Starting with Blue Silver Grass

Shennong Changcao: I read the Blue Silver Grass guide and was a little disappointed (each paragraph is followed by a personal statement, which makes it feel like the context cannot be connected). However, the author has made great progress and the guide is so well written that it doesn't look like it was written by one person.

After reading it, it was good, but there are a few points that do have some impact. It is understandable that Yitian World wants to occupy it, but why should we train Zhang Wuji and the others? Although I want to be powerful, I don't have to act like a babysitter. I feel uncomfortable with the protagonist helping other protagonists for free, although there is no threat. Also, the protagonist's mother gave birth to another child, for no reason. I don't understand why I wrote this. Is it to support my parents in their old age? No need. Oh, this is a personal complaint. Come on, author.

The most difficult thing about Zhutianliu is the integration of the power system. To give you some advice, power is power. If there is a world suitable for all systems, then what determines the level is the upper limit. What determines winning or losing in the same realm lies in the deep development of a realm. (For example, if the Douluo system has martial arts, Tang San and all the time travelers are more powerful than the same level). The improvement of quality affects the subsequent increase of the upper limit of the system. Different worlds will bring suppression to the power of foreign systems. For example, in Douluo's field, the world can be regarded as a larger field. The greater the difference between foreign systems, the more powerful the suppression will be. For example, the Great Overlord and Doupo Cangqiong Xiaoyan have to go through spiritual transformation when they first arrive at the Great Overlord, so that Doupo is the lower plane under the Great Overlord. Then they can be regarded as branches of the same system. This transformation is equivalent to connected tributaries flowing into a larger place. The Douluo book describes that the greatest destruction of gods cannot be compared to Dou Di. It is assumed that the most powerful god is equal to half-step Dou Di. But Dou Di came to Douluo and was suppressed, which means Dou Sheng may also be Dou Zhuzun.

Please stop writing it. It's a mess and start a new book. I think based on your idea, it would be much better to simply write about Douluo and then open up some stories about other worlds. If you write this book like this, it will be like this. It is not as good as the several Douluo fan books you criticized earlier.

Alan

The author is actually very active, but sometimes what he says is a bit depressing, but we can see that the author is still working very hard 👍 and persevere! Maybe there will be more than 10,000 updates per day one day! ! ! 😍 So first put the introduction below. Remove the content in brackets! Then changed to: "The book is panicking! Then I can do it and I can't open this book in a mood that will taint the readers' eyes! I will definitely be able to finish the book! It will not be unfinished! It will not be too messy!" 😆😁😜 (Tell the readers that you can do it 🥺) (If you are a man, you can do it!)

One thing I have to say is that this book made me feel numb while reading it. Can the scene switching be less abrupt? The setting of the book is also very good, but the scene switching made me unbearable. Many times I couldn't react to what world I was in. Sometimes the scene switches back and forth several times in one chapter without any warning. Don't you think it looks very laborious, author?

After reading another fan, I think there is a pretty good theory: Tang San's Blue Silver Grass went completely wrong. Except for the hundred thousand year soul ring, the other soul rings of Blue Silver Grass are best from plant-type soul beasts. If it weren't for the Ice and Fire Eyes and the Awakened Blue Silver Emperor, Tang San's Blue Silver Grass would at least be useless. If there is a plant-based soul beast path, the Blue Silver Grass Spirit can surpass the Blue Silver Emperor in the later stage, and if the resistance points are full, it can be played as the Douluo version of Senju Hashirama and Bai Zetsu.

It's quite interesting, but sometimes it requires some brain teasers, otherwise you won't be able to understand the author's connotations. The introduction is quite discouraging and I suggest you change it. You should read this novel slowly, otherwise you will easily miss the exciting content.

I saw it from a certain group, let me give it a look