A Blade at His Back, a Martial Saint Among Men

After seeing the second script, the author's biggest failure so far is that he reversed the opening script and the second script. The second script should be the beginning, and the first one should be written in detail as the second or inheritance mission script. It would be much better. After all, your first script was all about "meow" and "king", killing people, monsters and emperors. In the second script, you will be shocked by the momentum of a martial arts practitioner? ! ! !

The blood of enemies that can't be killed is endless, and the tears of heroes are left behind.

Escape from the white blade and wander in the world of mortals.

Chapter 3: Persuading him to quit. The son of a general has been training for more than ten years. In a life-and-death fight, he is not the enemy of a veteran. He has not been in actual combat or sparring in these years, right? How did the protagonist become a Martial Saint with such rubbish talent?

After so long, I wonder if the author has noticed the reason for the poor results? It's a pity that this book is a book. After all, I can't help but want to say a few words. Let me talk about my own feelings first! When I first read the book, I was a little surprised. Although the plot is not comprehensive, the details are still very good and have a sense of immersion. All in all, the first world is very good. The reason why I have no motivation to follow it is that it starts from the world of the Republic of China. What is the reason? First, as the author of Awakening World, the length is too long, and everyone in the Republic of China knows that if you don't write some things, something will be missing. If you do, it will be 04, right? Based on my experience as a reader of Zhutian for several years, the best length is about 40 pages, because if you want to write a long story, you can change the world. This is really not recommended in the Republic of China, and it is also quite dangerous, isn't it? Second, isn't the author's choice of world a bit too weird? In the beginning, the world defeated demons and led an army of hundreds of thousands. Later, from time to time, I kept low and acted small, or fought alone. Don't you think there is a great sense of fragmentation, author? Third, the flow of heavens is cyclical and progressive, and the world level should be getting higher and higher, from A Chinese Ghost Story, to the Republic of China, to Xiu Chun Dao, etc., Author, don't you really find it strange? 😥😥😥 Speaking of this, I am not just thinking about it. What I mean is that I hope the author can understand where the mistakes are, so that he can make better progress in the future and produce better novels. PS: The author's writing style and detail processing in this book are still positive, but the outline is a bit weird 🙂🙂 That's about it, typing is super tiring

Protest: I really don't like the latest world. The people in China are not willing to be my slaves to the Qing Dynasty. Those who go to fight the Qing Dynasty are righteous men. You actually grabbed their food and grass at the critical moment and held them back. You also want to bring the team back to do the Qing Dynasty's lap! ! ! I won't subscribe if you don't change it.

Those who had lived in Liaozhai then went to live in the Republic of China. The Immortal Martial Transformation and National Skills were not interesting. The author should have done it the other way around. The first volume should be the Republic of China, and the second volume should be Liaozhai.

Traditional martial arts must be loyal to the emperor and patriotic! Bow your head when you see the emperor. Fantasy martial arts requires luck, proclaims himself emperor, and takes advantage of the general situation to suppress the world. If the two worlds suddenly merge, the fantasy world martial arts world of the same world level will definitely be able to outperform the traditional martial arts world.

The second volume, "The Great Master in the Red Dust," always calls for making contributions, establishing a career, and protecting the country. Unfortunately, there are only empty slogans, but only building a career and not protecting the country. Call it coquettish, not as good as Su Qing; call it bold, send Li Xiake, Yang Xingzhou, Su Hongxin and others, all they see is for the mission. When the power is small, they knock on the door and gibberish. The powerful warlords, Manchus and Qing Dynasties, etc., Shrink back and think that they are killing the king and assassinating him.

What is the protagonist doing after following Zuo Qianhu for more than ten years? Is he a loser? In terms of force, he is a veteran who cannot be defeated; In terms of layout, he goes with the flow and waits for his godfather to die, knowing that this is a Chinese Ghost Story. Switching to a pig will have the same effect.