Lost Magic Ring

Not highly recommended, but you can watch it. 3 Stars out of 5 stars The pace of this book is very slow. Even a master will reveal the main contradiction in the first and second chapters, stimulating the reader's desire to read, and thus extending the main line, such as the king sparing his life, global martial arts, etc. There are also some where suspense and contradiction go hand in hand, such as Lord of Mysteries. These are what we often call the three golden chapters. The beginning of this book is too slow, and the ability to persuade is maxed out. First is the background introduction, then the awards and new game production. And here we haven't even entered the main line. The first chapter at the beginning is a short group portrait, but it does not describe the characteristics of each person. It feels like a bunch of supporting characters to forcefully promote the plot. What it really does is serve to contrast the protagonist's calmness. Generally speaking, the award ceremony is mostly treated as a climax, because the award ceremony itself is the end of one thing and represents the end of a round. But this book serves as a beginning and uses a lot of words. It may have achieved its goal, but it actually wears down the reader's patience. However, although the first chapter is very ordinary, in the third and fourth chapters, the foreshadowing and cheating are handled very cleverly. The dialogue between the branch characters can not only form conflicts but also enrich the protagonist's character, creating suspense and laying down the foreshadowing. The psychological description of the supporting characters here is very brilliant. One person simply leaves, while the other person is psychologically crumpled. In the comparison, Cai Jue's psychological contradiction is thoroughly described. A simple acquisition story, but it enriched the image of three people. This is what readers want to see. As for the subsequent story, I probably expected it. From the story, it can be seen that this is not the first time that the protagonist has entered this dream. The only thing that surprised me is that the technology in the dream world seems to be very high, and the protagonist has a high combat effectiveness when he holds a gun for the first time. However, I am not satisfied with the author's description of the scene, because the picture is not strong and there is a lack of changes in the environment. So this is a novel that can be read, but not highly recommended. Give it 3 stars.

I couldn't help but get excited after seeing the testimonials on the shelves and came to the comment area to chat. Say whatever comes to mind, and I may continue to add Parts that do not involve spoilers: I have read more than a hundred chapters so far. I am definitely at the level of fairy grass. I never expected that a hardcore martial arts author can write such a cyber/game article, so awesome... Thank you for the daily guide) The first thirteen chapters of this book are for screening readers (it involves a lot of proper nouns, and it will not be good if you don't know the general understanding of the game industry). It is divided into two lines: urban games and cyber apocalypse. Not watery at all! ! As expected of the martial arts author, the fights are really graphic, but not as detailed as the fights I have seen that lasted for more than 20 chapters. The plot is compact but not tiring, and the over-the-top plot is just right (now that I think about it, the urban plot seems to soothe the mood? It's like a secret meeting? This is why the author said that he was very inspired by the secret). For readers like me who value the number of water words, if this article is not like the small world, the large-scale emotional drama in the later stage will be caught up to the end. Spoiler part: I have read several "travel articles" a long time ago, and these articles are in the same predicament: unable to create original plots If you want to pretend to be awesome, you must make an awesome game. How can you make readers accept that the game made by the protagonist is awesome? Then it must be copied from the masterpieces that already exist in reality. After hundreds of chapters, the reader has time and wants to make his own original game for a change. This original plot is written too much and readers who often tolerate the excitement cannot accept the "slow pace"; too little writing will make it impossible for readers to understand why this game can compete with so many masterpieces that have been experienced in person in terms of setting. I can only keep my head down and run wildly on the road of copying... Although the author later tried the trumpet and successfully skyrocketed (yes, he refers to the book The Richest Man), but in my opinion, it only increased the urban drama, and it cannot even be considered a game novel... This book really gave me a big surprise when I first read it. It perfectly solved the above-mentioned dilemma, although there are still certain focus issues. But it's still acceptable (of course, maybe the end of the world is the focus, hahaha) At first, I thought it was about saving the future one by one. It was the doomsday salvation story that had become a big hit before, and then it was made into a game that sold well in reality. In this way, the game story and the apocalypse story are perfectly balanced and the plot is not conflicting. It is simply a new path... Now it seems that you will continue to make a sequel? I'm really looking forward to the next plot. Come on, the "Magic Ring" setting has not appeared in more than a hundred chapters... Is this the title of the book? Also, I remember that Chu mentioned a magic ring about ten chapters ago, but it was very abrupt. Has the text been changed? I feel that this title and introduction plus the first three chapters can dissuade most readers except me who are attracted by the first three chapters 233 Casual chat: I still like to read stories about idealists, just like Ark, hahaha I just don't know if the real game industry can break this gradually sinking market. It feels like the entire industry has been in a strange atmosphere since 2077... Keanu Reeves said it right in the Unreal 5 demo of The Matrix, "Stay away from the marketing department!"

