Arcane Brilliance Shines Forever

After reading Chapter 119, I suddenly understood what I thought was wrong before. Many of the comments at the beginning were: The setting is interesting, but the writing is a bit green. In fact, the author's main descriptions of young people always have a sense of drama. It wasn't until I read the end of Chapter 119 that I discovered the reason for this sense of drama! To put it simply, the author's setting of Western Fantasy and Dongxuan's writing style, such as the great arcanist Odo, who is called Brother Odo by the people around him, talks nonsense with the uncle in the cafeteria, and the high-spirited description of two young people in Chapter 119, are all very Chinese expressions. If the background is set in the Cultivation Rune Civilization Empire, with an oriental color, you will feel that the author's writing style is on point. Come on, author! This book is still well written and worth recommending! !

When I first saw that the protagonist was an illegitimate child, I thought that the protagonist was going to gain a knighthood and become a mage/wizard through the road of knighthood. It turned out that the good guy directly saved the world and rushed out of the world. I originally thought that it was another medieval mage who broke through the world with a mage tower and floating city, but it turned out to be an arcanist with a sci-fi atmosphere and a super sci-fi appearance. The overall environment and humanistic environment of the college are very good. It is not a competition model. Come on.

The characteristic of this book is that the protagonist is not suppressed for the sake of the plot.

I hope that if a floating city is really developed, it will not be treated as a terribly slow troop transport. I don't ask you to treat it as a Macross, at least it must be a Marvel floating ship. If not, it can be a small World War II gunship. I have seen so many stories about building floating cities that I might as well just cut it with a kitchen knife. It's super low.

I couldn't stand the scene about the elf mother tree. I have been wondering for a long time why the setting of this novel is very good, there are no big loopholes, and the author's plot pacing is also okay. Why do I always feel awkward when reading it. After reading this, I figured it out. The performance of the Arcane Empire in this book is really full of the stench of Laoyangsa, which is both fake and upright. He destroys the world at every turn and draws out the power of the world and draws out the foundation of the world. Transform the world into a laboratory, and then clean up and destroy the world with a backhand. As the first alien race to seek refuge with you, the elves of this family have shared weal and woe with you since you were born. They have made outstanding contributions and have never been sorry to you. For the sake of profit, they are secretly preparing to turn the entire family into slaves and produce elf slaves on an assembly line. I finally understand that in this arcane empire, no one except arcanists are considered human beings, and arcanists other than humans are occasionally considered human beings. The arcanist here highlights a dehumanizing character, and the dark wizard is ashamed of himself. If you really said that you want to be a dark evil force, it's not that I can't read dark novels. I also enjoyed watching the ones you got out of here. The key surfaces are also made very bright, looking like a beacon of civilization, so American imperial style.

For arcanists, the most exciting plot should be that the protagonist develops into the star realm (latitude) and launches wars against countless civilizations, races and even gods. As for arcana, the more famous arcane empire is Netheril. At its peak, it captures gods and uses them as experimental materials. In the world of online novels, among the more famous professions, arcanists, wizards, mages, and religious gods all fight in the endless world with their super strength and huge foundation. As for those barbarian knights, swordsmen, etc., Don't mention them.

I have read Chapter 290 so far. I have just arrived in the Hell World community. I feel that this book is not as bad as the comment section said, but I can still read it. There are many shadows of books, the structure of the wizard's journey, the plot of the Douluo Continent Academy's struggle for hegemony, as well as elements such as weirdness, games, and collection. , The plot and imagination are pretty good, but the author has done it right, and the plot has a little less twists and turns, and he has also added a little branch line, which makes it more warm and real, and less vicissitudes and civilization. For me, it is food and grass, and I can continue to follow it.

I just read Laboratory of the Gods The protagonist of this book is my favorite among the "researcher type" protagonists in recent years. He does not have the emotional indifference of the wizard-style protagonist, and he will not be soft when dealing with enemies. There is no self-centered mother, nor is he arrogant enough to look down on his mentor, or treat the master-student relationship as a transaction.

