Candlelight Revelation

Whatever he wrote, he was rambling here and there, looking after someone else's house, kicking in the door, or even having thieves steal things. He was so irresponsible. Overall, it was a bad book. I would advise you to quit.

The local dialect is too serious, too literary and not down-to-earth enough.

The author's writing skills are still somewhat effective. Can he be completely grounded and not foreign or foreign?

For the sake of the storyline, it's too deliberate and grinding.

It's all boring to make some small money, a waste of expressions

Ah, the author's writing style is really good, but you're not quite sure about the subject. . A bit humble and too cautious. Come on! I think your writing style is OK.

Is it Wei Cangyue or Ding Cangyue?

Pretty good. But the pace is a bit slow. Recommend it

It's getting more and more confusing. I'm rambling here and there and I don't know what to write.

There is no monthly pass for a chapter and very few book reviews! I'll go take a look. If it's good, I'll come back and comment.