Starting with Blue Silver Grass

Shennong Tasting Herbs: I was a little disappointed after reading the Blue Silver Grass guide (each paragraph ends with a personal reflection, making the context feel disjointed). However, the author has improved a lot; the guide is so well-written it doesn't seem like it was written by the same person.

It was fine at first glance, but a few things did have some impact. It's understandable that they want to take over the world of Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, but why cultivate Zhang Wuji and a bunch of others? Even if they want a force, they don't have to be like little nannies. I feel awkward about the protagonist helping other protagonists for free, even though there's no real threat.

The most difficult aspect of the multiverse system is the integration of power systems. My advice is that power is power. If a world is suitable for all systems, then the upper limit determines the level. Within the same realm, victory or defeat depends on the depth and development of that realm.

Please stop writing this mess and just start a new book. I think with your approach, simply writing about Douluo Continent and adding some cheat codes from other worlds would be much better. The way you're writing it now is what this book is; it's not even as good as the Douluo fanfics you criticized earlier.

Alan

The author is actually quite active, though sometimes their words can be a bit discouraging, but we can see they're still working very hard 👍. Keep going! Maybe one day they'll be updating over 10,000 words a day!!! 😍 So first, remove the content in parentheses below the introduction! Then change it to: "The book is in trouble!

To be honest, this book gave me goosebumps. Could you please not make the scene transitions so abrupt? The book's setting is good, but the scene transitions are unbearable. Many times I can't even tell which world I'm in. Sometimes the scene changes several times in a single chapter without any warning. Author, don't you find it difficult to read?

After reading another fanfiction, I found a pretty good point: Tang San's Blue Silver Grass completely went down the wrong path. Aside from its 100,000-year spirit ring, the best other spirit rings for Blue Silver Grass should have come from plant-type spirit beasts.

It's quite good, but sometimes you need to think outside the box to appreciate the author's witty remarks. The synopsis is rather discouraging; I suggest revising it. You should read this novel slowly, or you might miss some of the exciting parts.

I saw this in a group, just sharing it with you all.