I Am the Dragon King in the Dragon Clan

The Dragon 1 to Dragon 3 parts are quite good. The Japanese stage is a bit slow, but it's still acceptable. After reading this part, you can stop and go straight to the finale of the last chapter (there is no need to read the second to last chapter, the ending has almost no connection with the previous plot). In the plot of Dragon 45 (all of The Last Throne), I just let myself go. Most of it is incomprehensible, and a few are extremely poisonous. This part of the plot is outrageous. There is no emotional line and no sugar. There is no need to watch it at all. The emotions of the characters written by the author in the early stage are really good. He should give full play to his strengths in writing emotions. Even if he writes about daily stock trading in the later stage, it will be much better than this incomprehensible arctic plot, which is a bit regretful.

It's really procrastinating... I have to write a whole page for one action in the same fight, and write the same content two or three times. In a battle, I have to write the initial means, the middle means, the final means, the final means, and I have to write the protagonist's reaction every time. Chapter 30 is still at a battle, and I opened 3 lines, but each one made no progress at all. Just when Lu Mingfei was undergoing surgery to confirm with Lu Lincheng, this section had been used more than three times. I really started to suspect that the first volume and the latest volume were not written by the same person. The first volume is obviously so neat and refreshing without being sloppy. 🤔The recent text is not worth the money

After reading the Japanese chapter, I couldn't help it anymore. I felt that the entire Japanese chapter was too boring. The plot overlapped too much with the original work, and the combat power was broken when I fought with Lu Mingze. It was completely necessary for the plot, and there were many language errors. Didn't you check it before publishing it? In the final battle with the black dragon, you described him as the protagonist, and then the humanoid protagonist also appeared. In the end, you said that the black dragon was Lu Mingfei, and then there was no explanation. With your writing style and writing ideas, you really don't want to say anything.

Why does it feel like the more you look at the back, the more water you get?

There are conflicts in the narrative, narration, and character descriptions in the article. For example, it is written that the protagonist "should be stable, in order to protect himself and Jormungandr" and treats Fingel and others with extreme arrogance and indifference to life. There are also many details such as Fingel's "faith shaken" due to the influence of Long Wei. It's really annoying to think about it... Killing for your own "absolute" safety without trying to communicate. Would you like to be treated like this? Author, are you really willing and willing to accept the so-called "dragon's nature can easily destroy human nature"? The writing was decent at the beginning, but the character began to twist in the end... It's really scary to say that as the plot progresses, many readers assume the identity of the protagonist, and then begin to invade ideologically, describing the protagonist as innocent and handsome, to whitewash the so-called necessity and legitimacy of killing: why I specifically mention this is because only a little idea from the author can change this bad plot. You can read what I wrote in the picture in the last book review I posted. The protagonist is also a time traveler, and his identity is the Wind King during the Summer Mourning. Even in this extremely unfavorable situation, the protagonist did not kill or seriously injure anyone in the end, and began to establish friendly communication with Angers and others (only a small part of the beginning is screenshot in the picture)

The writing is actually pretty good, and I enjoyed reading it. It's just that in the later period, when the protagonist becomes stronger, he always has cold eyes and no sense of humility towards anyone. The arrogance of the earth and the mountains is always written on his face. He has no friends except the supporting female protagonist. It would be great if he could also maintain respect for the so-called ants.

This seems to be my first fully ordered book? It's probably one of the better-looking among the Dragon Clan fics. Anyway, the setting irritates me. I just hope that the author will be less watery and more updated, and each chapter will be longer...😏

It's really okay, but the author's escape part was a bit rushed for the sake of plot. Those who have read the original work feel a bit confused, let alone those who have not read it. Also, it is good that this book can be written consistently. After all, there are a lot of pitfalls (there are still two pairs of twins who have not yet appeared) Come, there are strange little devils, etc.), So the back of this book is the author's own imagination. As for why he helped Ming Concubine run away in the comment area, he probably wanted to follow Ming Concubine to that mysterious place and find out who was secretly promoting the awakening of the Dragon Clan. The last two pairs of twin thieves haven't been written yet, so it depends on the author's performance

I just read the last ten or twenty chapters of the main text, and I thought this book was quite interesting. I also recommended this book to others in the group, but he asked me to subscribe to Chapter 30 of the final Throne. I jumped over and subscribed, it was so well written. It is recommended that everyone jump to Chapter 30 of the Last Throne Arc (Xia Mi's Charm) before subscribing to the main text to see how well the author writes the character plot. Then decide whether to subscribe or not.

You can have a harem but in the end there should be no more than three. One on the left, one on the right, and one on the top 😏😏 Chen Xiaoxiao, painted in pear clothes,,, Xia Mi? The author flies bravely, and book friends will always be with him 🪖

The author will see if there is any use for it. The secret party is the secret party in Europe. There are very few Chinese in Kassel College, and they are all wild mixed-races. Chinese mixed-races exist in the form of families. Chinese mixed-races are the only people in the world who dare to admit that they are mixed-races. Almost all emperors in ancient times are mixed-races. Qin Shihuang is even an ancient dragon (I don't remember if he is the Dragon King). Chinese mixed-races claim to be the descendants of dragons. I don't know if the author writes about Chinese mixed-races. He doesn't write much about Jiangnan, but he can indeed write good stories. Many dragon kings have appeared in China, as well as the descendants of the emperors and mixed-race families set in the original works. China uses dragons as totems. In Chen Motong's family, not only did she have A-level Chen Motong, but she also had her younger brother "Key" who could open all the doors. Her mother had appeared in the story of Three Gorges, and she herself was appointed as the wife of the head of the family by the Gattuso family. It was certain that her family background was extraordinary. Others can comment if they have anything to add.

