A Sword Cultivator Starting from Martial Universe

The most poisonous point of this book is that the protagonist is a 12-year-old child who has traveled from the earth. He looks down on the swordsmen of Xuantian Continent and thinks that the swordsmanship of various geniuses on the mainland for hundreds of thousands of years is not as good as his own. He wants to create his own swordsmanship? How many sword cultivators have you seen? Have you ever met a high-ranking monk? How dare you speak so loudly? Just like those who have learned Tai Chi in low martial arts and want to go to the ancient times to beat Daluo Jinxian! It's so embarrassing, I couldn't hold on after dozens of chapters!

Regarding the female protagonist, because the protagonist's character is based on the second uncle and the uncle, there will not be many female protagonists. At least, one, Panlong brings his own wife, and more, there are four, one for Wudong, Panlong, Great Lord, Devouring a World, and at most six to eight. Eight is basically impossible, and six is ​​probably difficult. So whoever you want to be the heroine, you can go to the heroine building to give your opinion. I will look at everyone's opinions and then write the heroine's role. The main ones are the three worlds of Wudong, Panlong and Great Overlord.

Are you writing Wu Dong Qian Kun or writing your own book? The protagonist of your own book has nothing to do with you. Why did you make Lin Dong, the protagonist of Wu Da Qian Kun, so vivid? Are you copying books or what? If you continue to write like this, your book will be completely useless.

It makes me, an outsider, embarrassed to see how I boast about Guigu Kendo and make others look useless.

It really feels like this is not a fanfic. One chapter is over 4,000 words, and the protagonist doesn't even have a 100-word plot. So why are you writing a fanfic? You could just change the name of the powerful sword cultivator nanny Lin Dong.

A word of advice to the author: delete the part about the dragon. If you write about the great master, you can save some readers.

I can't stand it anymore. I don't understand the author's meaning when he writes that the protagonist is raised as a daughter. Are you trying to be clever? Think you're funny? Don't say I'm just bastardizing, I really can't figure out the author's brain circuit. Even if the author writes that because the protagonist is too pretty, I can accept it because the adoptive father has a bad taste and raises him as a daughter. But when I pick up a child and raise him as a daughter without even looking between the legs, I really feel that I can't get past this point. Even if you pick up an animal as a pet, normal people will naturally look at the key parts to determine the gender! Maybe it's because I'm a little stubborn as I get older. You can see for yourself later whether it's good or not. I won't comment on it. For the above point, it's hard for me not to complain about it. If the author feels that my comment is influential, he or she can delete it directly. It doesn't matter. I just come here to complain about it and wish the author to write better in the future. That's it!

I feel that the author has a very clear mind and is different from normal people like us. Swordsmen practice swordsmanship in order to become stronger, to protect or witness certain things. Ximen Chuixue and Ye Gucheng, two swordsmen, have their own purposes for practicing swordsmanship. And you actually think that you can't have worries in order to practice swordsmanship. If you practice swordsmanship just for the sake of practicing swordsmanship, then what is his reason for wielding the sword in the future?

I suggest changing the title of the book to "The Journey of Nanny Starting from Martial Arts"

Please recommend a Wudong fanfic. The main character's surname can be anything but Lin. I found that the author of the Wudong fanfic can't write anything without the surname Lin.