This is a somewhat slow novel that requires a certain amount of patience to read, but the content at the end is particularly exciting. Forty chapters have taken shape, but the plot is relatively depressing. Chapter 90 ushered in a small climax, Chapter 140 began to have climaxes one after another, which was particularly excitingx I couldn't read it when I reached more than 50 chapters. I only persisted because I took Amway, and I almost missed a good book.

Wouldn't it be nice to have ten days? I still can't help crying when I read this paragraph many years later. Jin Da's "The Journey of the Tang Dynasty", "The Legend of the Tang Dynasty" and "The Legend of the Wind of the Tang Dynasty" are really the eternal martial arts classics. My mobile phone was confiscated when I was in middle school, but I still insisted on reading ten words on the MP3 screen to read "The Journey of the Tang Dynasty" After working, I bought the physical copies of three more books. Unexpectedly, I discovered that Jinda is still there at the starting point. I look forward to another martial arts work from Jinda. I will definitely order all of them.

The ending of Sprinkling Flowers This is quite good, this is the first time I have seen this setting The writing is also good, and the plot is unpredictable, giving people surprises Although the end of the world and Zerg are common elements, they cannot hide the new ideas I hope more people will come and take a look {"TopicId":"721194625938948096","TopicName":"Good book"}

The routine felt very old, and some people said it was slow to catch on, so I read Chapter 60 and found that there was still no new ideas and ideas. The biggest shock to me was the protagonist and artificial intelligence describing the future in Chapter 10. No more. Other routines were seen ten years ago, just old wine in new bottles.

Golden snow person? Which one is Datang Chengfenglu or Datang Xingdar?

It's a good thing that Jin Da can keep publishing books, otherwise I might really face the problem of book shortage; I have to say that Jin Da is an imaginative and innovative author. This novel that combines games and the future world reflects a strong imagination. Although some settings from other games can be seen in the novel, the combination is very natural and there is no sense of splicing. The good aspects cannot be explained in a few words. I mainly want to make an evaluation of the possible shortcomings in this book: First, interactive time travel, this is a unique feature of this book, but some places are not well combined. For example, the protagonist's experience in the future world is very exciting and tense, making people breathless, but in reality, the world will seem dull; it is not that the writing is not exciting, or the imagination is not big enough, but that once the problem is solved, everyone will not feel nervous, and it makes people feel that the real world is just a pavement to realize the future. There are two aspects that are better handled here. One is the interaction of thoughts between the future and reality when the protagonist is in the realm; the second is when he was attacked by the Red Queen in Dry Bones Town at the beginning. At this time, everyone did not know where the problem was. Instead, they could slowly explore it in reality. In reality, Lord Shan's magnetic link weapon overload skill also inspired the protagonist, and reality truly became a buffer for solving future problems. If you look at other parts, it is after the protagonist has completed the plot and killed the boss that he enters the real world. At this time, the appeal of the real world is reduced, because there are no problems to solve, and programming only needs to add pavement for the future. If we change the approach and return the protagonist to the real world every time he faces the most severe challenge in the future, and then brainstorm in the real world to solve future problems, it may be possible to maintain a consistent sense of tension between the future world and the real world. In summary, there are shortcomings in interactivity, and the promotion of reality in the future has become the main aspect. Secondly, the plot in some places appears too suddenly, which makes people feel that there is insufficient foreshadowing. For example, the No. 1 Container in the House of Strange Objects was a point that attracted everyone's attention at the beginning, and later became a key turning event, but there was no foreshadowing in the middle, which made the turning point feel a bit abrupt. In other places, such as the protagonist's domain development, the work does not introduce enough about the domain, and there is not much introduction to the interaction between the future and reality generated by the domain, and it is easy to feel abrupt. Third aspect, strictly speaking, this is not a shortcoming of Jinda, it can even be an advantage, but it is a shortcoming of online novels. The biggest feature of online novels is that they require fast updates and low thresholds, so that they can more easily attract a new generation of people. But Jin Da's novels have a threshold. Although Jin Da has been lowering his language threshold when writing online novels over the years, and always tries to add some things related to the new generation of people, Jin Da's thinking level in the novel has not lowered, so in fact the threshold is still there, and there is not much introduction and introduction in some parts where the content is more complex. To explain, I think the reason is not that Jinda ignored this problem, but that he didn't know what other places might find it difficult to read, because from the perspective of Jinda's level, he felt that there was no problem in this place, because Jinda's knowledge and vision are relatively broad, and things like the collapse of Atari should be a blind spot for many people. The existence of this threshold may divide fans of Jin Da's works into two categories: loyal fans who find it interesting, and new readers who find some parts difficult to understand. The last point is that in Jin Da's novel, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is constantly changing. In the early characters, the female characters were generally as beautiful as fairies; in the middle-term works, the women began to be a little emotional, but they were also more like real women, such as Chengfeng Lu of the Tang Dynasty; in recent works, the portrayal of female characters is still very profound, but the love between men and women has been greatly reduced, and there is a deep understanding that women are not all good at farting. In this book, it can basically be considered that the love relationship between men and women is very low. Why is this happening? I think it is the change in Jin Da's experience. In the early stage, he was in the stage of secretly falling in love with and chasing girls, and he had pure and beautiful fantasies about girls; in the middle stage, he had some contact with girls, and even got married, and was exposed to more of girls' real life; in the recent stage, he may have been married for a long time, experienced a lot, and even had children, and the love relationship between men and women took a back seat. This last part is purely conjecture. Just watch it and enjoy it. Don't hit me if you see it, 😁.

