The Rise of the Immortal Cultivation Sect

The description of the protagonist is not good, I didn't get beaten up, everything is my fault, 1. You are the leader. Small mistakes are also right, and they are right to destroy you. The main thing is to build the foundation without death. You can still inherit and recruit people. 2. You are a master of foundation building. If they don't obey, you can directly establish your power or trick them to death. Dare you not listen during the Qi refining period? Don't you know how to write the word "death" and don't you know the difference in levels?

Give me some advice! Can you please stop thinking that he has a golden finger? It looks awkward. Just give the bead a name and that's it! Who doesn't know this is a golden finger? It's boring to talk about it, and it's awkward to watch. The reader is not a novice, he can understand it, and there is no need to explain it!

Author, your way of writing soliloquy looks so painful. There are too many such descriptions. This kind of writing style needs to be changed. Not many people like to read a neurotic soliloquy. The plot and overall are okay.

Background: The two tribes of humans and monsters are fighting each other, and a tide of beasts occurs every few decades. The last foundation of the protagonist's sect died at the hands of this beast, and the master's battle with this beast also caused his longevity to last for decades. The protagonist is currently engaged in the war launched by the Qingyun Gate to attack the monsters. Comment: Extremely poisonous. I don't know why the author set up such a Virgin. From the hatred of the sect to the justice of the human race, it was smoothed out by the protagonist's Virgin's heart? This monster is the root cause of the decline of his sect, and the protagonist can't bear to let it go. Are the other sects of other sects just testing the weakness of the protagonist's sect, and the protagonist wants to destroy them?

From the plot point of view, it is tasteless, and from the writing point of view, the sentences are not fluent.

Sect-type novels are not popular. The most popular ones now are the Mortal Stream, Immortal Farming Stream, and Primordial Gou Stream. Martial Arts has a weirder plot, and the protagonist must be decisive in killing. There cannot be women below the stage of pill formation. Generally, the Three Spiritual Roots are the most popular. Sect and Family and Classical Chinese Literature Streams are not popular, and there are very few people who read them.

The realm after Nascent Soul is obviously to become a god, to achieve a raunchy celestial and human stage?

I spend my whole day cultivating my family, and it's not bad to visit a sect once in a while😊It's just that the new author made too many typos, which affects the reading, I hope it can be changed. As a new author, the initial data will definitely not be ideal, but if you write carefully and persist, you will be rewarded. I wish you better and better as you write!

Can a sect survive for more than 2,000 years by relying on foundation-building monks to support the sect? Then some of the foundation-building monks will definitely want to run away. It relies on the sect's system and orderly inheritance. The emergence of foundation-building monks is only the inevitable result of the improvement of the sect's system. Why do so many big guys establish a power? Is it just for inheritance? It also has the function of establishing a sect to collect resources for him. The sect and the high-level monks in the sect are mutually beneficial, and it is not the high-level monks who support the sect. Obviously the author has not thought of this level, and only thinks that foundation building relies on individuals to support the sect.

I can't bear it anymore, so I cry and laugh, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, raise your hand.

Qi-refining monks call foundation-building monks senior. That's how they are called outside the sect. People in the same sect still call them senior, fellow Taoist, and even senior fellow apprentices are omitted. It doesn't feel like a sect at all.

Forget it, I can't stand it anymore. If my writing skills improve later, someone can help me.

Where is the sect leader? Is there no one or I missed it? It's impossible for a sect to not have a sect leader, right?

I didn't realize it was a sect-type novel, it was quite awkward and the operation was not in place.

I borrowed the building and posted "I start a live broadcast to sell fairy treasures", wishing you a great success!

Not what I said. Your sect's logic is broken.

The writing is too dry. Since the writing is not good, don't write so many unnecessary settings. The sects are divided into large, medium and small, and the beast tides are divided into large, medium and small. It will make people shake their heads... The most important thing for a novel is the rhythm and excitement. This kind of family/sect-style novels are slow to upgrade in the early stage and the plots are the same. It is especially important to grasp the rhythm and excitement.

It's extremely poisonous... That's it, it's a ghost if you can write good grades.

The front was fine, I thought it was fellow Daoist Gou. Looking at the disgusting look again, Gou Dao said the Holy Mother's table.

Recommended family cultivation stream: Cultivation of Immortality with Resources

The writing is so dry that I couldn't hold myself back from reading a chapter until I became addicted.

The time described by the author is so worthless. When I started young, I could spend 15 or 20 years at a time, which was very uncomfortable.

You have been in the bead for so many years and you still say that you are 27 years old and you have no idea?