Datang Players

It has been many years and I have experienced many things, so I won't mention the past. Jin Da, don't hide it, you can't hide it with your sharpness. I understand your concerns, and I also know that this life is different from the past. .·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·. But if you continue at this pace, your results may not be ideal. Make a suggestion. Part of it is a little bolder. Some lessons learned. Your writing style is not in line with Internet writing, the rhythm is wrong, and the real thing has the material. I have hidden some things, and I won't recruit people even if I am tactful. There are many books written by great masters at the same stage, but very few are genuine. But it conforms to the rhythm of online literature, which is continuous and refreshing to read. No matter how many real things you have, tell the story slowly in this way. The results may not be ideal. Then there's the trick on hand. You are an old expert on this, so I won't say more. To speed up the pace a little bit, I mean the plot is tighter. Your real thing is very interesting, but it should not be attractive. Reading the line, serialization almost tastes like it. It's not like an online article anyway.

Become a fan of Brother Xun! The players of Datang Dynasty are really imaginative. Lei Changye is like a Zhuge from another world. He is as wise as the sea, has no tricks left, and is calm and calm. He is really the protagonist in my mind. I came here specifically to download Qidian, just to support!

A book I picked up a few days ago. I read it for a few days, and about halfway through it, it was quite engaging at first, but I felt like I couldn't stand it in the middle, and it felt like a running account. The beginning of the article can be creative indeed. The writing style is also good, the lyrics of the card opera are quite innovative, and the writing also has a feeling. It just feels like it's just a running story starting from Suzhou and then Huichuan. It's not interesting. It's also true in other novels. It feels like routine writing. It always feels like there is a different author. Especially, when faced with a hostile seventh- or eighth-grade expert who is so awesome, Xue Qingyi or Nie Hongniang here is frightened when she speaks and doesn't dare to offend. Why is this? And not once or twice, I don't know why. Everyone can see that this Lei Changye is powerful. Can't these few women see it? No way. This kind of plot happened more than once or twice. I watched Jiangzhi. The protagonist is not interested in these women either. The first half is a good book. Pull the back half across.

In the past, the first grade was higher than the ninth grade. . . According to the author, ninth grade is higher than first grade? Even in the Tang Dynasty, the first rank was high and the ninth rank was the lowest. . .

After reaching 30-40, I skipped watching or didn't watch it. The reasons are as follows: 1. A high-level martial arts plane to develop a card club. Can this increase productivity or improve cultivation? 2. Develop and develop into soldiers, but the control seems to be in the hands of the pig's feet. I wonder if it has been distributed to other sects? 3. Shouldn't the cultivation text be practiced well? Build a system of exercises? And then write stories about rivers and lakes?

Jin Dada is the author of "Chengfeng Lu of the Tang Dynasty". I'm so happy. I loved watching Dada's martial arts the most in junior high school 🙂

Open a new classic book and delete the introduction of the old book. Thank you to the author for personally helping readers avoid lightning.

It was probably around 12 years ago that I read the serialization of Chengfeng Lu of the Tang Dynasty in a martial arts magazine. Later, when I was in high school, I suddenly remembered it. I turned out the magazine and wanted to know more and more whether Zheng Dongting had ever competed in martial arts. I found three physical books of Chengfeng Lu online and finished reading them. After reading it repeatedly, I remembered Jin Xunzhe from then on. It's really good to find it at the starting point. I will support you more.

There is no specific image reference. The so-called card game in your book feels a bit self-explanatory. The writing is so awesome, but I don't feel much about it. Because the image is not clear, I suggest you get a projection device similar to Yu-Gi-Oh. This way the card playing will be fun and the readers will have a more sense of involvement. Otherwise, it will look a bit awkward. Anyway, the runes of the protagonist are almost flying to the sky, so it should not be a big problem to create this gadget.

Seeing the late stage, the combat power has basically completely collapsed. A villain has a ninth level, and the entire Tang Dynasty has nine ninth levels. Once you go to Europe, a random assassin will have four or five ninth levels. The protagonist directly conquered six ninth levels, and there are also ninth levels from other forces. Your high-end strength in Europe is three or four times that of the Central Plains. Is it reasonable? I won't complain about your sixth-level killing of ninth-level people.

