There's Something Wrong with My Skill Tree

(｀ω´) This book is written quite normally, but it's a bit of a stream of consciousness. A common problem for novices writing books is that they have made up a lot of things in their heads, but many things are missing when writing, which makes people confused. Sometimes, character events come out inexplicably because there is no foreshadowing, but in fact there are some. In my brain, I forget to write it out, and I cover my face, just like me ( ' - ' * ) But some content is quite interesting, but it needs to be realistic, add more content, and be fuller (｀ω´) Don't skip some things! Don't even know what happened

Suggestions for readers: If you want to read this book, don't read it with your brain in mind Suggestions for the author: ①: The world background is unclear and there are some problems with the setting. However, your world background setting still has a certain logic, but I just don't understand it. ②: There is also a problem with your outline. "Time", "Growth route", "Too many poisonous points", "It feels messy" ③: Characterization. "Every supporting role is incompletely portrayed" and "the supporting roles are even worse", but the portrayal of the protagonist is the best. : I suggest you change it. Your picture description is very strong, and the event description of the main task is quite good.

The idea is really good and unique, and the plot is acceptable to me, a Shennong. Come on, author 🙂

I saw Chapter 24 and recorded it. This is the only novel whose writing is terrible, but which still kept me reading. (The plot is great.) Just... Speechless. It is very difficult to read, but the author, please work hard.

To be honest, this book is very embarrassing. The author makes the protagonist keep breaking down the designed character. He is promised to be a transparent person. You see, various rich girls, top students, schoolmates, police sisters, etc. Take turns to come to you. The protagonist is promised to be low-key and go wherever there is trouble.

The female characters here are all very poisonous, so poisonous that it will make you sick to death

The theme and setting of this book are similar, but there are too many poisonous points. One of the heroines or the heroine in it said something like this, with great power comes great responsibility. I feel like the protagonist agrees with it after that, and I am really convinced.

. The setting is very good. As for the content, I am a complete novice and self-righteous. There are many poison points. If you want to see the setting and poison resistance, you can enter. The content will make you want to vomit.

This book is worthy of its popularity. Apart from the writing, which is barely readable, the plot and characters are useless. It also has a lot of poisonous points. The poisonous points are as follows: 1. The protagonist shares his secret (Goldfinger) with the female partner whom he has never met a few times. 2. The protagonist does things too openly, as if he does things without thinking, without considering the consequences. 3. The protagonist was actually convinced by the female supporting character's words that "the greater the ability, the greater the responsibility." Brother, this style of painting is wrong. This is an online novel where individualism is the mainstream. If the protagonist's three views are not in line with the mainstream, unless there is a golden finger and not afraid of death, you are poisonous!

I saw Chapter 29 and couldn't help but give a few words of my own opinion (purely my personal opinion): 1. The subject matter is quite novel (this is what attracted me to continue reading), 2. The writing style needs to be strengthened (the author can slowly improve in the future and be patient), 3. The plot is very uncomfortable, it is not funny at all, it is not serious at all, I dare not write in depth, and the characters are not well described. I just say and do things that are illogical and inconsistent with the character's personality and identity. It seems very uncomfortable... I hope the author can work hard and write better and better. I have always believed that readers and authors should not simply be consumers and sellers, but should be friends. The more excellent authors write excellent works, the more books readers can enjoy. Looking forward to our next encounter, I will slip this book away...

The subject matter is quite good! I suggest the author rewrite it, otherwise no one will subscribe to the next issue 🙂 I've only read 4 chapters and I can't stand it. You are also a talent.

Just 3 chapters can create so many disgusting images: Chapter 1-2, female classmate Wei Sister Su: She threw a dozen notes in class, ignored them and kept throwing them away, stole someone's notebook after school, and shed hair and tears in it while reading. Chapter 2, Fatty: When he catches someone, he starts talking bad about Hong, and wants to drag people into talking bad about Hong with him, and deal with the rich second generation together. Chapter 2-3, female reporter Luo Jiahui: Stalking, the protagonist clearly doesn't want to answer the question, but he keeps being pestered and asked questions, and even pulls the protagonist to investigate the KTV. Of course the most powerful one is the protagonist Qian Luming/Qian Liu Nian: The behavioral logic is inconsistent, highlighting the collapse of a character; Chapter 1: At the beginning, a neurotic drawing of the skill tree is highlighted, which is obviously the skill tree of Hong, and then he belittles it to show that the protagonist also hates Hong, but it does not describe how the protagonist knows Hong's skill tree; Chapter 2: The protagonist knows that his secrets are recorded in the notebook and cannot be given to him. People were watching, but he was left unprepared in the class before Sister Wei Su peeked in. After being peeked by Sister Wei Su, she was still naive/I lied to myself and said that maybe Wei only saw Huang Shuwen and didn't see the secret behind it, but the author really said later that Wei didn't see the secret; Chapter 3: It was clear that he had kept himself safe before and didn't want to get involved in Hong's affairs, but when he saw Hong Jin KTV, he wanted to go in and listen to what Hong and the others said.

Why are there so many people selling dog meat at Qidian? It's just a self-pleasure romance novel. Wouldn't it be better to put it in the girls' section?

The setting is good, but this thing is too poisonous. The author feels like I'm in shit.

The female supporting role is too poisonous and twisted, and the interaction between the male protagonist is also very poisonous.

Self-motivated articles, no matter the reader, the main character is pleasing to the eye, the supporting characters are poisonous, the kind that poisons people to death, I want to beat people after reading it, and I want to throw the author into the trash can.

I couldn't stand it, I couldn't stand it, the few girls that came out were so disgusting, I thought the setting was pretty good, but these girls just broke the book and kept reading.

Really, I have endured all the poisons in the past. You damned arranged a dog collar for the pig's trotters and even put it on. I really can't stand it anymore. If you really can't do it, find a class and stop writing a book.

Did the author offend someone? There were a lot of trolls at the beginning of the third chapter, and each one was weirder than the last. I was so happy.

Did I remember it wrong? The protagonist mentioned at the beginning is reborn, an orphan, and knows a lot in order to survive. This, there are bad people around, but there is no doubt. Wear a dog collar voluntarily. The biggest failure is the collapse of the character. When a celebrity's personality is broken, it's very dramatic when watching TV. At the beginning, the male protagonist is withdrawn and self-improving, but then he becomes stupid.

The women written by the author feel that they are all crazy. If they treat me like that, I have the strength to assassinate them and wipe out their entire family.

{"NickName":"Zhu Linglong","UserId":156545330} My personal opinion on this book 1. The protagonist's female deskmate is really disgusting (others have made it clear that they don't want to care about her but insist on others to deal with her) 2. The plot is really stiff, is it simply tougher than the plot? ! 3. The supporting roles are similar, the policewoman (?) Completely ruined the image, right? (Although some people may be like this in reality, readers don't like to read it) 4. I don't like it, and I will leave if I can't read it, but I really don't want to see such a good idea go to waste

The main character is okay and pleasing to the eye, and none of the female supporting characters are normal. It should be written by the author for himself. I want to see what my brothers and sisters think about it.