The Cultivator Who Came Out of Konoha

I haven't used QQ for a long time. I accidentally saw the group message today and found out that you have posted a new book, Mouse. I searched it and it already has 180,000 words. It's time to give it a try again. I have always liked your writing style. Come on, Mouse! ! !

It's invincible from the beginning, and if it doesn't do something, it will just be a daily casual novel. The protagonist is invincible, and his disciples are also invincible compared to the five major shadow villages (killing the Akatsuki organization is effortless, everyone in Akatsuki has a shadow-level combat power), most of them are daily, and the whole novel seems a bit empty, too bland, without the ups and downs of the plot. Judging from the author's previous book, he may like to write such bland books. This book still hopes to make some changes. I just finished reading a fan novel about Naruto and One Piece. The protagonist also has Goldfinger who has become stronger. He secretly developed many spies. He also became a spy repeatedly and based on the general storyline of Naruto, he eventually ruled the entire ninja world and changed the system of the ninja world. Then Shattered Void returned to the world of One Piece and repeated the spy operation (but during the period, people from the ninja world were brought over to assist). This is just to express an idea and creative direction. I hope the author can consider the setting of the plot.

I have voted for the monthly vote, which can be regarded as support for Mouse, but this book is very unfriendly to people like me who have only heard of Naruto but not read it. Every time a character appears, I have to go to Baidu, which is very tiring😭😭. I like Moo Zi's writing style very much. I feel that Moo Zi has a big world view, a huge skill system, and unique insights into writing novels. Take "Onmyoji" as an example. Other novels that describe realms or countries are all a training system (for example: Fighter, Dou Master, Dou Zun...). Country after country seems to be just an upgrade system, which gives people the feeling that the world is very small. , Cultivation skills all revolve around that circle. As long as Mouse writes about the differences between countries, some countries practice fighting spirit, some countries practice magic, some countries mainly use mechanical puppets, and some places focus on taming animals, etc., It will feel like the world is very big. I particularly like this about mice. I'm not complaining here, I just hope that Mouse can shape a world by himself. The world you created is really fascinating 😭😭 I will abandon this book and look forward to the next book to continue to witness Mouse's huge worldview 😁😁

I'm just going to complain about it. They tried to persuade me to stop at the beginning. It was too dramatic and I didn't feel immersed at all. Aboriginal + Aboriginal. Waiting for the eunuch to fail, a cultivator is really unworthy. Are you a Pokemon? I completely put on this cultivation skin and write a Pokemon book. Totally fooled by the name and introduction.

Damn it, isn't this the Hokage who practices Shushenwen's routine! I was talking about how this routine became more and more familiar the more I read it. It turned out to be the kind of slap-in-the-face routine in Xiuzhen novels, one after another! Writing a Naruto fanfic like this is really interesting!

The smell got stronger and stronger, then receded.

I haven't seen anything about cultivation and Naruto, it's quite interesting; I just feel that except for the protagonist, the IQ of other characters has been seriously lowered. Except for a few jounin, most of them are calm and not so impulsive and irritable. Moreover, Naruto is a world of physical persuasion. It is impossible for the protagonist to intentionally contact the Jinchuuriki. I just simply find an ANBU supervisor, and the greater chance is to invite him to have tea; in the end, I feel that the protagonist's trashy plot can be overcome. There are many situations where the protagonist's behavior is unusual. As long as you have a little contact and observe carefully, it is impossible to find that the protagonist is unusual; I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better!

The damn genius used to hide under the covers to watch

I just want to talk about my brain. I couldn't stand the first few chapters. From the names and plots, I couldn't read them. No wonder I have to have fandom to evaluate them.

What a pity! The subject matter is good and the characters are quite fleshed out, but the setting is too far away from the Naruto system and the routine is too old. Starting from martial arts and integrating the Hokage system, it should look better. For example, chakra is a system of three chakras and seven chakras in yoga tantra. It is possible to develop an internal power system of twelve regular meridians plus eight extraordinary meridians to refine chakra. Is it feasible to use the idea of ​​​​internal power moves to release ninjutsu?

😁😁😁Finally waiting for you to open a new book, come on~

I thought I was really going to write the second part of Ghost Talent. How could I remember that I said I was going to write the second part of Ghost Talent, called Good Fortune Zhong Shenxiu 🙂🙂

The character is seriously OOC and has a fantasy flavor. . Let's read the original article about being a trap. .

Wait until you publish a new book. More please. By voting and giving rewards in this way, fans will be more motivated 😁

People's names are not easy to remember at all, especially for those who have studied Japanese, and the names of the characters here are even more awkward.

If you can tolerate the somewhat cliche fantasy routine, this is a good book to read.

Mouse's new book, how could you not support it?

The story written is very good and very suitable to my taste. Please keep updating @ω@

Come on💪! Beautifully written! I hope it will be released soon!

Damn it, it's not finished, the investment failed, and I lost money again.

Is there a book club group? Give me a group account?

Can't there be more? 😅 It's not enough at all.

It's good-looking, but it's just too little, so I'd better keep it.

Author! More... One chapter a day is too little =_=···!

It's pretty good, but there are too few.