Godzilla Begins with Nuclear Contamination

The protagonist himself and the world view have not yet been developed well, so using too much text to describe the little human girl is putting the cart before the horse, right? There aren't many updates to begin with, so shouldn't the early chapters be used to describe the protagonist?

I write a little bit here and a little bit there, and I don't know what the author wants to write. The last chapter was from the perspective of the protagonist, and the next chapter suddenly jumps to the perspective of the supporting character. When it jumps to the supporting character, it jumps directly without any foreshadowing. There is no distinction between priority and priority. It feels like the author just writes whatever comes to mind without an outline, and it looks very scattered.

Why did you start writing supporting roles again...

Godzilla

The writing is messy. Are you doing some magic tricks when writing your book? Why does the content jump from beginning to end without being connected? Why not just stop writing and waste time?

I'm starving to death!

Red Lotus

Does anyone support this humble author who writes works? I really feel like vomiting when I write it.

Why do you have to write double lines? I don't feel the other side at all.

After reading chapter 15, I couldn't stand it. . . There is nothing wrong with writing another character. It also shows that the author wanted to write the book carefully. But it's really embarrassing to just write another character without any foreshadowing. Everyone who comes here to read the book knows why they are here. It doesn't mean that you can't write other things, but you can't write several chapters at a time. . .

As expected of the fantasy channel's Godzilla, it has a decent fantasy flavor

I don't understand, sometimes the protagonist, sometimes Mo Huan, sometimes Shen

Damn it, what is the name of the protagonist Godzilla?

In Chapter 23, Xu Qi and Mo Huan were written down. Also, they were all directed at Godzilla. You wrote this Mo Huan is just disgusting.

Qq: Godzilla's happy hometown 884177297 The answer is: ko no GoGo da! Color pictures!

The Evolution of Alien Beasts: A Godzilla's Journey Through Time and Space. The former one has an appendix. The second one is very interesting.

Hello everyone, I am Gugugu pro! My goal is to become a full-time novelist! So I want to get feedback from readers, which will allow me to hear more voices, whether it is criticism or praise, complaints or emotions, please let me hear your voice! You can comment as much as you like, and I would be even more grateful if you could help me complete this questionnaire after each update! What do you think will happen next? Who do you think are important characters? What do you think each character wants? If there is foreshadowing, where do you think it is? What previous information do you think is important? What do you think are the places that make you feel confused?

Chapter 1: The dialogue between the system and the protagonist. It's good to keep one person out of ten. It's simply poisonous.