The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. The protagonist, Dragon King, has to be conceited. To be conceited, he has to watch his opponent make moves to disgust him step by step. Then he says that he has unparalleled combat power and beats the opponent to death. It is just a hard-water battle chapter and a forced plot. For all opponents, the protagonist starts the fight directly, and then the opponent sets up traps and reveals their trump cards, and then the protagonist watches the opponent upgrade. This is the only way to fight the opponent. Can't you come up and kill the opponent? It's a fly day and day, and you want to swat the fly, but you still have to watch the fly crawling around on the top of your bowl? This is not called arrogance, this is called mountain cannon. There are also many plot points that are very rough and were not explained clearly afterwards. Many times, it was so cloudy that I had to pretend to be the Riddler. Another feeling is that the author has not read it after writing it. Every chapter, and even every paragraph of some chapters has grammatical errors and typos. The story is a good story, but there are so many problems. Even if I like reading it, it becomes more and more annoying, awkward and disgusting after reading it -_-||.

I feel like these hybrids are not killing dragons for world peace at all, but for themselves to rule the world... Compared to the King of Earth and Mountain who eats potato chips in hiding, the King of Bronze and Fire who plays interstellar in the Internet cafe, and the King of Ocean and Sea who fishes and paddles in the sea, I think the Gattuso family and the Sheqiba family who drink and eat meat every day are more attractive. Like an exploiter, more like a villain... Furthermore, every time the Dragon King is resurrected, the money exploited does not seem to be returned to the hands of the exploited after they are killed. On the contrary, the Dragon King's own wealth is all taken over by the Dragon Slayer... So how do you think the hybrid is the biggest tyrant 🤔🤔🤔

According to the world view, the four monarchs are bound to die, and the dragons are also yelled at by everyone. Even big guys like Lu Mingze and Anger are toying with the Dragon King. I am very curious about how the setting of the protagonist traveling through time and becoming the Dragon King will be fulfilled in the end.

Come! Let me see who you want to put on top.

Not to mention anything else, the gay atmosphere is too strong. One moment, Caesar's broad chest muscles, and the next moment, the dinner cooked by Chu Zihang looks like a thirty-year-old beautiful woman wearing a bath towel. I don't know if you want to make money as a fujoshi, but it's enough anyway.

It was written by Dawuwu. The Dragon King, who has complete powers of bronze and fire, and the most powerful of the four series, the power of earth and mountain, fights like this with Lu Mingfei, who consumes a quarter of his soul. To put it nicely, it means that his fighting power has collapsed. Let's get together and break up. I had fully booked it until yesterday. I felt bad when I read the two chapters last night.

The writing is messy and illogical. There are flaws everywhere. It makes other people look like fools.

Why do I feel like the protagonist is so weak in the last few chapters? He is the one who controls the power among the four dragon kings, and he has eaten the twins of bronze and fire. Shouldn't he crush those under the dragon king when he encounters them? How can he fight a hybrid for two chapters, and the fight is back and forth?

I feel that this is a rare and heartwarming description of daily life that is very eye-catching and the setting of the Dragon King protagonist is very interesting. For a book with dragon slaying as the main line...🙂🙂

Can the protagonist have more roles? It's been a long time since I saw the protagonist. He's always fishing. He has strength but it's just a joke. It's of no use. Just watch the show. In order not to reveal his identity, how do you steal Norton's dragon body in the future? In a novel with the protagonist as the main character, don't give Lu Mingfei so many roles, okay? He is just a supporting character.

I gave it up. Every time I see an update, I get an anti-theft seal. I don't think any other book is like this. Moreover, the recent updates have an unacceptably slow plot progression. I don't know what I want to say after reading each chapter, so I just pretend to be the Riddler. I used to be able to write it, but recently I really can't stand it anymore. There's no need to spend money.

I can't stand it anymore,,, I started watching it today after watching it for a few months, and it was so frustrating. I was wondering why Nono didn't consider Caesar and just helped Lu Mingfei without caring about anything. And why did the protagonist help him? We already know clearly that Concubine Ming is the Dragon King, so why not just eat it? Who will we fear after eating it? Bronze and fire. Earth and mountains. Who can stop the White King and the power of Ming Fei? Just drag it hard

Xia Mi

The author's writing about hair candy is very sweet, but when the focus of the writing turns to supporting roles, it is easy to be unable to stop. I would like to give the author a small suggestion, that is, don't give too many supporting roles. Lu Mingfei in the previous volume and Yuan Zhisheng in this volume all have this problem.

Author, you are already a mature coder. You must learn to satisfy your book friends' desires.

I've been raising this book for a while, and I'm going to start selling it in two days. I'll give you 12 monthly votes first.

I feel like my writing is getting better and better recently. Come on! Already subscribed

Before the ending of Dragon 3, it can be said to be fairy grass, and after that it can only be regarded as food. In terms of characters, the character design can only be said to be basically followed, but I feel that everyone lacks a kind of personality charm.

Halfway through the fight, it's time to cut scenes for the next chapter. I'm writing the script.