I think an arcanist is just a mechanic. Without looking at the protagonist's system panel, I can tell them whether their arcane furnace is a nuclear furnace? The arcane shield generator removes the arcane and is the shield generator. There are many mechanical creations in the book that have changed their skins, and the descriptions in the book are so mechanical that there is no mystery or magic at all~ Well, the mechanics have completely changed their skins. The title of the book could also be called "Mechanical Immortality, Steel is Eternal"

This novel is okay, why do so many people hate it?

The protagonist's character is a bit more established. . . . It's a bit awkward to read. I'm not saying it's not well written. It's just that the author cares too much about profit and wants to write with emotion. This is very embarrassing.

It was monotonous in the early stage, but gradually became interesting in the later stage. It can be seen that the author is working hard.

It's true that when you win favor with rice, you fight against rice and hate. It's good to have a system to use, and there are no mandatory tasks or anything like that. It's just a welfare cheat with only benefits and no disadvantages. But the protagonist said something about breaking the system, which was really speechless. Without the system, the protagonist would have died long ago without knowing where he would be.

After reading the first copy, write down your thoughts after reading it. The plot and writing style do need to be improved. As far as I can see, the writing style is too immature, which makes it very dramatic to read, and the characters also seem very immature, including the dialogue and interaction between the characters. For a passable online novel, it is not enough to just have a good idea. At the very least, it must be smooth to read. The first copy was very rough. The main character was really written in a very special way, which made people feel quite disgusting. The plot span was also large. This is just an outline without polishing the details and then simply pasting layers of paper to fool the readers. It is recommended that the author patiently polishes the plot. Writing skills take time to hone, but at least the polished plot will read smoothly, and readers will be willing to subscribe and follow it. One more thing, the style of Japanese light novels has never been suitable for lawyer novels. They are rational, cold, farming, construction, multi-universe civilizations competing for hegemony, and then the protagonist and supporting characters are all day long, hey, cute, touching noses, talking to themselves, and having a bit of a two-dimensional mouth habit. Is it appropriate?

The author actually doesn't need to care too much about comments. Whether it is writing, setting or plot, they are just means. What really attracts readers is the wild imagination and creativity. To put it simply, it is the imagination. Just like Xiuxian, there are many settings, but the settings that are eye-catching and memorable are all very creative. For example, the description of Xian Qin makes people look forward to the grand scene where the whole country practices cultivation and everyone is like a dragon. Remember the Tian Lai Fortress of the Great Qin Empire in the starry sky; The plank road across the sky that connects all major continents; (Transmission Channel) The ultimate war figurines such as the God King Vajra, the Lord of Demons, the Hunyuan Disha, etc.; The Immortal Body Battle Body, the Buddhist Yuan Shen and other possessed armor; The Five Elements Heavenly Heart Lamp Technique, the Nine Heavens and Nine Abyss Absolute Immortal Sword, the Five Elements and Six Paths Immortal Killing Sword and other Immortal Qin secrets; The Immortal Qin that shattered the outer realm and dragged it back to the homeland to transform into a continent; The Immortal Qin that opened up the battlefield of the heavenly demons and fought with the heavenly demons to train new soldiers; The Immortal Qin where hundreds of zithers played and thousands of flowers bloomed. What a thrilling setting. Arcane Empire is also so exciting, but unfortunately most authors get stuck as soon as they describe the grand settings and cannot use their imagination. People know the ending as soon as they look at the beginning, which is as boring as writing a fictional history book. In my eyes, the author is undoubtedly a good author who can get rid of stereotypes and show his own creativity. Great! I didn't want to write a review at first, because the author has already written very well, so just stay true to yourself. I just saw a lot of doubts, so I would like to write down my thoughts and encouragement. Come on! You are the best.

The protagonist's blue soul can enter the Mathematical Olympiad Empire, and the purple soul can receive key training. Then the protagonist's second world has a lot of blue souls, are you sure it's not a joke?

