From Sleeping in a Haunted House to Earning Millions a Month

It's too poisonous. The main character's ability is unclear. He only says he can see the date and time of death, and the background is unclear. The boss is a poisonous person, and the sister is a poisonous person. And then, I want to see ghosts, and all the tragedies in your story seem to be intentional, such as that association, which is anti-human! You deserve to be thrown into the street, you also said that you slightly imitated the air conditioner, and you imitated it very well, but it's totally different! It's about redemption and salvation, but in your case it's a conspiracy, brother-sister antagonism, and a man-made tragedy, and then you create redemption and so on. Moreover, the protagonist is controlled by someone, like a fool.