To be honest, this is the first book review I have read in so many years. I read this book during the limited exemption period and read it all night long. The plot, plot and immersion are really good 👍👍👍 The author must persevere 👍👍👍 Don't be a eunuch, come on 🌹

The writing is really good. Writing novels is like game development. The author creates a world and shares it with readers. I look forward to the exciting content in the future.

The setting is amazing, I suggest you read it patiently.

I have only read a dozen chapters, and I can only say that I like many of the author's ideas. About games, about art. Create a world that can be self-consistent without players, a world, the ultimate art. I am determined to follow this book, author, come on, keep it up.

I just make games, and I really couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. Now I can really understand the speeches of the surgeons in the previous surgical live broadcast room.

The second book of the daily introduction, I opened it in the middle of the night yesterday and read it in one breath. Today, I tried to read the rest and it turned out to be the same cancerous books as before. It is indeed a daily introduction to poison. I have read it three or four times. Every time I read something that I can't stand and want to look back at the rest, it turns back to the common poisonous books.

I can't stand it now when I see Sheng Xia. The author can't advance the plot without a female character, right? It's a harem story. To be honest, in this context, with so many female characters all revolving around the male protagonist, the huge salvation atmosphere in the early stage is gone.

I stayed up late to read it, and I was really pleasantly surprised. The new book from an old author I like is really good. It does not cover the ugliness and greed of society like the weird cyberpunk that is now mainstream in Qidian. Instead, it is dedicated to describing the most beautiful feelings and dreams in the heart of a dreamer. It shows the wasteland apocalyptic cyberpunk with another spiritual outlook, allowing me to see a person's most sincere feelings and beautiful blessings. To be honest, I have had enough of all kinds of negative emotions in reality, and I don't want to accept so much negative energy while escaping from reality in my favorite novels, so I can't read many books, but most of the positive ones are too awkward and have no sense of substitution. The book shortage is really serious. Only this surprise book I discovered by chance can make me stay up late and read a book for a long time, as if I am back to my youth. I don't want to sleep anymore 🥱🥱🥱

It's interesting to see the subject matter enter the game world and make games, but at the beginning it's really... I dreamed back many years ago, and the little villain with an IQ defect in the novel "The King of Soldiers" was extremely disgusting. I really want to ask, is this to screen out readers with low resistance? In addition, this kind of "explanation later" behavior is really weird. Old readers will have to be patient. The reputation of a great author will make some readers be patient. There are also some personal personality reasons that will make them patient. Besides, who has so much patience for others, especially at the beginning when others don't understand the style, writing, structure, plot and characters at all...

I saw this book several times when I was scanning the list, but I missed it because the first few chapters were too long and too long-winded. I had the rare time to read it today, and it was indeed very good. Alas! Unfortunately, as a "free prostitute", since Qidian updated the "advertising patch", the books I am chasing have been cut down to 3. Recently, I have no time to do activities. I can't watch advertisements and do activities to support authors for the time being. It is really a bit regretful! It feels a bit pity to delete this book. Let's do this. I will add it to the bookshelf first. After I finish the exam in April and have time to do activities, I will re-order this book. Come on! Author! So well written!

