What If the Disciples Are Too Ridiculous?

The plot should not only have an outline, but also have details. The scene description and character description are not good enough. For example, I have written about the character Morgana in the previous chapters, but I don't know whether this character is male or female? The talent you gave him was that of a beauty and a bad luck. Logically speaking, this should be the talent of a girl, but you also described him as a boy who would be killed by the boss for thousands of years. After reading the first few chapters, I feel like you're going to collapse in the later chapters because they don't match up? Details determine success or failure.

The previous reading was very silly, and I was willing to subscribe, but when the main character pretended to be a succubus, the book fell apart.

It poisoned me to death Chapter 9 directly persuaded me to quit, the data collapse was ridiculous. A bandit king is only at level 9, but then a Black Tiger Hall with more than 100 levels of strength suddenly appears. How did the protagonist persist for so many days without being directly destroyed? Outrageous

This one has poor grades and is probably about to be cut off, just like the previous one.

The nc author explains how the basic Taoism of the Five Elements came to be used by the Japanese.

Infinite resurrection is just one-sided, there is no punishment at all, and there is no need for a plot. What's the point of just rushing through it?

The writing of the fourth test is so disgusting. In order for the fourth test to keep up with the big team, they were forced to cheat and change jobs. It was simply disgusting. In order to develop in the early stage, the protagonist was developed almost from scratch, and the subsequent ones were just taken off the shelf? The great inventor jumped ship directly, and he still had an immortal weapon in his hand. This was a bit harsh for the players in the fourth test. The players in front of them all relied on their own talents except for their initial talents. The players in the fourth test directly cheated and forced themselves to keep up with the big army. What was this writing? There was a moment when I really didn't want to read it. I asked the author to write it well in the later stage. There is no need for them to keep up with the big army. It would be good to have the first three tests to open the way, and let them be the tool people for the later ones. You don't have the ability to write everyone well. The more you read, the more you focus. I really feel that the later writing It's so weak, the master just rowed. Except for a few players in the internal beta test, almost all of them are useless. It was originally a novel that got better and better as it was written. If you write it like this, there is really no way to write it well. It is still a fledgling and has not reached the second level. I could have gone to the second level, but it's a pity that I can't do it myself.

Don't be fooled when reading this book. Golden elixir players can defeat tribulations by opening eight gates of Dunjia 🤫🤫🤫. After crossing n major realms, the combat power system collapses.

Let's change it. The group portrait became a special show for shit beetles. It also provoked state departments and directly endangered public safety and order. I suspected you of being a spy and arrested you.

It's starting to add real-world strength to players again, and it's starting to cause trouble again, it's so poisonous