Hunt and Then Eat

Personally, I feel that there is no need to read the second volume after chapter 54. Because the pacing suddenly became very strange, the protagonist's personality changed drastically, and some random things were sewn into it.

Write less about internal strife and conspiracies. There are three things that attracted me to this book: 1. Goldfinger is not too buggy, and the rhythm is well controlled. 2. The perspective of the protagonist and the entry point chosen by the author into the world of monster hunting are very good and not obtrusive. 3. It's the monster hunt itself. On the contrary, the black plot added to enrich the plot really challenged my resistance over and over again. I really feel that the plot is thin, so I can use my imagination to think about how to reasonably join the ecological chain and the customs of various places. Have a question by the way? Since the appearance of the woman in black, the protagonist has relied on inexplicable explosions to survive several crises. As a result, I have lost the reference point for the protagonist's combat power. Isn't this really a breakdown in combat power?

Is this TM even half-written with the main character changed? According to your author, what determines who a person is is his memory. However, after writing hundreds of chapters, a past life memory was revived, and then the behavior, thoughts, and logic changed drastically, and the interpersonal relationships from the previous life were inherited. Then why are you hiding your ears and stealing from the past life? It would be better if you just changed the name of the previous life back. If your previous life had the same personality as the protagonist, why not? Do you think there is any similarity between Guta and Neva? Can you be more straightforward and say that the protagonist we have watched for hundreds of chapters has died and been taken away from him? Let's change to a new and awesome protagonist and continue reading.

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but the characters and plot are too raw. If the author wants to make fun of himself, pretend I didn't say it

I always feel that pig's feet don't look like a time traveler, but like an aborigine

To be honest, basically 80% of the place in the monster hunting background is undeveloped, with humans only occupying a small part, and the ancient dragon thing is really strong. In the world background, the black dragon directly destroyed an ancient country. There is really no use in playing conspiracy tricks in this background. Maybe one day an ancient dragon will pass by and everyone will die.

Everything else was pretty good, until the main character was cut into a large size, which meant he changed the main character, and it cracked

The protagonist's character and mental maturity described in this way, don't pretend to be an adult soul wearer, you might as well say he is a minor soul wearer who loves to play games.

The tachi in MH generally refers to the big dachi (as shown below) I very much hope that the author can solve the eternal mystery of [how the MH's tachi was pulled out] in this book 🤓

It feels like the protagonist's explosion was too much, and his combat power collapsed. When he entered the mid-term strength, he directly climbed to the late stage, close to invincibility. Furthermore, the portrayal of the male protagonist lacks continuity. The impression of the ancient pagoda created in the first five to six hundred chapters is suddenly replaced by Neva, which is blunt.

The adventure has to be about plotting, and you won't pursue it even if you die. Don't write about it if you don't have experience in this area. It has to be about the conflict between the kingdom and the union. Did you get to the point? Please be careful. I'm really speechless.

I was fascinated by the first few dozen pictures, but I was really disappointed afterward. . .

The early stage was good, but in the middle and later stages it started to feel like it was being hammered here and there. The protagonist had no personal characteristics at all, the power system was messy and confusing, and there were a lot of messy tricks that I couldn't remember. You might as well learn from the Hokage, Uchiha should play with the blood chakra, and Naruto should play with the Rasengan and Kyuubi. There are a lot of messy abilities, giving people the feeling that they know a little bit about everything but are not proficient in anything. Moreover, the character of the protagonist, who is an idiot Japanese comic protagonist, is too strong. In online articles, the character and character of this ancient tower are not popular at all.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the character description and writing style of this book are very good. It doesn't look like a newbie at all. The combat plot is also well described. The names of various secondary moves are shameful at first sight, but once you get used to it, they feel quite interesting. Let's talk about the shortcomings: There is no doubt that this book has strayed away from the theme of Monster Hunting to a certain extent. The author may have been too excited about writing. It feels like a fantasy novel in the skin of a Monster Hunter rather than a Monster Hunter fanfic. The exploration and hunting of the Monster Hunter theme has also become a battle between humans and dragons. As you read it, you will suddenly wonder if what you are reading is a Monster Hunter fanfic. The second point is the issue of rhythm control. The protagonist's strength increases too fast and powerful monsters appear too early, which directly results in many interesting monsters not being able to appear, or even if they appear, their strength is far behind and the protagonist is killed in three or two seconds, which makes people lose interest at all. Moreover, the early appearance of powerful monsters also prevents readers from having high expectations for the monsters that appear later. For example, I am not very interested now unless the protagonist encounters a taboo. The third point is the rhythm issue. Basically, the protagonist will encounter random and powerful monsters in every mission and then have a fierce battle with the protagonist. Too many climaxes will make people unmotivated. When I first faced the devil in the desert, I was really addicted to it. Although the author's writing was also very passionate later, it just didn't feel like that time. Finally, to make a summary, it can be said that it is amazing that a newcomer can write like this. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas and writes in a hurry. It can be understood even if a newcomer cannot control the rhythm. I would like to give you a suggestion. After writing this plot, do a few normal hunts and describe the environment, creatures, etc. Of the entire monster hunting world. Relaxation and relaxation is the right way. Blind tension will make people very tired 😁

