The Alchemist in Death

I haven't seen an interesting Death fanfic for a long time. The author writes very well.

Overall, it's a similar story to the original novel, but I couldn't stand it after reading it. Actually, I initially thought it would be interesting if the author wrote about the protagonist using alchemy to constantly analyze other people's Zanpakutō or abilities during battle, and then refine the Mimic Zanpakutō to imitate, copy or even directly design the skills to restrain the opponent. As a result, after reading more than 100 chapters, he became the protagonist and studied various things (to put it bluntly, I felt that the author was constantly throwing out various settings), such as perfection technique, instant coax, ghost way, alchemy, virtual god, spirit king... Blah blah blah. Most of the chapter explains the principles of ability. I thought that this is something that is not scientific in the first place. Writing so much does not make it feel more scientific. It just means what it means, so why bother? There are too few fights and plots, making it boring to read (I found the previous plot to be quite interesting, but the fighting was just so-so). The article adds too many secondary assumptions to fill in the pitfalls of the original work and to justify it, which is a bit uncomfortable. Then when I went to Hueco Mundo, I was really stunned by the group of Vastods under Balegang. They had a huge empty ceiling. There were only three or two bosses in the original book and they were completely worthless. It's quite uncomfortable.

Sudden death after watching 40 consecutive episodes? Nowadays, dramas are 24 to 26 minutes long, with 20 minutes skipping the opening and closing credits, 3 episodes per hour, and 72 episodes 24 hours a day. The protagonist died suddenly after watching only 40 episodes ≈ 13.34 Hours ≈ half a day. He died suddenly after watching only half a day of the drama? You don't deserve to watch it, you miscellaneous cultivator, you've disgraced the face of such a fan.

If there is a problem with steel refining, just bring out alchemy. Alchemy is not his original creation. It is something that he already has. It will be fine if you set it up yourself soon.

I don't understand why many people think that it would be good to write about the system of another world. For example, there are often people who use pirate skills in Naruto, and people who play Naruto's skills in One Piece are extremely inconsistent. The author's book is also especially when the world described has similar skills. When similar skills are lowered, such as the spirit child reconstruction in the author's article, isn't it the ability of Bawent and Quincy? This is extremely easy to collapse, because it is difficult to deal with the conflict between these two abilities when they face each other. This is a big taboo in fan fiction In my opinion It seems that you can use the alchemical way of thinking to expand your thinking, but it is best not to add an ability directly, or use an external ability as the core. For example, in One Piece, you can use some ninjutsu methods to expand your thinking. For example, use the Eight Gates Dunjia is used to develop the pirate's taijutsu thinking, but don't copy it, because if you copy it or use this thing as the core, you will lose the characteristics of the protagonist's existing world. The characteristics of One Piece are devil fruits and domineering, as well as a bizarre world, and what do you read in fan fiction? Is it because of the whistle's various abilities? It is the compensation and participation of the original plot, as well as expansion. These are all based on the existing world. After the magic modification loses the characteristics of this world, the sense of immersion will be greatly reduced. The characteristics of the Shinigami are just that, Hollow, Soul-Slaying Sword, and Quincy at most. I I can feel the author's writing power, which should be quite good in fan fiction, but I don't feel the characteristics of the Death God world... In other words, this book can still be written in another world Although it is not my cup of tea, I wish the author will get better as he writes more.

Use the land to forge a formation to forge the God of Death and the Void into the Philosopher's Stone

I finally came across a Bleach fanfic, but I was so disappointed after reading more than 20 chapters. The Shinigami fanfics are all about the power system of the Shinigami, with the Zanpakutō being the most important. As a result, the main character is alchemy and gave up on the Zanpakutō. Either the plot is changed, or the plot is pretentious and shows off the presence, while the protagonist chooses to remain silent. The last is a harem story, with many death-beautiful characters, but this work obviously has a trend of having a female protagonist. So what is the meaning of this fanfic written by the author?

