The Perfect Immortal of the Xuanmen, Lingzhuzi

Not quite. First of all, he was given a magic weapon by Taiyi, and he went to recognize Nuwa as his backer. As a result, when Yun Zhongzi wanted to help refine the treasure, he asked her to make a flying needle designed to poke people's eyes. The author believes that there is no right or wrong method. I think it is too low-priced to have two saints as backers to do so wretchedly. I am really afraid that even a magic weapon for escaping is better than this thing. The second issue is the writing style. For example, going back to Chentangguan to show off to Li Jing - despair, let me show you what state I am in. You will never be able to reach it in your life, right? Anyway, I feel awkward. To sum up, it is a pretentious and obscene fantasy disguised in ancient times.

Nezha himself is indeed naughty. As an adult who is a time traveler, if you can still make the relationship so rigid, that's your problem.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

I really can't think of any kind of scumbag or vulgar cultivator that would appear in Nezha.

What I want to see is a cute young lady, not a greasy young man who pretends to be a bitch.

If you don't practice the magic power of protecting the Dharma, it will be considered the best. Qingyun is much better than physical resistance

The protagonist has so many restrictions. What the hell, what kind of strength is the saint? He can't solve the soul. Seeing so many restrictions, I know that this book will not be popular, especially if it looks uncomfortable.

There are typos in the introduction. What the hell is Marshal Tianpeng? You can't call him Tianpeng just because he is a pig.

? ? ? ? ? ? When La Zhucai was shaping the lotus body, you didn't know Yang Erlang, right? Moreover, Yang Erlang has not yet been granted the title of True Monarch, so Yang Chan calls her the Third Holy Mother! It's inexplicable that you, the second creation, also understand the timeline.

Read the introduction. This book not only licks monkeys, but also licks pigs.