It feels disgusting to not be able to upgrade without merit. It would be understandable if you were unable to ascend without merit. After all, it is okay to immigrate to the fairy world and let people examine your character. But it's strange that you can't keep fit (cultivate) without doing good deeds.

The author's writing style is very skillful and sophisticated, and he has put in a lot of effort. Come on.

I don't know if I'm too impetuous now, and I don't have the heart to read the book at all. If the first chapter doesn't have any highlights, I won't read the second chapter.

Statistics of all Jin Xunzhe's works, if you are interested, you can look them up yourself 🤓

Thanks to Baiyin Dameng for pointing the way... It must have been more than 10 years ago in The Escort of the Tang Dynasty. I still remember the hero with super archery skills who saved the two girls from dying on the battlefield. I miss the time when I went to the bookstore to watch martial arts and was obsessed with it.

I can't understand the protagonist's behavior. He is both obsessed with things and is always involved in troublesome things. This kind of plot makes people feel uncomfortable and has no sense of involvement.

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To be honest, the protagonist's upgrade method is very fascinating, the invention method is also very fascinating, and Goldfinger is even more fascinating.

This book is actually finished. You do have the problems at the beginning of your book, but I personally feel that the appeal of the game to players is too heavily described in the later stages. Is it reasonable for players to change factions just to play the game? In fact, it makes sense, but it would be very boring. Because the character created in this way is very low-level. The characters created in the novel all have their own personalities and desires. If they all become brainless due to game addiction, it will inevitably make people question the authenticity of these historical celebrities. As a reader, it is really difficult to accept that the princes, generals and ministers in history would be played around by several games played by the protagonist. Author, do you think it is reasonable?

The writing and creativity are very good, but the insertion into the plot is too deliberate, and the emotions are inexplicable. Since Xuan Jin mentioned some enlightening points about the general trend of the world, he also joined in. Surrounded by the fifth natural disaster that is visible to the naked eye, he does not consider his own strength or the people around him. For example, the male protagonist learns to raise sword-thorned monkeys, and goes to forbidden areas every time, and he still says that he wants to be stubborn. It's okay if he's discovered the first time, but he'll go the second time. . .

Reading experience of Jin Xunzhe's works: "The Day the Stars Fall" This is a story about a genius. The genius boy Sui Feng has a common problem with geniuses. Because he accidentally injured his junior sister (childhood sweetheart), he became introverted with guilt and self-blame, and started a journey of salvation with a group of other genius teenagers. In the end, he discovered that all this was a premeditation, that the person he loved had plotted against him, and that he was just a pathetic person. (People are like this sometimes in life, and love is sometimes very cruel) In times of despair, the only reason he could live was his own talent (I am born with talents that will be useful, and I have no one to rely on but myself), and he began to darken. In the end, with the warmth of passionate bosom friends and friendship, we defeated the last big BOSS and completed our redemption. He discovered that love is faith, because we need love and friendship. Yes, we are a group of people who are so lacking in love. So, this is actually a story about love. Some people are so passionate and passionate, but I have gradually lost the ability to love while living in this mortal world.

Reading experience of Jin Xunzhe's works: "The Forgotten Master" I read "The Forgotten Master" when I was in college. What is the Forgotten Master is that you never despair, never give up, never bow your head, and never surrender. It sounds like a great idea, but it has a great impact on my life. I like basketball very much and I shoot very accurately. Sometimes when I am blocked, I get the ball back immediately and shoot again. One of my classmates said, if you can do things like this in the future, you will definitely succeed. This sentence encouraged me. To paraphrase a sentence from Bloody Gylinder, in the abyss of despair, you never know what will surface at the next moment. I probably watched The Master of Forgetting several times, but I haven't watched it much recently, maybe I'm getting old. This is a story about freedom, asking who in the world can truly be at ease. This is a story about growth. Birds will one day fight against the sky. Finally, I think this is a story about teenagers, who have friendship and ignorant love. In my memory, we watched the fireworks together on New Year's Eve. It was so quietly, brilliantly and unforgettably imprinted in people's memories. And what the girl I like said to you on the Lantern Festival: I will always remember the day you took me to watch the Apricot Blossom Rain and the Fire Dragon Dance. Remember what you said to me, and I will remember it forever. In addition, this is a very humorous story. The most impressive one is Bai Suanji. I miss him a little, maybe because although he is calculating, he still remembers friendship. This is a bit like us in reality. Ha, go watch The Forgotten Master again, NEVER EVER GIVE UP.

