I Preached in the Six Dynasties

To be honest, the Six Dynasties series was okay at the beginning, but the second-hand Cheng Tiantian was waiting for death every day, and the operation was like a ten-year cerebral thrombosis. Every time, he relied on the protagonist's aura. Brothers, just watch it for fun, but for the sake of the emperor's withering away, spend 35 to watch an episode of pure paratroopers.

If the main character of a good book has to be dressed as a woman 😅, don't you feel uncomfortable when writing it?

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Only when you write about a fairy tale can you explain why Wu Song holds so much in his mouth In the novel, Wu Song can play with 3-5 hundred kilograms of stones with one hand. We take the middle number. 400 Pounds. The 400 Jin in the Song Dynasty is now 500 Jin. Wu Song threw one foot with one hand. In ancient times, one foot was equal to 231 centimeters! The gravitational potential energy of the fall is W=MGH! 250KG* 10* (the gravity is 2500KG multiplied by the height) 2.31= 5775.5KG is just the strength of Wu Song's one hand! His hands weigh more than 11,400 kg! So Wu Song's strength is only about 12 tons! But everyone has also overlooked one plot! The key is that after Wu Song finished playing, he acted like a normal person! Playing basketball with Kobe is no different than playing with toys as a child! When you move things, you can feel that if an object requires 50% of your strength to move, your face will turn red and your face will look hideous. But there is nothing unusual about Wu Song! In other words, half of Wu Song's strength has not been used up yet! Then we can say that Wu Song used about 35% of his strength when playing with stones! In other words, Wu Song's strength is about 35 tons! Original text Shi En said: "Three to five hundred kilograms of stone, how can I despise him!" Wu Song then hugged the stone pier and gently picked it up. With both hands, he lifted the stone pier and knocked it down to a depth of a foot into the ground. Wu Song then lifted his right hand into the ground, lifted it up, looked into the sky, and threw it up about ten feet high from the ground. Wu Song only caught it with both hands, then gently placed it on its original resting place. He turned around and looked at Shi En and the other prisoners. His face was not red, his heart was not beating, and his mouth was not panting. The fact that the tiger was not beaten to pieces by one punch is considered to be a tiger with excellent physical fitness. However, the tiger and Wu Song were beaten to the same degree. If he is not a fairy, it can only mean that Water Margin is actually a science fiction novel, telling the story of a tiger tank fighting a small Gundam.

The recent plot is unfolding, but the writing is still too urgent and too fast, a bit like the rhythm of Fa Qing. I hope I can maintain the previous writing style and status, and don't be coerced by comments. I saw that the villain of the latest chapter, Ximen Qing, had only appeared twice, and someone was already typing: Not dead yet, too frustrated, and want to abandon the book... Day after day, if you listened to him, this book would become third-rate. Because what you write is not a pure white text, the kind that kills you all the way to the end. With such a grand world and so many familiar characters in the Four Great Classics, it would be a pity for such a good subject matter to be reduced to the foil of an invincible protagonist without any charm of their own. Having said this, I would like to say one last thing, if you can keep writing one million words without breaking it, I will give it to you from the Silver Alliance!

To be honest, I was attracted by Pan Jinlian Lin Daiyu really doesn't have anything attractive about her. Except for those literary and artistic people who like her, ordinary people should think she is very artificial! Burying flowers and all that is really too frivolous.

After a few words, it looks like it has the advantages of an old-school fairy tale, and it's plot-oriented and interesting. But I also hope not to make the common mistakes of old-school Xianxia. It's just that the protagonist has no ambition and follows the plot aimlessly. It's called a carefree life, but in fact it's all about adventure and cheating, and he's kind enough to be a saint. I hope to combine it with the current main theme of fairy tales. The protagonist is motivated, has a plan for his life, and strives to grasp his destiny. Another one is the interaction with the girls. You have to do it when you are in trouble. Don't imitate a certain corpse stitcher, pretending to be a saint while engaging in ambiguity, occupying the latrine and not shitting. It's disgusting... Personal opinion, I don't like to delete it.

Look at the introduction of Good Guys. The six countries in the four classics stand side by side. The one about Journey to the West does not dwarf the other three.

The previous few books were all pornographic books, is this one😃😃This is not for criticism

Cut, cut, if I read your book, the dog officer won't be angry, right? Unlike me, I only feel sorry for you.

Zhao Zilong entered the Grand View Garden seven times, and Sun Wukong defeated Zhujiazhuang three times. I have read the book The Four Great Classics.

Why aren't good books popular? This author's The Number One Scholar of the Song Dynasty, Going North to Conquer the Qing Dynasty, and The Best Eunuchs (Eunuchs) are all good books. It's at the ceiling level of the harem genre. The author has become a god in the YY bar, but it wasn't popular at the beginning. Alas, maybe the environment has changed.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I don't want to read anymore. I don't like stallion novels.

After reading the introduction, I was particularly curious. In this world of immortals and gods, Lu Bu was responsible for the military force of the Three Kingdoms. How would he die?

After reading dozens of chapters, I don't know what the author thinks. He always likes to lower the protagonist's IQ for the sake of the plot. After going out and eating so many things, he still doesn't have a long memory. It's not as good as the three-headed monster he met at the beginning. At least he knows how to be careful.

Isn't this invincible label put on the wrong label? It seems that the protagonist can't even guarantee his own safety!

I looked carefully at the invincible flow tags, but no one can beat them 😵

It's such a disgusting invincible label. It's written like the crotch cloth in the latrine. It's smelly and long.

It's not me who said that no matter how good the front is, it will be just as bad as the back. The back is always watery, and skipping dozens of chapters has no effect at all.

So we can see Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong in this book?

This kind of world view, if it were replaced by someone with good writing skills, it would become a magical book. It is a pity that

Why does this author like to invent his own idioms, just in a different order than the normal one?

The ending was a bit rushed, the whole thing was set up and I thought it was going to be a big fight. .

The fighting power is very confusing. The monks worked hard to become immortals and gods, but in the end they were no match for a fierce general's sword.

I like this kind of book where all kinds of familiar characters are together. It's very satisfying. Author, keep up the good work

The logic of the story is messy, the connection between the original work and the extraordinary ability is blunt, and there are flaws everywhere. It is better to re-imagine the plot.

The world background of the story is the world of Xianxia, ​​which is stitched together by the four famous classics. At the beginning of time travel, the protagonist learned the Five Elements Alchemy from an old Taoist, but because they were not destined to be masters and disciples, they did not become apprentices. After the old Taoist passed away, he began to travel around the world. The author of this book is Ri Risheng, who is also an old author. His writing skills have always been good, and he is very good at creating the atmosphere of the story and mobilizing the readers' emotions. However, he sometimes likes to play with words, which has been criticized by readers. Of course, the flaws are not concealed. From the current point of view, the subject matter of this book is undoubtedly very interesting. The world of Xianxia, ​​which is a fusion of the four famous works, is still very fresh and interesting, and it can catch the readers' attention. Moreover, the protagonist's character of "being poor is to be alone, and being prosperous is to help the world" is also more in line with the needs of public readers. ---Recommended by Gong Zhonghao's "Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

It was unclear at the beginning. It was not clear whether it was a soul or a body. It was not clear how the body could speak the local language. It was not clear whether it had anything on it.

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