Don't Panic, I'm Loading a Save

The moment the boss appeared, everyone had already guessed the ending, and yet you were still going on and on with the emotional manipulation—it was so awkward. The setup lacked any twists and turns and felt very formulaic.

Dude, you've written so many books, and most of them have been abandoned or poorly finished. Logically, you should have learned something from that experience. Your timeline book was quite good, so why did it turn out like this?

I think the timeline the author wrote is excellent; it even moved me to tears. It shows the author's skill, and I hope the author can maintain this level of writing. Does the author still remember the following sentence?

I'll say it again! You've already proven your skill with this one-hit kill story within the timeline, so keep writing! Update more often, keep at it, and your readership will grow; you'll gain more confidence! Don't abandon it! I wouldn't have even noticed you have a new book if I hadn't happened to pass by today! (▼皿▼#)

After the second time he appeared as Li Tan, it was like the story suddenly accelerated. In an instant, Shen Yi became a henchman. Around chapter 10, the big boss appeared. Then, within a few chapters, the big boss was redeemed. I felt like I wasn't reading a novel, but rather an outline. To be honest, the first 30 chapters had a really good premise and the characters were fine. It's just that around chapter 50, there were too many plot twists that felt too sudden and lacked buildup.

The settings inside are so good, why not just put a portion of it there?

... The writing is alright, but the protagonist's multiple body-possession setup is pretty weak. It feels like a pollution to me, a bit inhuman. I doubt there will be a female lead later on; if there were, it would be very toxic.

The beginning was alright, but the skill level plummeted after the Stand Natsu episode...

The protagonist's biggest wish so far is the 300,000 he paid for his daughter. Now that the Divine Legacy Squad has rewound and has his memories, money shouldn't be a problem, right? After all, many wishes boil down to a lack of money. In my opinion, they could easily investigate a few people who are short of money, have the Divine Legacy Squad control them and kill the protagonist, then take the…

I clicked in and saw the ending, and everyone's complaining about how bad it was. Does anyone have anything to say about it?