I Just Became an Immortal, and My Inner Core Was Stolen from the Start
刚成仙，开局就被夺了内丹
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 715k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
323Chapters
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After reading the protagonist's psychology and system in the first chapter, I dare to say that the protagonist is a seductress type Long Aotian protagonist, who must be biased towards the human race and slay demons. If what I said is wrong, feel free to scold me. I will not reply or delete the post.
Author, I have a few creative ideas that I would like you to write down. Starting as Superman, the whole world is kryptonite, starting as Iron Man, with an IQ of 50, and starting as Batman, Wayne is bankrupt.
The comments section said that the witch is probably mentally ill. The protagonist's perception is that he is a person. He was a person who traveled through time, but he was not originally a beast. Why do you say this? If you time-travel and become a cat, you think you are a cat, not a human. You guys have a lot of brains. But this novel is really good. It is obvious that the protagonist is a time traveler, but after reading more than ten chapters, it feels like it is written like a native pig. In the previous chapter, the Dragon King Jinghe behaved like a time traveler, but in the next chapter, the protagonist is described like an aborigine. Really, except for the plot of Jinghe Dragon King, other descriptions I think he is just a native pig. He is not like a time traveler. Did you copy a book about aborigines? Then add a time traveler setting, but change it to look different 😅
Ask for leave
At the time of autumn harvest, the author needs to take care of several acres of thin farmland at home. I hope readers will be patient and will update again when I return to Spring City!
It looks so good, why did you finish it?
The name of this book is also ridiculous. If it is hot, it means there is a real ghost.
Edit it, why are there not the first few chapters? ?
The wrong chapter was sent and cannot be retrieved, 😭
Why are you going to beat other people's children if you can't beat them after being chopped down by an old wolf? Our justice system binds people and it is also popular for fathers to pay their debts to their children? Generally speaking, Long Aotian's novels have to spend a few sentences describing the child as a playboy who bullies men and dominates women before he is hacked to death by the protagonist. Is this appropriate for you?
After reading a chapter, what you wrote is not a monster, but a human being, and you actually look down on a monster with the body of an earthly immortal? The little monster doesn't even eat it, it's so awesome