I Became the Protagonist's Ancestor

It is recommended that I change my name and I became the protagonist's licking dog

I'm afraid if I hadn't gotten used to licking, I would have written a novice Wudi article like a dog licking article 🤭

What is this written? Isn't this disgusting? What kind of ancestor system? Even if I die, I don't want this disgusting system. Adding a dog will not lead a good death, and Xiao Yanyao must die.

Licking a dog doesn't count. It's right to protect Xiao Yan's ancestor after traveling back in time. I just don't like this kind of setting. I feel uncomfortable traveling back in time to be a nanny.

Author, when will the Mortal Cultivation of Immortals begin?

Author, when will the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality be completed?

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less. It's not scary to fall in love with someone when you meet someone. What's scary is to be embarrassed and fall in love with someone when you meet someone 😒

Discontinuity between chapters 😵 Plot jumps in the middle 😅

The author is a new author, so you have to give him some time. Even if there are some toxic points, it doesn't matter. Even if the original work is different, is it toxic? We're done with it. If I really can't stand it anymore, I can give you some suggestions. It's not good to troll people. Nowadays, new writers at Qidian basically use their love to generate electricity. You are right, maybe it will be another palace book.

I won't say anything else. I'm drooling after reading this book. I'll experience it for myself.

They are weird towards Yuan Yao and his daughter. Even if they have a good impression of the original novel, there is no need to go to such an extent, right? Save people and provide resources, forget it, what's the point of taking them with you? And calling him Young Master... Emmmm, is this really an old Chinese language? The same goes for the sweet plot like this before

Just reading the introduction poisoned me to death

Too little, too little, too little, too little 😡

I really want to read more biographies of mortals cultivating immortality.

By the way, wouldn't the protagonist feel disgusted sleeping with Medusa? In the original book, she and Xiao Yan gave birth to a daughter. What's the difference between sleeping with your own daughter-in-law?

Why is there an affair with Jialan? Apart from Fang Qingxue, the outstanding beauties in Yongsheng should be Linglong and Yanshui 😍

Mo family sisters 😍

The writing is really messy, going from here to there at a time

Well written 👍 Well written 👏 Little written 💔 When is the great god Tiantian

They are all considered old bachelors 😤

Hope is the double heroine Yun Yun Yafei

I haven't read the book, I just looked at the comments section. The author has written three books. To be honest, he is still a first-rate writer after writing three books. The author really can't find a job.

Do you understand?

Hey, hey, this is too fast. Did Yuan Zun write it?

It took a long time to write The Legend of Immortality, so I am a bit unfamiliar with it. . . The world is processed at different speeds, it's too jumpy

I've read ten chapters and it's pretty good. There are not many books of this type. Come on, author!

How can I say pinch? It's a bit poisonous. Maybe I took too much poison. I think it's just like that.