My Cards Have Mutated and Evolved Again

It's true that the inspiration is more than enough. To be honest, I really like the card theme. Card Disciple once fascinated me in the past. I also want to read other similar genres, but it is really too niche and not many people write about it. I saw this book and it was recommended by the editor, so I came in, but. . . After reading dozens of chapters, there is no logic. After reading for a long time, I just couldn't understand what the power system of this book is. The storyline is too blunt, and the characters are just like paper figures. Does anyone know what happened next, whether it got better, or whether it improved.

The subject matter is good, but the plot and writing are not good, which is a pity.

How would you rate this book? . . It's barely readable. To be honest, the author's writing style really feels a bit different. . . .

Let's talk about the benefits first Upgrading the cards is cool. Not only is it upgraded, but it also comes with a story, which is perfect. After that, there are no advantages but only shortcomings. It feels like the author is writing a civilian awakening and upgrading stream, but it is too bland, and at the same time there is a feeling of invincibility, which makes it look completely different and awkward. There is neither the feeling of ordinary people working hard to become stronger, nor the feeling of invincible streamers pretending to be coquettish, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, or controlling the world. I personally feel that it may be a little more difficult and a little more difficult to highlight the process of common people's awakening and struggle. Or it may be the recently popular Dihua Invincible, which can help people strengthen. The way it is now is terrible, weird, and awkward.

Writer, writer~ Your writing is already relatively good. I'd like to praise you. Your writing skills have been improved step by step~ But if you practice your writing, don't worry about success or failure. This will definitely happen if your writing skills become better and better!

Provide kkm mine.

The author should be a genius. It is really not easy for him to write this kind of book at a age of no more than 14 years. I've read less than ten chapters. I can't stand it anymore. The feeling of childishness in middle school is overwhelming. Forgive me for being an old b-lighter. Thank you for my insensitivity. Very nice. Come on. When you grow up you will write better works

Can we not have a heroine or a harem? Support me

It's understandable that the protagonist doesn't tell others about the effects of his cards, but is it necessary to hide it even from the readers? If you don't write the card effects of the supporting characters for readers to see, it can be understood that you are trying to ambush the protagonist, but if you don't write the card effects of the protagonist, it will extremely affect the reading experience. It's really about what kind of situation the protagonist encounters, and then writing the protagonist's card to have the skills to solve it.

After reading less than 30 chapters, I feel that in addition to the novel setting, this book has too many shortcomings. The card settings are confusing, the combat power relies entirely on talking, and the protagonist has no personality of his own and is completely a tool of the author. The plot settings are extremely stretched and all kinds of inexplicable. All in all, such a good creative subject was wasted.

Readers, if you have any strange imagination cards, you can hand them out and we will adopt them according to the situation 🤓

It's quite disgusting. Can't you describe the card's skills? Just say that this card is awesome. Where is the awesome rating? Just say it has a high star rating? That's ridiculous. I really can't watch the fight because I can't relate to their awesomeness. Where are they?

This book is awesome. When you look at him, he makes you feel inexplicably irritated. Will want to curse people. And it's written like a turn-based single-player game. It's not a turn-based game, it's just like, you know? It's like being completely different from a horse, pretending to be a sheep, selling dog meat. It's very awkward anyway, and he doesn't have any poisonous points, but when you continue to watch, you will feel inexplicably irritable. If you don't believe it, you can give it a try. If you can continue to watch, then I will give you the upper hand.

This Xiao Xiaoxiao, is she the heroine? The arrangement is too embarrassing, please give it a try! ←_←←_←←_←What I wrote above is good, but at this point, it feels a bit too embarrassing. It would be better if it could be changed more smoothly.

Am I the only one who thinks the writing is okay?

，，       ，，， This author is so awesome. He just starts the battle with a card and fights by himself. He can get high as he pleases. This is indeed a bit like King Kouhu. But King Kouhu at least gave the card basic information, star attributes, various attack and defense values. Damn it, I don't know anything about the early "Immortal Throne" except its name. When I summoned it, I thought the throne would have some kind of magic, but someone came out of the throne, someone came out! And there is no introduction to whether it is a strength or agility type. You will only know after playing. And the second time he used it, he was instantly killed. The reader didn't know anything, but he actually came back to life. He came back to life! Return the Fire of Revenge, my God, don't you want the reader's viewing experience?       ，""，，，？       ！

I don't understand. In this kind of world, shouldn't the special effects of cards be kept secret? Why did that woman swear a poisonous oath and show it to the other party, and the teacher in front of her asked the students to clamor and demand that the card effects be announced. Author, are you sure that this arrangement of the plot of the novel is really good? I have personal doubts. I hope the author can answer my doubts and then find a way to write the reasons into the content of the novel.

If you start bankrupt, you must respond when challenged. Otherwise, you are a coward. You have to show your cards to others to see the specific effects. If you don't give them, you can rob them. This em... This is such a private matter. It can be said that it is your life. Lend me your life? I'm sorry.

Please, author, please don't read The Riddler from beginning to end. We are not detectives. We can do some simple reasoning. It's okay if you hide the card master realm and let us rely on reasoning. I reluctantly did it "I didn't even know when I saw this, which level is this? No My personal guess is that it should be the second level. After all, the third level is gold. Although the front is not entirely silver and bronze is not suitable, but the 8-star summoning spirit in the back is the average level, then this should belong to the second stage." Comments from the pre-battle introduction in Chapter 21. It's okay to hide the protagonist's card ownership and card details. I just treat it as serving the plot, but you have written out the summoned beast and still hide it without any introduction. I guess it's a hammer?

Sorry, this novel has more than 40 chapters where the protagonist meets someone he wants to cooperate with. Those who need help from the protagonist are all women, or seniors, and men of the same generation are all used as stepping stones. There is no one to cooperate with. Is this book just a harem without same-sex friends?

The more I watch, the more boring it becomes. The protagonist is always using his vest, and he is doing random things. There is obviously nothing shameful, there is no villain with a deep hatred, and he does not possess a treasure that defies heaven. He has to hide his head and tail in a mysterious way, and just use his talent to crush him, isn't it?

Well, after reading it, the early stage was quite messy, and the ending was quite sloppy. There were a lot of pits dug, and I just found some rice cereal and got through it, but the idea was quite new and my thinking was quick. I have plenty of inspiration but not enough ability. My writing skills need to be strengthened. If I dig into many places and optimize them, I can write a lot. There are also emotional lines and so on, the author should take a break.

Can the author sort out the combat system? I still don't understand how this division between levels comes about. How does the level of the card master affect the cards? What difference does the star rating and color of the card make to combat effectiveness? It's so cloudy and foggy that I can't even understand it.

As a result, the fairy tale deck is still not finished.

There is a shortage of books, a shortage of books, a shortage of books. I have to say important things three times. Can anyone recommend some good novels 😭

Where am I still raising? Why is it over?

How can I put it, the literary works are just average, but the subject matter is very novel and interesting.

Why can't I find the new book?

In fact, the subject matter is quite novel, but unfortunately I didn't stick with it. Do you have any recommendations for similar card novels?

What an idea that can affect the card world and strengthen them. But this one. . . Later I saw other people who used this kind of creativity and must be with beautiful girls. . . Are there any books with this setting that aren't all about beautiful girl cards? I really want to see it