Demon Hunter's Nightmare Wagon

I don't know if the author did this on purpose or if his writing skills are so poor?

Author, I have read more than ten chapters of your book. I would like to give you some personal advice. First of all, the idea is good and I can read it. Anyway, it's definitely not toxic. To me, it's considered normal food. I personally feel that the problem lies in the inability to arouse readers' emotions. (This is difficult) Then the dialogue is a bit confusing, which sometimes makes people guess based on logic before they can figure it out. Normal dialogue should be A.... B.... A... But you often A... A... A... B... And you haven't marked who is speaking, which makes the reader very confused. If you are talking about the same person, it is recommended to write it in one paragraph.

😜The third

This book is actually not bad. Guan Jian cannot read it in separate chapters, otherwise it will be very confusing. Just start from the first chapter and read through the fifteen chapters in a row. This is a description of a small situation, and you can understand it if you read it in a row. If you still don't understand, then your understanding may be poor. Oh, by the way, don't skip reading or you may get confused. Anyway, this book is okay, the protagonist is intelligent, and I haven't seen the villain appear yet, so I guess it won't be too bad. Finally, I wish the author good luck with his new book and good health.

What's going on with this book? It was obviously well written before, but now that it has been released, I have completely let myself go. Now that I see it, I feel that I have been deceived. If there is no big turning point later, I can only say goodbye.

When I saw that I had been trapped for more than twenty days and the first thing I thought of when the carriage arrived was women and long legs, I could only sigh.

Good books, good books, can be food and grass. If the author works hard, he can become a fairy grass.

Some of the plots are incomprehensible, and the author feels like arranging a father for the protagonist is causing trouble for the readers.

I regretted it after ordering twenty chapters. Very tasteless. The main settings are still interesting, but there are too many flaws in writing. A bad joke can make a chapter, and the key point is that it is a low-end car, just like a middle school student... I can't figure out what the author is so excited about. Instead, the key information was conveyed in a vague manner. We don't know if this is a foreshadowing or something else. If you really think carefully about your words, why should you just stop talking nonsense?

I quite like the novel, but a lot of pornographic jokes made me, a girl, feel sick after reading them. They simply lowered the style of the novel and I really couldn't stand it.

The space conversion is written very bluntly and in a foggy way. Forget it, let the author read it for himself.

Ah, sorry I can't understand, the transition is too strange. From the beginning of the predicament in the wind and snow, and then the plug-in came, I took a bite of the apple and then transitioned to the dilapidated carriage box. What does this mean? That reincarnation predicament is the spiritual world? Then I entered the manor, solved a dungeon inexplicably, learned about Chaoyun, and entered the story of saving my father... It felt so strange, I couldn't understand it...

It was well written, but I realized it was a book I had abandoned before. Why did you give it up? I like to play bad jokes, play "Cure Town", and ask if grass is a verb. Why is it that Western Fantasy also uses Chinese, right? I want to make people laugh, but no one laughs. Instead, I feel like I am making a fool of myself. Of course some people recommend this serious book. You deserve it for not being popular, and you deserve it for being thrown into the street.

Listed on the free bookshelf twice in a row. Has the author been sanctioned?

There are too many transitions at the beginning, making the movie confusing and confusing, with only the author enjoying himself. From the snow to the carriage, and from the carriage to a new carriage. There are three transitions in one chapter... The same goes for character transitions, time travel, and time travel again. The author, you said it yourself, is it such a mess?

It's too confusing, the plot, characters and stories are all scattered. It is recommended that you read it yourself after writing it. The core of the story is pretty good. But others. . . . . Some of the plots were introduced bluntly without being elaborated upon.

It can only be said that compared with the old books, not only has there been no progress, but the level has even dropped. There is so much nonsense that after one chapter, I don't even know what I did? Other readers commented that they couldn't understand it without reading it. The reason is that it is too watery, there is a lot of meaningless nonsense, and they also like to write some risqué words. Whoever subscribes to Shuicheng's publication like this, I can't even finish reading the public chapters. I'm too tired. I have to find a few meaningful paragraphs in a chapter, but I can't skip reading, otherwise I won't understand.

What a vicious novel. Carriage service has been written about special services, but the protagonist is Liu Xiahui. What's the point of writing it? Can I make up the word count?

The character of the male protagonist is unacceptable and his character is despicable.

I agree with the point downstairs, the plot after it was released is indeed a bit vulgar. . . .

I just watched the beginning of the 27 days of reincarnation torture. Either you have a mental breakdown or you are going crazy. If you are not crazy yet, then you are strong-willed and rational. But as soon as you come out of reincarnation, you still don't know the specific situation. What do you think? Do you miss a woman? The character has completely collapsed. I read the reviews and there are quite a lot of good reviews. Keep reading and wait until the poison comes out or there is a change.

When are you going to publish a new book? Let's write another one with witcher elements.

No desire to read on

Chapter 10 has a strong screening effect for readers It is recommended that subsequent readers watch Chapter 10 directly Don't worry about the incoherence of the plot Just pay attention to one thing There is a pistol with two tubes in it, which needs to be reloaded after firing two bullets Pay attention to it Where did the bullets come from Note that the protagonist has no ammunition The supporting character was captured before and was just rescued The pistol was just found There is no description of finding a pile of ammunition Okay, the prompt is over Fleeing

The author gave you a reward of 100 today. Remember to update 🤭

The author will update more, pay attention to the smoothness of the plot, and make more recommendations. If you write well, you won't be afraid that no one will read it. Come on! ! !

That. . Can you please stop writing random words on the book's label? This book has nothing to do with games. Why should I have a game label?

Don't mess with the tags. When I saw chapter 22, I went back to chapter 18 to confirm the name. I knew that this book had nothing to do with ease. Well, when I saw chapter 28, the so-called ease is to use extraordinary abilities to solve the helplessness in reality. Alas. It can be felt that the author really wants to upgrade this book from a grain and grass to a fairy grass level book. Unfortunately, I didn't see the shining points in your introduction until Chapter 28. They were just Cthulhu soft steampunk with some side effects, and there was no clear main line to support it. It suddenly felt like reading this book. The difficulty soared, from addition, subtraction, multiplication and division to calculus. I thought you would do a reasoning test at the beginning, and then there was extraordinary power hidden behind it. I didn't know that I continued to watch the crackling sound, and everything thrown out in the front was just for show. This made me originally think that there was still a little bit of reasoning and Cthulhu combination, but it suddenly disappeared Õ_Õ

I've seen it before, and it's been poisoned again. Sure enough, it was poisoned somewhere and I quit it, right?

When will Senior Sisters Xili and Maria come out, and the writing style is so different from that of the Little House, they are selling out!