Su Hagi

It seems that the author prefers to write about people and emotions. However, in my personal opinion, the author uses too many function words. Although these poems tend to be graceful and personal, it is not advisable to use too many function words. Function words can easily make poems feel hazy, but if used too much, once there are problems with the structure or other aspects of the poem, the poem will become too complicated to read: the original emotional communication is not deep enough, and when the communication process becomes hazy, it will make people feel that these function words are redundant or unnecessary. It is recommended that the author either reduce the use of empty words or use other techniques or methods to make the poems fuller, otherwise it will really not read well (it only refers to some poems, some poems in the book are still relatively good. I am also a poetry lover, and there are some places that I can share with you).

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It is a good book, with beautiful writing style, far-reaching artistic conception, and hard work, which is very valuable. By the way, I would like to introduce myself and introduce myself briefly...