It's really a great fusion. There are many cool settings from anime, such as the setting of Nen, a full-time hunter, the character of Porto from the Abyss, the spiral clan of Tianyuan Breakthrough, the Jojo Stand, the Impaler, the One Piece armed color and so on. Really, it can be said to be a comprehensive comic, but the plot is all original and some settings are integrated. The author is really awesome.

I've read a lot of monster hunting articles. Basically, the main character must be a hunter. I'm tired of reading them. There are too few dragons in the beginning.

This book is too middle-grade. I can't read it now that I'm older.

OK! This is a novel about a small island country.

Fake hunter articles, only what I see is the king hunter. I didn't see the details of the hunter's prey.

See the feet of lust? ? ? How many tons of strength does it take to jump a few meters? How can you make those heroes whose TVs fly up and down the wall feel so embarrassed? Athletes can jump two or three meters during a run-up. Drunk, your power system is too confusing. You have retreated. You have a bunch of superpowers on your pig's feet. I guess you are not even as good as Captain America, and you are so fucking dragon-like. . .

I still like the simple ancient pagoda, the gods are bright, what kind of garbage is Wang Hao?

Well, I was a little curious about the final boss. I originally thought it was the black dragon, but later I found more than 5 of them, as well as the ancestral dragon, and the masters from the previous era. Well, I think it should be the Mountain and Sea Alliance, or the final four-party melee.

The subject matter can be said to be very good, but the power system is too vague. The other is that the ability to seize is constantly being captured (there are many abilities to seize, and they are too complicated. This skill and that skill suddenly appear during a fight, who knows which skill). Can it be integrated and displayed? Set the threshold for seizing creatures. Then what is the protagonist's thinking? Kill monsters all the time, or the union asks him to kill monsters, and let others take care of everything. Now I have seen more than a hundred pictures like this.

First of all, this is an early version. The crossbow has not been invented yet, so everyone is using heavy crossbows that can only use one arrow... Then it is said that the New World's eternal frost and frozen soil have been explored. We all know the Mengniu Dragon, the Frostwing Wind Drifting Dragon... And then the Frostwing Wind Drifting Dragon also has a move called Ice Breath... I can still accept the creation of monsters later, but in Monster Hunter, I followed animal protectionism and broke my defense. See you soon.

After reading the introduction, it feels quite like Game of Thrones.

Well~~ The direction of this novel is getting weirder and weirder, but if this is the story the author wants to write, then it doesn't matter, but not many people may understand the author. If it is free, maybe more people will read it and discuss it with the author, right? Now, to be honest, the author wrote this novel for himself and not for readers. I would be a little reluctant to pay to read it 😅

I really like the setting of Olga Mikazuki. Some people still remember Tekkadan. I hope the author can write more about them or a new book will be better.

To be honest, the writing is not bad, but the author should not be serious in writing. The logic in many places is not good. As a lawyer, this is not the case. Let's just talk about the gluttonous blood of the protagonist. He is a dragon in his own right, and he also has that kind of resilience. He will not be weak to any creature with a strong physique, but it is not as good as the one with specialized recovery.

The early stages were really good, I even stayed up late to watch it. But after the system changed from eating to plundering, it plummeted (and it can still be seen). It wasn't until the protagonist returned to his previous life that he directly became Yi Tuo.