Let's talk about the title of the protagonist. The title Mr. Chu only appears in the first few chapters. It is also said in the book that Cai Jue made a prank on Chu Qiancheng in order to make Chu Qiancheng feel younger. It does not appear in the book after it gets into the main topic.

Holy crap, did you write Wings of Doom? This is the first science fiction novel that I paid to read. The Doomsday Show was also written by you? I read it five times, and I still remember his brother's love for him. I accidentally discovered that you were the author of The Fury of the Herald. The Fury of the Herald was the starting point for me to read mecha novels. I was so fucking excited.

When I read the latest chapter, my brain was like the investigation bureau personnel in the book. It was shocked by Xiao Chu's words. Countless words and emotions came to my heart. I originally wanted to say something about this book, but in the end I found that I was short of words.

After reading Chapter 61 of City of the Future, I felt that Qin Zhen's personal description was a bit inconsistent. There is absolutely no logic in her stopping Juejing Shengxia from becoming a transcendent. She knows very well what kind of scene she will face in the end, and she also knows very well that Shengxia is the salvation puzzle. She had no reason to stop Sheng Xia from becoming a transcendent. I want to save the world, but instead of letting the salvation puzzle master its own strength and become stronger, I want to stop it. This idea seems immature and not in line with the character....

I wish my brothers and sisters a happy National Day in advance~ During the 7-day National Day, every night at around 10 o'clock, red envelopes for recommended votes will be dropped for the latest chapter. I hope everyone will support Jinda! Leave more messages and interact more! You can get out of the circle and do activities as soon as possible! (Secretly, I hope there is a big boss who can create a fanfic) All will be distributed within seven days of the National Day, best wishes! Wish you all a happy National Day again~ Interaction! Interactive! Interactive! Comment! Comment! Comment! Fan people! Fans! Fans!

Why are the first three chapters so bad? Readers who don't understand games have no sense of involvement, while readers who understand games are struck by lightning. . . The author doesn't understand games, why should he write about games?

The ideas in this book are very clear, and the jumps back and forth in time and space did not confuse the author's thinking. Rigorous🀄️brings a lot of jokes, making people smile after a hearty battle. There are many forces appearing in the book, the enemy's IQ is completely online, and the conspiracies and even conspiracy are very realistic. Unfortunately, there are too few book reviews, which makes people feel like they are playing a single-player game. In many cases, book reviews give readers a lot of happiness.

The lack of popularity of this book may be due to the long foreshadowing at the beginning. Most book lovers are accustomed to a fast pace, and slow foreshadowing cannot attract readers. It is difficult to understand the excellence of this book without seeing the key points. Moreover, the author currently does not have many resources and traffic, so he cannot promote it. I came across this book only after it was recommended by another author in his novel. He said that the author was one of his inspirations in writing novels, but I believe that gold always shines, and this book will definitely stand out!

New readers. Speaking of which, this rule that requires 100 fan points to post comments and book reviews is really a bit disgusting. Although it is understandable... But this rule is really unfriendly to new readers. The main purpose of posting is to say one thing. I just read Chapter 9, and I feel like the first, second, and third chapters can be cut off completely. The fourth chapter will be particularly attractive as the beginning. The background such as the falling out with the original studio can be mentioned in one stroke. The writing of the first three chapters is really too boring, and the angles jump around and the focus cannot be found, and it is also depressing. Above. (Standard ending:) Come on, author!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it feels like the protagonist comes into contact with a super artificial intelligence, and then uses the artificial intelligence to make games and defeat the primitive people of other major manufacturers. How to say it? There's nothing wrong with making games, after all, the protagonist's ideal is to make games. It just feels like a cannon to swat mosquitoes. With this artificial intelligence research, controllable nuclear fusion can solve human energy problems. Research on anti-cancer drugs can save hundreds of millions of people. Anyway, there are more meaningful things than making games. If you really want to write a game, would it be better to switch to a game system or something? The system task requires that the protagonist can only use this plug-in to make games and not do anything else.

This book is still a bit difficult to understand. You have to have at least played some stand-alone masterpieces to understand some of the jokes. Dark Souls, Red Dead Redemption, Genshin Impact

The beginning was really about giving up, the author had better revise it I almost didn't persist.