Lord of Immortal Path

No. The beginning is about Tianlinggen, and then there is Thousand Leakage Body, and then there is Golden Finger. What is the meaning? Talked for a long time. What do you want to represent? Holy shit! Wouldn't it be enough if you just add Tianlinggen and golden fingers? Come on Qianlu font. Either you do. Forced down. And by force. Pull it up. It's really awesome.

Is this called cultivating immortality? Haha, apart from words, is there no Chinese culture left?

Some settings are good, but there are also flaws, let's just talk about territory! Can't the territory be expanded? After all, this is a fantasy world. Why can't we upgrade our spiritual veins?

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I feel that this family setting is simply a golden finger, and the protagonist is obviously begging for food with a golden rice bowl. I have become your dependent, but you are still afraid of others snatching it away. Can you please stop being funny? I am just afraid that others will not snatch it away. It would be better for the protagonist if someone snatches it away. Others will help you cultivate talents, so that your dependents can get more and better resources, and they can upgrade faster, and their spiritual power can be fed back to you more and faster, and your own cultivation speed can also be accelerated. This is countless times faster than finding resources to cultivate talents by yourself. Moreover, if your dependents become the elders or leaders of major forces in the future, you will gain more benefits and can let them find more geniuses for you to become your dependents. Moreover, you can seize major forces without any blood and let them become your power group. It will be easy to dominate the world in the future. Isn't this countless times better than shrinking in a small corner to develop?

It's better that you don't have this golden finger, it's just to annoy others.

To the outside world, you don't need to call it the Blood of the Dependent. You can just change the name of the spiritual fluid to make people think it is a prop to improve qualifications and strength. For monks, many people are willing to give up everything as long as they can increase their qualifications. Also, the output is too large. One drop should be added to the first level of Qi training, and two drops to the second level, so that some people who are not very qualified can give up.

Even if the family is separated, there is still family love! There are parents here too! Have you ever thought about repaying your family's support after using it since you were a child? Without the family to give you elixirs, you would have died long ago. If you don't want to write a family article, don't mention family relatives. Just write casual cultivators at the beginning, or the sect comes out to start your own business. The family relies on blood ties. If everyone in the family died long ago like you, I understand people's selfishness, but they don't have the resources like you. They would rather cultivate outsiders than support the family.

What era is it and is it interesting to start a counterattack with useless materials?

It's funny and childish to write about co-governance of all ethnic groups. For example, black people don't care whether you are Han or not, let alone chickens, ducks, cats and dogs.

Don't watch the beginning of Waste Material, The Body of Thousand Leaks is ridiculous

There are too many flaws to complain about. . . Mother, father, my God, where is this name? There are very few Japanese comics nowadays. How highly is the author respected by Japanese culture? If you write a book, you have to call it that way. . .

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To be honest, the author is taking a lord battle, so there is no need to give the protagonist such a bloody plot, because it is unnecessary. It's not like killing enemies alone. There's no need to get this kind of physique. Just be normal. Actually, the plot you added is superfluous.

Is this a family story? But the protagonist always says that if they are separated, they will no longer be considered members of the family. The family also gives territory to people, isn't this raising a white-eyed wolf?

Although the writing style is very poor, it is still worthy of encouragement. After all, the author's imagination is still good, and with so many people criticizing him, the author still persists in writing. This spirit is worthy of encouragement.

To be honest, there is no world where identity is not important. No matter how rubbish the talent is, the family background is still beyond the reach of ordinary people.

I don't want to say much about children's writing style, just encourage them.

I will never watch a useless start.

It's not impossible to start with a waste material, but it's really hard to watch the waste material + mentally retarded character.

Does the author really dislike the large number of viewers and not want to make money? Introducing a setting on one page, or while driving on the carriage Everything is said secretly, said with joy, said, said, said secretly, said happily, said regretfully, said excitedly... The writing is too awkward, and does not require a natural development. It is much better if you write these inner dramas, it really affects reading.

Tianling root, the body of thousands of leaks. . . Talent, how did you come up with the idea of ​​combining these two things?

Everything can be done in the Long Tao Tower No matter what, you can stay here, no matter the name of the person, the sect, the elixir, the magic weapon, or the skill, you can keep it, and you will choose some suitable ones to use.

I couldn't hold it in anymore after reading Chapter 4. This is pressing someone's head to force you to sensationalize. Aren't you embarrassed? I said earlier that the head of the family is the hero, but in the blink of an eye, I'm blushing and choking. Are you kidding me?

From beginning to end, I hardly saw his father appear in any scenes...

Every time I read a book, there are always a group of people who criticize here and that. Brother, this is a novel, and you are asked to follow the author's ideas, and you must insist on speaking out. The atmosphere of the novel is really like this, I'm convinced. Personally, I think it's pretty good so far. Farming can show the results of development. It's pretty good to see the development step by step.

I didn't write it, but you had millions of words. Now my word count is almost catching up with yours. . . .

Such a trap? Is this a mess? Finished?

After reading the previous chapters, I no longer have the desire to read them.

It's so rubbish, it's disgusting to suppress the main character.