I'm Not the Only One Who's Not the Protagonist, Right?

The biggest highlight of this book is the first half of the first copy, whether it is the protagonist's solo exploration at the beginning or the later interaction with the heroine. As soon as there were more women behind him, a touch of warmth began to develop toward Riqing. Moreover, a lot of writing was spent in the later period to outline the image of the King of Soldiers, and the plot of the dungeon was ignored. This was obviously caused by the lack of priority. If this continues, the content of the story will most likely change from a dungeon survival story to an emotional novel. The final copy is too simple and does not put too much pressure on the protagonist. I suggest you send it to the battlefield to survive and change your mentality.

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How to describe catching up with the latest chapter. . . . There is something wrong with the tone of the dungeon. The scary dungeon is downplayed by the sharp complaints. Although the sharp rants are good, it leaves the reader with no emotional fluctuations. The focus is on the interaction between the protagonist and his group rather than the decryption or atmosphere of the dungeon. It is recommended that there be less drama when describing the decryption and background of the dungeon and creating the atmosphere (also, the existence of the angel sister greatly reduces the excitement of the protagonist. Without restrictions, it is equivalent to letting us know that the protagonist will not die no matter what, which is equivalent to an invincible insurance. We hope to know that the protagonist will not die and then look forward to his breakthrough, rather than knowing that the protagonist will not die no matter how he breaks the situation)

After reading the first copy, I was really unhappy. In the end, I selectively ignored the suspension bridge for the sake of viewing. I had to wait until the enemy caught up before I finally saw a bridge that I could cross. Also, they knew there was a monster from the beginning and knew that they would probably fight it once in the end, but they ended up training there? Don't you want to find weapons? Like going to the police station to find a gun or something like that. Or at least find a better knife. The heroine actually used a fruit knife in the last battle...

The King of Soldiers, my King of Soldiers

Can the male protagonist act like an adult? After all this, do you still think that they are not boyfriend and girlfriend? It's a bit discouraging to keep doing this.

Who is Brother Shui? ❤️❤️

I also came to see Brother Nianghuashui. . . Ah, why are you so excited all of a sudden?

😅 The sense of déjà vu is too strong, it looks like a book I read before, My Dream Game

Who is Brother Shui 😍? Come on, let's be a girl~

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The writing is above the logical level, but there are too few readers because it doesn't recommend it... Come on, author, don't give up. In addition, I read this from Du Gong's recommendation book, so the author must be familiar with Du Gong, don't imitate Du Gong 😅 Finally, Du Gong has an author friend called "I'll give you some mushrooms". The theme of the work currently being updated is to teach people to write novels. There are some interesting things in it that new authors can learn and think about. You can go and take a look when you have time, or ask Du Gong about Mushrooms.

One touch, my superman

Mo Yuxi

There will be fire, but if there is no fire, I will eat the author alive.

The heroine of the popular book (currently one vote) The heroine is so well portrayed, she's awesome

The description of the contents of the dungeon is really average. The description of the relationship between the heroine and the heroine in the first dungeon is very good and natural. The second dungeon starts to focus on the plot and feels very empty. The first few chapters of the third dungeon I can only say that it is really boring, and the slander and humor are not to the point.

I have watched half of it now and I feel that Mo's image is too thin. Now it feels like he is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. The cold outside is caused by not being good at talking, but it is not that dull. However, Brother Shui recommends. As long as you write Sister Shui well, I will steal Brother Shui's monthly ticket and give it to you 🙂

I haven't read this book for a long time. I came to read it today and found that the author was terrible... In fact, the author's writing style is really good, and his daily writing is also good. I just feel that the setting is not exciting enough, the plot is not exciting enough, and the supporting characters are too few. Come on for the next book (if there is another one)

It will be hot, but if it is not, I will eat the author raw (Knife and fork ready)

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Can I get the first essence in my life