Yes, when did steel refining insult China? Forgive me for not paying attention to this aspect for a long time! Besides, you are using alchemy. Alchemy is not the original work of steel refining. There is really no need to worry about a mere steel refining!

I found that everyone has a mistake about the God of Death. In the world of the God of Death, there are four kinds of power. The one who opposes humans is Hollow, and the one who opposes the God of Death is the Quincy. That's right, after death, human beings either become weak or whole. It is impossible for those people in Rukongai to become Shinigami. Even Kannonji, who has the highest spiritual pressure among humans, cannot meet the minimum standard to become a Shinigami. Death is the name of a race. In the same way, Quincy is the same. People without Quincy blood cannot become Quincy. And, even if they are Xuos, there is no so-called past life for the slightly more powerful Xuos. They are the natural births of Hueco Mundo, or the ancient Xuos that existed at the beginning of the creation of the world. Human beings in the Shinigami world are the most desperate. Not only are they born with no spiritual pressure, they don't care about human beings regardless of whether they are righteous or evil. Both Urahara and Aizen's Hondama are made from a large number of souls. Among them, Aizen's Honedama has eaten the fingertips of the God of Death and the Soul King, so it is more complete. In this world, Urahara, just to be on the safe side, used a large number of human souls to make two soul king candidates, Koame and Jinta.

Alchemy is obviously something for ancient warlocks, not for little devils. And isn't this thing the predecessor of modern science?

The alchemist has no alchemy and is a bit speechless

I hope there will be a book with a single female protagonist, Sister Hua🥺

It's not coherent, the plot is very abrupt, and there's something that doesn't make sense in every picture. The foreshadowing wasn't done right, it was just forced into the Riddler. Moreover, most of your books describe your own thoughts. To be honest, I have no reading experience. I suggest you study more.

Just him, big brother

🌹 Is the ability to decompose and reconstruct spirits still an exaggerated one? The God of Death has a tribe that seems to be vampires or something that can decompose and absorb spirit seeds. The Quincy of the Invisible Empire seems to be able to control spirit seeds. Mole City Shuuya's Swastika can also fuse spirit seeds. Running to another world with an anime's power system is a huge poison point. Controlling spirit seeds is a rubbish ability.

It's better to change the introduction quickly, because you basically read the introduction before reading the book. When you see steel refining, it's easy to connect alchemy with it.

I don't like the protagonist, he feels like a machine without emotions. What I say I like is a paper man (blade man). I actually don't have any emotions. I just need it for needs. It's more hypocritical at best.

To be honest, I feel like I could choose a powerful Zanpakutō to increase my combat power. The alchemy you wrote is a bit nihilistic, and the protagonist is not Xiao Dou Ding (clap your hands and get what you want). I feel that the protagonist should spend his time studying Kidō on his Zanpakutō.

Has the author offended someone? Why are so many people finding fault? And they all say that the settings are wrong? What's wrong? Aren't they all the settings of the original work?

I have a habit of reading at Qidian. I first check whether there are many discussion posts. Posts with few words or too many words are generally bad articles.

I have recommended several books on daily detoxification. The protagonist runs to the Fourth Division 🤫

I'm very curious who the author wants to read this book for, the author himself, a fan of death, a fan of steel, or a double chef

I finally came across an article about alchemy, but it turned out it belonged to the God of Death. Alchemy is a technical job, so what's the point of hanging out with these guys who only know how to fight and kill?

What does this book have to do with the alchemist in One Piece?

A eunuch? Does anyone know the situation?

Since it's alchemy, why isn't it attached to the bullet? That's what a certain Celestial Girl said. Counterfeit ammunition? (=^▽^=)

When the price is alchemy? Was established, the concept of "alchemy" for the protagonist disappeared! !

There is no need to read after chapter 46. Alchemy is gone. You have to be politically correct to read the article. We won't mind if you continue writing.

Very well written🤔

It's easy to say that Crescent Moon Sky Chong is the Zhibo family's secret skill. It's amazing.