Executor of the Myriad Heavens: Starting with Watch Dogs

After reading the first two chapters, I thought the protagonist was a master, but I never expected that in the third chapter, knowing someone was going to kill him, the protagonist neither ran away nor killed anyone. What are you doing? Are you playing around?

Don't abandon your writing career! The most important thing in writing is perseverance. One author I used to admire, "Chalk White," was a complete flop. I was at the top of his fan rankings for his first two books, and I was only a minor leader. Then, with one book, he took off. Two Silver Alliance members, five Bronze Alliance members—I couldn't even make the top 100! I can only marvel at how successful my idol has become. I believe you can do it too! Keep it up!

I just don't get it. I thought you were going to write about the epic WWII in your Call of Duty story, but you spent most of the chapter on some crappy boxing?! If you wanted to write about boxing or martial arts, you should have written about Wong Fei-hung or something. Call of Duty is all about cars, guns, and explosions! Writing about boxing? Are you crazy?

🤔 Oh my god, author, what are you even writing? Reading this book is like facing the King in Yellow.

I don't know what the main plot of your novel is. 1. The protagonist doesn't build his own power; 2. He doesn't collect, research, and combine technologies; 3. His personal combat strength hasn't improved; 4. None of the above apply, so it's not a wish-fulfillment novel. Then what is the protagonist's goal? Immortality or entertainment?

What are you writing? Are you replacing a game character and writing the game's plot for us to see? The protagonist knows the plot can't be changed, so why would anyone read your novel if you're just following the game's story?

Tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away.

This book should just be abandoned. It took three years to write just over 800 chapters. Friendly reminder: you might as well go work in a factory tightening screws.

To be honest, it's quite frustrating. At least 60% of the plot is based on the original work. I don't understand if the protagonist is just a simp, constantly fawning over the main characters. What I see is a simp acting like an idiot in every world, desperately following the plot.

To be fair, there's a reason this book didn't even make the bestseller list.