Demon Refining Envoy

Come on, I hope the big doesn't collapse in the future. I really like this kind of daily getting stronger. I hope that girls won't stick to it like others. In fact, it's good to have no cp. You can consider it. (Personally, I feel that many male and female protagonists have no desire to watch after they get together, and only the period of secret love is good to watch.

The writing style is not very good, the writing is trivial, and the expression is cumbersome Then there is the fact that Pig's Foot is a time traveler, and when he meets a teenage girl, he turns into a licking dog... Are you kidding me┐(─__─)┌ This plot really makes me uncomfortable to watch. To defeat all opponents by force, it doesn't matter what the pig's trotters are like, what their character is like, how they conduct themselves in the world, right...

Although the writing style is not good and is very weak, the first chapters are okay for the time spent. After the 200th chapter, the writing is not good. It is enough to mention the title of the king once or twice, and write the title again every time I write the name. If there is a narrative, just narrate it. Don't write every sentence with the name and the title. It's too annoying to watch. Even if the writing style is not good enough to write a good article, you still have to find some good points. The plot should be written in detail, and the plot can be covered in one stroke. Instead, a lot of irrelevant articles are procrastinated and you can't even grasp the key points. Even if you are keeping a running account, you still have to remember everything. "Two years later," "two months later," and "half a month later" are too jumpy, and the plot is too thin and has no ups and downs. There is no causal relationship, no emotional description, no highlighted contradictions, no logic, no character portrayal, no character portrayal, and no storyline portrayal. There are only a few novels of the same type that I have read, so it would be a pity to abandon them if they are tasteless.

I think the biggest problem with this article is that it is inconsistent with my three views. A person who owns a plug-in has been struggling with the quality of the pet, which is too cheap. With plug-ins, the quality can always be improved. If it were me, I would pay more attention to the abilities of each pet, especially the mutual complementation and cooperation.

I feel relieved to see so many people criticizing the author, which means it's not my fault!

If you have a spiritual pet, don't give it to someone in your own family and give it to outsiders. The md family has never treated you badly, so why not just write The Lone Ranger? Why do you need a family?

I'm really convinced and keep sending pets. It's disgusting to me. You can help others choose pets, but don't just give them away, okay?

Seeing the system flow turns off your appetite. It's for underage children.

Nice book, please keep writing! !

There was really a little bit of poison in front of me, and I caught the top quality ones from that small world. I don't give them to my own race. I hatch only the top ones myself. I give them away if I have some affection for them. I even call them nice. Some of them are disgusting. Maybe I'm too pretentious.

Shennong ran away with a bucket The family has awakened 12 newcomers in total, but there are 12 stages in the newcomer competition. Are you fighting in the air?

Look. I am bored. No passion. There is no ups and downs in the plot

A novel at the elementary school level = a running account narration

There was no fluctuation in my heart when I saw it, I even wanted to sleep. There is not as much water in the ocean as you

The subject matter of this book is good, but sometimes it's too watery. Your chapter is at least 1/3, so it's a good word count!

How to say it? It's not that the writing is not good, it just feels like I'm talking to myself all the time, and it's a bit watery.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the author's writing style was outrageous. This one was surprising, and the other one was exclaimed. Oh my god, I'm embarrassed. I hope there will be improvement in the future.

It's a pity that the investment qualification is gone this month. Good books should be invested as soon as possible.

This beast-controlling style is good, please support it

I just want to say that this kind of novels cannot be more mature, and I discovered a phenomenon. Other novels start with teenagers and deal with young people at the end of the novel. This is the same. Other novels have the same routine of fighting for the championship in a beast-control competition. Other novels about beast control cannot be cultivated by humans. They are copied from copy to copy. At a glance in every industry, they are either copied from compatriots or from foreign countries. The squid who loves diving is a breath of fresh air. Those who lead the trend are the ones who set the trend

Full subscription, I hope the author will work hard and create a full subscription group when you have time!

Good morning, I wish you all the best!

All beast-controlling stories, giving pets and female protagonists are taboo! If there is a female protagonist, will the status of the beast master be lower than that of the female protagonist? The relationship between the master and the master should be the most irreplaceable! A beast can only have one master. Once you have a heroine, you have another mistress. Secondly, the beast you hatch can be raised as a second team without a contract. There is no need to give it away.

Chao xi

I'm an old bookworm. I've been reading for a long time due to a book shortage recently. Who knows, I actually read a copy of "The Monk Family" next door and finished it. Do you have any good books to recommend?

I don't know why, but I always feel that the male protagonist is not a good person and seems to be hypocritical.