Surviving in the Wilderness Starts with Red Dead Redemption 2

I just read some, and I don't know how the author wanted to write Dutch. Generally speaking, Dutch was a good leader in the early stage, but he gradually became crazy after Hosea died. This is probably the view of most people, including me. But the last mission before Arthur's death overturned all this. Arthur would send the black girl and Abigail away before going to the camp to confront him, and Abigail would give Arthur a key and tell him one thing, that Dutch had deceived them. In fact, the money was enough, but the specific amount was unclear. Abigail took a look before stealing the key. The money was enough for them to go to the so-called Tahiti to start a new life. In other words, they could have washed their hands in a golden basin a long time ago, but Dutch hid the money and no one knew it, including Hosea and Arthur. Because the two of them had always hoped to escape from this outlaw life after they had enough money, but Dutch didn't want to do that. So every time he said that one more last grab would be enough, and one last big grab would be enough, but in fact the money was already enough. In this case, even if the people in the gang are very loyal, they cannot gain the trust of Dutch, because they and Dutch already have ideological differences. Arthur and others are tired of the life of outlaws. The reason why they robbed everywhere is to prepare for the golden basin to wash their hands. But Darcy is different. He probably really enjoys this feeling of causing trouble, so in the gang, only Daka and Dachi are of the same mind. So even Arthur and John had already seen that there was something wrong with Macca, but Dutch didn't care. And Arthur witnessed all this. At first, he always lamented that Dutch had changed. Until the end of the plot, Arthur finally saw Dutch clearly. "Maybe Dutch has never changed, he just gradually exposed his true nature."

I just saw the author said that there is no outline. I am actually quite worried. I started reading novels when I was 13 and am now 32. I have been reading for almost 20 years. I have written some things. Of course, I have thrown myself into the dust. But the secrets of winners may not be copied, but the lessons of losers will always have some effect. I make a small suggestion. If you offend, I hope Haihan I suggest that the author must have an outline. For example, if the author is compared to Dutch, the outline will be your Hosea. I know very well how many fantastic ideas a novice will have in his mind while sitting, but if they are not curbed, it will only make this book become the Van der Linde Gang A detailed outline will keep you on the right path. Even the outline of each character and the change of ideas at each stage must be prepared in advance In fact, there is still a lot to say, but let's forget it after thinking about it. The greatest joy of writing a novel is actually the pleasure of creating a world with my own hands. When I write, I hate my wife giving advice next to me. Big Trouble The last request is Arthur Lenny, Hosea must be saved Micah must die! ! ! !

Your opening was so fun that I skipped the snowy mountain chapter.      13，，，，80%， There is also a new idea of ​​starting from Tumbleweed Town in the west and becoming a tycoon. I don't know how you wrote your outline. Well, I hope you can take into account more easter eggs, branch plots and other things. It would be great if you break away from the main plot and re-write a new story according to your own ideas. Ghost trains, UFOs, Indians, witch potions, the Chinese who built railways, Java, the Grim Reaper, giants, and so many more. It would be great if it can be developed all the way to the point where gangsters transform into evil capital companies, and cowboys with horses, guns, and freedom are free and unrestrained. I have always wanted to see this aspect of the plot. Everyone is stable and no one died, except Micah. Dutch is not half crazy, and he can continue to dream of being a cowboy with everyone. Be a business tycoon, be a cowboy, be a gangster, live a chic western life, and develop your power step by step. On the one hand, they occupy American capital and even become the number one predator company. On the other hand, the gang owners hold parties and go out for adventures together. We can establish many villain gangs and villain companies. In the end, they even directly replaced Detective Pinkson, and Arthur and his gang became the FBI. Anyway, it is an imaginary world and does not involve reality. And so many colorful eggs show that there are many mysteries in this world. I can't say enough, it's really great.

This book feels a bit hazy, and the fandom is too serious. The author also likes to write flashbacks. He writes what he did first and then why. As a casual reader who does not know the plot of the game, many plots will be confused. For example, the chapter where the protagonist delivers medicine to the Indians. As a player who has played the game, I was confused when I saw the howling of wolves and so on. I only understood it after it was explained later. There is also the man under the Rhodes gun shop, which is even more inexplicable to passers-by. As a player, I know that the owner of the gun shop became crazy because he accidentally killed his son, but passers-by readers don't know, and they will only think that the protagonist somehow saved someone, including the most basic food and drink to restore health. Passer-by readers don't know this setting, and the protagonist's special abilities are not mentioned in the front, so they just eat Heise's injuries. If the author wants to achieve better results, he must pay attention to this. The reader base of casual readers is larger than that of fans. Especially judging from the title of the book, this is a multi-world novel. Fans of Red Dead Redemption may not have played or read the next world, and they will still be confused about it. There is another point that I find inexplicable, which is the identity of the protagonist, soul travel or rebirth? What does the dream mean? I like the sense of immersion when reading novels, but it's hard to be immersed in it if you don't even know the identity of the protagonist.

Toxic article Things like hypnosis suddenly appeared out of nowhere. It's really poisonous that kills people. Brother, you might as well go out and meet Wolverine, and fight Thanos in the end. Realistic article, you can do it for me. Magic-like hypnosis suddenly appears, and acupoints are a hundred times more reliable. You can smell the poison from 800 meters away. You are still feeding poison here. Shennong is dead. Abandon the book in Chapter 40. I suggest you run away when you see this comment.

I think it's well written, but I don't know what the protagonist's obsession is, and I can't understand the motivations of some of his actions. As for time travellers, there are some who make up for their regrets, some who are just a salty fish, some who seek to survive, some who go against the will of heaven and change their lives, and some who get rich and pick up girls. What does the protagonist want to do? He must want revenge, but to whom? Is it the person who bullied him, this unfair society? There are also game plots and character settings that you game players tacitly understand, leaving casual readers confused.

How should I put it, a good story about survival in another world, but it is extremely poisonous because of your own imagination. You just honestly promoted the story of the big prostitute. At most, you can say that you have no innovation, but first you reflected the low status of Chinese people in the United States, and then you used the unrealistic skill of hypnosis. What is this called? Do it to death. Eighty percent of the time it is because the author has looked up too much information and wants to reflect too much, and the result is a failure. Being able to do one thing well is already very good. Why not just write an enjoyable article? From my point of view, this book will not last long.

It's always a damn oppressive feeling! Can't you beat him to death? Gotta wait for him to jump! The plot is inexplicable! It's like the whole world is targeting the protagonist! Are you disgusted? ! !

It's a pity that a novel with such good writing and plot concept has been stopped...

The struggle between the Chinese slaves sent to the United States by the Qing Dynasty and the colonists was a line that I did not expect. It's a bit surprising. I didn't expect the author to slowly lay out this line in the plot of the eldest cousin. It's just that the layout seems a bit too big and the author can't grasp it.