Surviving in the Wilderness Starts with Red Dead Redemption 2

I've only read a bit, and I don't know how the author intends to portray Dutch. Generally speaking, Dutch was a good leader in the early stages, but he gradually went mad after Hosea's death. This is probably the opinion of most people, including myself. But Arthur's last mission before his death overturns all of this.

I was actually quite worried when I saw the author say there was no outline. I've been reading novels since I was 13, and now I'm 32, almost 20 years old. I've also tried writing some things, though they all flopped. But while the secrets of success may not be replicable, the lessons of failure will always be helpful. I have a small suggestion; please forgive me if it offends you.

Your opening was hilarious; it skipped the snow mountain chapter entirely. The other fanfictions of "Big Brother" are more methodical, simply copying the plot from chapter 1 to chapter 3, showing the two families changing their fates, and then there's no "successfully retiring," it feels like there's nothing left to write.

This book feels somewhat vague and overly geared towards fans. The author also frequently uses flashbacks, describing events before explaining their causes. Many plot points are confusing for casual readers unfamiliar with the game's storyline.

Highly Toxic Article Hypnosis has suddenly appeared out of nowhere, it's practically deadly, bro! You might as well just run into Wolverine and end up fighting Thanos. This is a realistic story, and you give me this sudden magical hypnosis? Even acupressure would be a hundred times more reliable. This poison is so potent it's detectable from 800 meters away, yet you're still feeding it poison.

I think it's well-written, but I don't know what the protagonist's obsession is, and I can't understand the motivations behind some of his actions. Transmigrators come in all shapes and sizes: some want to make up for past regrets, some want to live a carefree life, some want to survive, some want to defy fate, and some want to get rich and pick up girls. What exactly does the protagonist want?

To put it simply, what could have been a perfectly good isekai survival story was ruined by your own wild imagination. If you had just focused on the main character's storyline, you might have lacked originality, but first you highlighted the low social status of Chinese people in America, then you introduced unrealistic hypnotic abilities—what do you call that? It's suicidal.

This damn oppressive feeling is constant! Can't you just kill him? You have to wait for him to jump! The plot is nonsensical! It's like the whole world is against the protagonist! Isn't that disgusting?!

It's such a pity that such a well-written novel with a compelling plot was discontinued...

The struggle between Chinese slaves sent to America by the Qing Dynasty and the colonists was a storyline I hadn't anticipated. It was quite impressive; I didn't expect the author to gradually develop this plot within the story of "My Cousin." However, the scope seemed a bit too grand, and the author seemed to struggle with its control.