I Have a Xianwu Panel

Just from reading the introduction, you know that this book will go to Africa.

Alas, novices should not write about double wear, it will easily collapse.

The more I look at it, the more evil I feel. The earth-level spiritual roots need to be built up to build a physical body to withstand it. The heaven-level spiritual roots are born with a golden elixir body?

Isn't it good to work part-time as a novelist? You'll starve if you work full time.

The first chapter will dissuade 90% of readers😓

Is the author too ambitious? Can he control the opposition of human nature? New authors generally shouldn't expect to be crowned gods with one book, right? Isn't the accumulated experience of writing cool fan fiction not popular... After reading a few chapters, it feels boring. How can you stand out in so many new books is the question you should think about. There is no need to think too far. Entering the palace is not something that is difficult for readers to accept. Anyway, there are so many great gods, so you are not missing out! It's a good meal, not shabby

Generally speaking, there is no problem. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far. If it continues to develop at this pace, it will be fine. Come on, looking forward to it.

I'm speechless if I practice my qi well, not just my body, but my body.

I came here from Daily Poison. When I saw the introduction, I couldn't help but comment. Double penetration is almost the biggest poisonous point in online novels.

Move bricks, otherwise you will starve to death

Let's start by saying that the protagonist's number is 1, which means that the first player is at least among the first! As a result, in the memory of the first BOSS, there was a player who was a master and killed several players (according to the timeline, at least a few days before the protagonist). The boss that the protagonist killed the next day was stated by the player that it had been 5 days since the server was opened. He entered the game on the 4th day on the 1st. I will complain before deleting the book. I read 7 chapters.

The author's writing is inconsistent. I mentioned earlier that I recalled that Du Han saw a master player, and then he wrote on the back that it had only been five days since the server was launched, and he was a master a few days ago, right? Hahahaha, I laughed to death. Chapter 8 is really poisonous. The chronological order is wrong. Your writing of this novel is really awesome. Listen to my advice, turn off the computer and carry the bucket into the factory. You are not suitable for writing novels. The background explanation is unclear, and the chronological order is fucking wrong. Did you copy the role of Duhan somewhere and move a whole section over, so the chronological order is different?

Other people's systems have no limits. Isn't your system too stretched?

Why is it that after killing so many people, there is not even a treasure chest of golden elixirs? The yield rate of this treasure chest is too strange.

Usually I read at least three chapters. The damage in the first chapter is too high, and the first page of the second chapter is unbearable. . It's really awesome.

This kind of plot. Designed like shit. This is the beginning of the plot. How disgusting. The reason why civilization is civilization is that there will be no mass murder. Especially ordinary villagers like you who go around catching players and killing them. Two fools! He's not a bandit from the Demon Cult.

When I saw Chapter 7.8, There were so many questions that I couldn't stand it anymore.

This introduction is ridiculous, and the plot is even more ridiculous.