Build a building. If you have any questions about the plot, you can raise them in this building. Jin will pick some answers 😁

As expected of a boss, it is well written. It is a genre that combines martial arts, online games and history. Those who like Super Mechanic can also read this book. It is of the same type. Those who like Tang Dynasty novels can also read it.

Reading experience of Jin Xunzhe's works: The Tang Dynasty Trilogy Watching "The Guardians of the Tang Dynasty", I feel that when doing things, I only ask about the meaning. There are still people who cannot be defeated, not even once. My favorite sentence at the end: Hero, although the future is dangerous, if you are open-minded, you may not be unable to live in peace. This is Jin Xunzhe's first martial arts novel. Every book is a climax, and it really shows off his talents. You will feel very happy when you read "Datang Chengfeng Lu" with its humorous language. This novel is a bit like Stephen Chow's movie. It seems like a comedy at first, but it's actually a tragicomedy. It takes a lot of restraint for a person to learn martial arts and be proud of the world, but choose to remain unknown. This is a very noble character. What moved me even more was that even so, his pride was always in his heart, and in his dreams, he was still the same young man as before. There is a sentence that I like very much: "All chivalrous knights are idiots. No matter how good they pretend to be, they are just children who have not grown up. There is nothing else in our Tang Dynasty. One has many knights and the other has many poems. But it is useless no matter how beautiful or colorful the poems are. Without such a idiot in the heart, no one can sing." --- A chivalrous and righteous idiot's dream. Watching "The Legend of the Emperor of the Tang Dynasty" is like recalling one's own youth, maybe youth is just wasted. The most difficult thing for people is to let go, such as first love. But I also like the sentences at the end: People always have to grow up, no matter how you dodge. There will always be some unavoidable things in this world. Maybe you can't accompany me through the rest of my life, but I will always remember the memories you brought to me. We are still friends since childhood, the Three Musketeers of Poyang Lake forever. No one can take away our youthful years in Poyang Lake.

I remember that when I was in the fifth grade of primary school, I was chasing you in "The Record of the Wind in the Tang Dynasty" and "Tingxue Tower" by Cang Yue. I still have fresh memories of the Luoyang Sword Discussion Conference and the battle of the Yeluo Xinghe Sword that night! ! !

I've only read a few chapters, and the setting is still relatively new, but I can't stand it. There is no way, there are a lot of names at the beginning, and if you read too quickly, you have to go back and see which character belongs to which camp. The difficulty is not that there are many people. The difficulty is that everyone has a role, but no one's characteristics can be remembered, and the names are not common or distinctive.        ，，！ These characters will need to appear later, and it's easy to remember by just arranging a copy of the mission. There is no need to give so many characters at the beginning. After all, does the beginning have much to do with these characters? At most, it has something to do with their sect, right? It's just a suggestion, nothing else. This kind of problem with a lot of characters affects the reading experience, and it is also an area where the author can improve. I hope the author's next book will be better.

I read more than ten chapters and didn't understand. I was so confused🤔 that I ran away.

Well, let me talk about a few bugs that I think. I didn't explain clearly. The first one is the player's background, life background, cultural background, educational background, and what kind of living environment they want to play this game. They also follow the protagonist's routines and don't have their own unique knowledge system. Even the protagonists in the history of the earth should not be so naive after decades of experience. The second is the core golden finger of the protagonist, which can turn falsehood into reality, and resources can be transformed universally. Drawings and talismans can generate resources, and a person who draws has all his skills? So silly. . . , Put in the raw materials and there will be tools for painting and processing. Is it the transformation of matter and information? 😒 The third thing is that the Kongkong'er treasure you mentioned is all kinds of treasure refining materials, but later you said that they are all used up. It feels like your treasures are all universal and all-purpose essence. There are no redundant materials. Are there no unique materials reserved that can only be used by unique formulas? 🙂 Fourthly, the combat power system is not clear. The combat power of your seventh and fourth grades can be compared. It is so vague. Moreover, the characteristics of each grade are not clear, and the personal evolution system is not clear. Looking at it, there are many things that I feel are inappropriate and cannot be justified.

Datang escorts, almost 20 years passed in a flash. I wish the author all the best and a happy life.