My Pigsty Is a Fairyland

It can only be said that the idea is to find a new way in the clichéd story, but the writing style is really average and straightforward. This novel may be read more if it is placed on some free apps, but it is really difficult to break out on a platform with many masters. There is almost no possibility in the short term, but generally speaking, the more you write, the better. Compared with the previous chapters, it is like the difference between primary school students and junior high school students. Come on!

I am also a down-and-out writer. I am following you on a certain channel and have added it to my bookshelf. Let's work together, brother.

Let me know what you think It's been more than a month since I saw the author on Douyin. From the beginning, I felt that people with dreams are great, and I liked them inexplicably. Then I read the book and found some personal issues. Other friends also raised them, so I didn't mention them. But if you continue reading, you will find that the author is very persistent, which is not easy to be called stubborn. Until the author's website was shortened with more than 20,000 words, this was undoubtedly a shot in the arm. The author may have become more confident and firmly believed that he was buried gold. But in fact, there are many people who have signed contracts with a few thousand words starting from the starting point (not to mention internal investment). This result can only be said to be acceptable, with a passing level of 60 points. The idea is good and the writing is good, but there are also flaws. Looking at the update frequency these days, the author may be tired. This is uncomfortable. What about the book that promised to become a god? What about the dream you promised? The above remarks are not malicious, they are just expressions of emotion. Writing is a dream, but online writing is a marketable commodity.

From the very beginning of Douyin and the first day I wrote about Pigsty, I saw it. I keep up with updates every day. Although there are only two updates a day, I really like it 🌹🌹🌹

The protagonist's motivation to create a fairyland because of glaucoma seems to be a narrow-minded world view. Moreover, the protagonist is worried about finding a job, and there is no further foreshadowing. He is hungry and accidentally discovers that he has the creation of a world. The setting of the scene is unreasonable. It just forcibly adds "Golden Finger" to the paragraph, which seems abrupt.        ，，，，，，，， If you insist on stationing at the starting point, I suggest military culture, the internal space is still large and can be developed. It's just my personal opinion. I would like to advise the author and wish you a bright future.

This is from Douyin. I followed you on the 3rd day of Douyin. Come on.

The overall feeling is too abrupt. I discovered that I can create things because I was hungry. The appearance of this golden finger is more like an imposition. And at the end of the article, why did I suddenly create a fairyland? Why deduce history? Just to heal your eyes? If you want to cure your eyes, why don't you create a pair of eyes yourself instead of creating a fairyland? If you want to lay down the ultimate foreshadowing here, then this reason is too far-fetched! The author should polish it more!

Brother, please don't stop. I invested several thousand. Don't let me waste my time. You work hard and I am optimistic about you.

To be precise... It will take five days to apply for the Operations Officer

I've added a reading list for you, come on!

When it comes to updates, don't ask Douyin 😁

One hundred million times smaller than the real thing... I wonder how the protagonist's diseased eyes can see?

Are you a eunuch? What about the positive energy you have in Douyin?

A successful author codes 25 hours a day. Come on, author, you must become a qualified author coding 26 hours a day.

I'm from Douyin, I don't have a monthly pass, so I can only recommend it.

What I saw on Douyin was much better than mine.

Writing one chapter a day, do you call this a full-time job? Full time, at least 7,000 daily updates

It is impossible to become a god with one book. If you persist in finishing it, the probability of the next book will be much greater.

After reading a few chapters, I realized that the author's name seemed familiar.