem, but forcibly weakening the protagonist and being betrayed and uncomfortable, it passed in two days. I really can't understand it. It's not a big cousin at all. Moreover, the plot is unclear, the system disappears, and the protagonist's abilities are sometimes strong and sometimes weak. It's too lame.

I searched on a whim and found it.

I have been waiting for the author's new book to no avail. I have written a book myself, "Red Dead Redemption: I Have a Release Progress Bar", and I have just signed the contract. I welcome you to give me some advice if you have time. It would be great if the author can give me some suggestions.

After reading some of the previous articles, they are all right, but they don't take money seriously. I give ten dollars to random people I see, and then ask someone to get information and give me 150. I have been shot a few times, and I have worked hard to get a few thousand dollars. I will give half to a person who has done nothing to help you find out information. I will only give you as much as I want to bother you to do a bounty mission. I will give you this much when I see people. Say goodbye.