The protagonist is poisonous and the institutional problems are unbelievable. How does this country exist? It should not have been divided long ago. I guess there will be some foreign enemies. Otherwise, it will be like treating the readers as fools and those who hold high positions. These people all regard the country as a resource bank and do not want to be responsible. The book only writes about the nobility and convenience of arcanists from beginning to end. Where do their resources come from? The exploitation of the lower class can be seen from the random destruction of the world. Anyone who is not an arcanist will become a slave of the arcanist. To become a slave of the Arcane Empire, you have to compete, otherwise you will not be looked down upon. Others are tools for bargaining chips. Although it is not written explicitly, various attitudes have long been shown. Either you are at the top, and once you become a top, you will always be at the top. There are too many relationships in the book, and there are a lot of high-level people who have climbed up from low talents. That may not matter. At least you have a good teacher. Otherwise, haha, you say you don't care about rights, but in fact, rights are always firmly in your hands, otherwise resources fall from the sky? In this society, people are either talented enough to be favored by others, or they are not good enough and they are guilty of possessing gems, or they are useless and are used as firewood to burn themselves to illuminate the arcanists. Why does this country keep expanding? Because the resource cake has been divided long ago, and we can only find new cakes, and the old people have to take part of the new cakes. In a vicious circle, the country will only become more and more bloated until one day "bong" will be gone.

The author recommends that you do not write an intelligent mage protagonist. In today's novels, if you want to talk about intelligence, the first reaction of old bookworms is that they should be at least the type of Colonel Chu. People do everything they can and don't take personal emotions into consideration. To put it bluntly, he is extremely rational and indifferent. As for the protagonist in your novel, he is greedy, naive, casual, unorganized without any plan, whatever comes to mind, and has a little bit of idealism and kindness. If he is an ordinary person, he will naturally behave well. Even if he is a warlock, he can accept it. However, have you ever seen a mage-type character with this setting? How do you feel when you say that a mage is very kind and innocent? My first reaction is, in which episode will this cannon fodder die?

The writing is very good. There is a sister in the world of martial arts and there are many plots. Sorry, look at my name.

Later, you will become a martial arts immortal who is also a talented person. You have strayed so far. Fortunately, you are still an arcanist, similar to a wizard. You can compete with me in the later stage and use one method to master all methods, right?

I still like the kind of person who pursues knowledge, has a clear stance, and doesn't meddle in other people's business. This protagonist is just nosy, and has rich emotions. Without cheats, he might live worse than a dog.

This book is very similar to The Witcher's Journey. I have read The Witcher's Journey more than ten times. I didn't expect to be lucky enough to come across a similar novel again. Good luck, author.

I'm particularly thinking about what would happen if the arcanist in this book meets the wizard in the wizard's journey. They both pursue knowledge and truth and have the same huge world view.

It's really hard to read, because of its novel setting, I read it twice, but I couldn't stand it after reading one or two hundred chapters each time 😡😡😡😡😡

Visually check the direction of the mental world. One is to refine the false and become the real world; The other is similar to the mysterious world view, the reflection of the world, the spiritual world; There are also the shadow world, dream world, mirror world, etc. That are similar to the spiritual world; (These worlds are all reflection worlds. If each world is compared to a book, the reflection world is the cover of the book. . It doesn't have to be bound to a book, it can exist alone, but it is better to have a book.) Then there are worlds such as the sea of consciousness. This kind of world is too strange; (Let's take the analogy of books. Other worlds have entities. The world of the sea of consciousness is the e-book, and its entity is the words in the book, which is the information.) I can only think of this for the moment.

Come on, it's great, it makes my eyes light up.

This crappy book is really damn good written, but the title and introduction are too slow. I clicked on the introduction many times and then exited. If it weren't for the shortage of books, I would miss reading one less good book, but the updates are too slow, gkdgkd .

Most of the other novels I thought were too slow and the plots were cliche. But this one was the only one I thought was too fast. Most importantly, it was very empty and there was no sense of immersion. Several worlds were written in an instant, and there were no plots in those worlds... It was a bit of a running story.

Why do you want to do that Dina? Just kill Dina and plunder that talent directly. The system is to let people walk on the path of the devil. They have to pretend to be a virgin and are extremely speechless. Isn't there a protagonist who has no moral bottom line? What kind of bad novel is it now?

Ah, I read many chapters in a row, quit and wanted to invest, but found that there was no chance, so I had to invest in the lucky bag, and then. . . Guess what I found. . Isn't this name a bit hasty? I can't believe it now. I actually clicked on a novel with such an outrageous name. Although it is very interesting, I think the reason why it is not popular has more to do with this name.