Candlelight Revelation

What kind of writing is this? It's all rambling and irrelevant. He's supposed to be guarding someone's house, but they kick down the door and he doesn't even care if someone steals. He's incredibly irresponsible. In short, it's a terrible book; I wouldn't recommend reading it.

The local dialect is too strong, too artistic, and not down-to-earth enough.

The author's writing skills are somewhat effective; however, it could be made more relatable and less jargon-heavy.

It felt too contrived and drawn-out, all for the sake of the storyline.

It's all about making small amounts of money, no fun, just a waste of time.

Ah, the author's writing is really quite good, but you're not quite clear on the theme... It's a bit humble, too cautious. Keep it up! I think your writing is okay.

Is it Wei Cangyue or Ding Cangyue?

It's pretty good. The pace is a bit slow, though. I recommend it.

It's getting increasingly watered down; the later parts are rambling and I don't even know what they're trying to say.

No monthly votes, very few book reviews! I'll go check it out, and if it's good, I'll come back and comment.